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uttam123
07-11-10, 08:43 PM
Name: Selglend Goldstones aka Shade
Age: 19
Race: Elf
Hair Color: Pitch black ( covered )
Eye Color: Lambant Green ( only part of face that can be seen )
Height: 10'4 ( he drank alot of milk )
Weight: 290 pnds very skinny not very musculer except a 6 pac and avg pecs
*Occupation: Hitman or Assassin

*Personality: He is a Lone Wolf Doesn't like understanding with other people.
He extremely dislikes rich people and occasionally goes into the slums and helps the poorer people out.Is very Valiant will never leave a man behind.Can be gentle sometime but he is very aggressive and Brutal when it comes to combat.


Appearance: He is a tall good built with a 6 pack and has ice cold eyes.
He wears a robe to cover his armor and weaponry. He dislikes being seen so he usually turns into a shade so no one can see him. Only part of his face that can be seen by anyone when he has a robe on is his terrifying lambant eyes and his hands and feet.

History: As a Slum from the Poorest district possible he has tons of character and has much hatred toward the rich.He grew up in the steps of his big brother who was a great warrior who died in battle. As he was raised he learned that power is not all that u need what is important is speed and abilities not raw strength.

Skills: Shade has many skills only specific to Assassins he is terrible with a sword . He has a very good and accurate aim and can run along time which also makes him perfect to be a messenger. Since he grew up in the slums he cannot use much magic but the ones his mom taught him secretly.

Some of them is that he has the power to control darkness or basic darkness manipulation.

He can make ice and use it as a form for basic ice manipulation.


As i said he has the Stealth ability to fight without being seen

He can Clone himself only once for a short amount of time.
He substitutes to dodge one life threatening attack only before he will he will dodge the attack and get some health back.

Also when he is in shadow form or a shade u can still sense him so its not overpowering he has a dark aura coming from him even if hes in stealth.

He also the Lambent martyr trick i like to call it he can throw a dagger or something even his clone the bigger the stronger the effect is at his opponent and it will blow up and spurt poison everywhere there will be recoil and i will vulnerable for maybe a few moments it is minor poisen effects.

He also has the fast getaway ability to run fast away to dodge attacks or get ready for any other moves.

One of his most valuable skills is contacting with the animal life to help him for a short period that discloses his companion only smalll life for a short amount of time for now


Equipment: 2 Poison-Tipped daggers, Throwing knifes that he can dip in his deadly poison that kills extremely fast. Has armor is steel but feels like nothing but act like heavy armor it has 1 poison holding case, 2 dagger holsters that will not break by the poisen tipped in the daggers 10 spots for throwing knives that go outside his robe it is a assassin robe that covers everything but the eyes hands and feet it will show the 2 daggers but will not have the poison bag shown. He has a bag of tools and instant medical kit for minor treatments and he also has a talisman of protection where he get increased defense and it can befall one attack that will kill shade. Poison to make shades enemy nauseous at this point, weakening him, sapping some of his energy, but not killing.

*Familiars: He has a Eagle as a companion which can communicate with him with a connection they have.
To soars in the air and can spot stuff for him when he needs something found.
is a perfect scout and has some extra daggers and poison on him for some extra weaponry

Letho
07-14-10, 07:04 AM
We're going to have to work together a bit to get this through the Realm of Greeting. Let's start with your skills.

First off, I'd like you to separate all your skills so each one gets its own paragraph. Then I need you to elaborate on them. Specifically:

Controlling Darkness - What exactly can he do with it and at what range? Is it your basic darkness spell, or is there more to it? I would suggest basic darkness manipulation at this point, where he can darken a small area around himself or something along those lines, but it's up to you.

Ice Making - Same as above. You should only be able to make/manipulate small amounts of ice for now, enough to make a couple of projectiles or freeze a small area.

Stealth - I'm afraid this is a bit overpowered. You cannot teleport at this point and you should only be about 1.5 times as fast as a normal human. As for cloning, I'm going to allow it, but only if you can do it once per battle (or once every hour in a quest). Also, the clone should vanish after taking a strike.

Lambent Trick - The blast and the effects of the poison should be rather minor at this point.

Contacting Animals - Only small/medium sized woodland creatures for now, and only one at a time.


Onto equipment:

Any weapons/armor you might have can only be made from basic materials for now, like iron, steel or studded leather. The poison's effect cannot be able to kill extremely fast at this point. I will allow the poison to make your enemy nauseous at this point, weakening him, sapping some of his energy, but not killing.



Make those edits to your profile and post here when you're done so I can review it again.

uttam123
07-14-10, 08:20 AM
first ty u for checking mine it hasnt bin checked for a while ill do the changes srry for not elaborateing i lookad at other posts and was ment all to be minor until i leval atleast.

uttam123
07-14-10, 09:33 AM
also after wht happens after we level? where do we post it? and do we get to make it up ourselfs?:D:D:D

also can i make 2 chars ?

and send them both in the same quest or battle ?e

Letho
07-15-10, 04:58 AM
Once you get enough EXP points (2,000 to be exact), you advance to level 1. Then you can make a new thread in the Character Updates (http://www.althanas.com/world/forumdisplay.php?f=8) subforum in which you update your profile with stronger/new skills/weapons. EXP points are awarded at the end of a completed thread after a judge has reviewed it. Once you complete a thread, there is a "Submit Thread for Judging" link at the bottom of pretty much every post in your thread, so it's easy to do so.

You can make as many characters as you want, but you need to make a new account for each of them and get them approved in here. Also, there's nothing stopping you from getting them both in the same battle/quest/whatever. But keep in mind that Althanas is most fun when you're playing with others and not yourself. ;)


Anyways, you are approved. Thank you for your cooperation and welcome to Althanas. If you have any further questions, feel free to PM me or any other moderator. We're here to help.