Schneider Ambergris

[giobsar]

Name:Schneider Ambergris
Age: 23
Race: Human
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Height: 5"9
Weight: 185 lbs
*Occupation: Bounty Hunter

*Personality: Prefers not to talk, if he doesn't have to. Having friends are okay with him, as long as they don't get in his way. He doesn't rush with anything, likes to be precise and accurate.

Appearance: black hair, and blue eyes. wears a long scarf around his neck, it can be used as mask, when his job requires him to go into smoky terrain. wears a brown leather armor,with a iron scale plate on top

History: Schneider as a child had everything he could ever want, because both his parents were high ranked Assassins. because of this he had a great love for money, for this is all his parents ever gave him, thinking it could replace the time they could spend with him. being born of an assassin family he had great potential, and was trained by his own experiences living alone. He never saw his parents, they would always just send the money via messengers. He joined a local bounty hunter's build hoping one of the bounties are his parents.

Skills:
-can use Lightning magic.
*cast lightning from his fingers, maximum range 4 feet,causes minor shock damage, and burn damage on exposed skin
*add the lightning attribute to his sword. lasts for 2 minutes,can be used again after 2o minutes
* he can only use his magic for a total of 6times a day,
-Basic Swordsmanship skills
-Stealth
*easily hides in the dark
Equipment:
-brown leather chestplate, and armguards, with iron plating
-double-edged iron sword
-small pack filled with herbs, and bandages
-flask for drinking water

[Taskmienster]

hey hey, welcome to the site. Just a few edits are necessary in order to get this character approved and get you loose on the site.


Lightning Magic :: In order to have a spell, or a type of magic listed we need to have all the details added in. So, for lightning magic, if you want a particular spell that is attributed to that kind of magic you have to tell me what kind of spell. For level 0, you'll be allowed to have a couple spells. You can, for instance, have a spell that allows you to shoot a small arch of lightning. This spell can cause minor burns to exposed skin, and on contact with unarmored body parts it could cause a slight numbing sensation. The spell can be cast instantly, at a target that is at most five feet away, and only twice in a battle or quest.

That is what we're looking for with magic. What it does, how many times you can cast it, and how far it is able to be used.

Swordsmanship skill for now can at most, be only above average ability.

Stealth :: if you want this skill, you can have it at below average stealth, sneaking around as long as the situation allows it and you are able to realistically hide and sneak.

Double-edged sword can be iron or steel for now.

[giobsar]

i edited it already

[Taskmienster]

Alrighty, just a few more things.

You have armor listed in your appearance, but not listed as "armor" or in the "equipment" section. Add the armor into the equipment or armor section for me please. Right now, you can have leather armor with iron scale plate over it, on your chest and upper arms. Nothing else part of the armor at this point. You can buy more or get more as a spoil later on.

The lightning spell can only cause minor shock damage, and burn damage on contact with exposed skin. Add that in after the range of the spell.

The sword lightning can last for a couple minutes, or a couple turns in a battle. Add that in after that ability.

I would also like if you could change the uses from 10 to 6 times for now.

The sword also needs to be iron metal for now.

[giobsar]

Edited

[Taskmienster]

"Right now, you can have leather armor with iron scale plate over it, on your chest and upper arms. Nothing else part of the armor at this point. You can buy more or get more as a spoil later on."

That's the armor that you should edit with the armor. Just put the words, chestplate and arm guards.

Lightning blade can only last 2 minutes, not 5. And you can reduce the cool down to 20 minutes from 2 hours if you'd like.

[giobsar]

thanks for the help in my profile

[Taskmienster]

Alrighty, no worries mate. That's why I'm here. Now that everything's set and ready, you're free to go on your merry way and get some story's going with other people on the site. If you need any help with anything in the future, feel free to ask any members of the staff and we'll be happy to help.

Approved.