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Aiko
09-04-10, 07:58 PM
Name: Calbrena
Age: 21
Race: Devil (highly evolved demon)
Hair color: Black (calm, normal emotional states) White (Enraged)
Eye Color: Black (calm, normal emotional states) Red (enraged)
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 135 Lbs
Occupation: The Deadly Sin of Corruption

Personality: Calbrena is Chaos, rarely thinking, rarely planning beyond the immediate future. She has devoted herself to the paths of darkness, and refuses any attempts at salvation, redemption, or any other method of “saving her”. She is what she desires to be. It is difficult to predict what exactly Calbrena will do next, due to her chaotic mindset, constantly changing her plans, altering her desires.

Appearence: Calbrena has two slightly differing appearences.

When she's calm, or in a relatively normal state, she has black hair, shiny black horns, four great wings, and dull red skin. Her horns come out of the top of her head and branch, one set curving up in classic fashion, the other set curving down like a ram's horns. Her wings are of a similar fashion. Both sets connect to the same muscles in her back, but branch out from there. Her claws are as they've always been, kept nice and sharp, like small daggers on the end of her fingers. Her tail swishes about on its own.

When Calbrena becomes enraged, her skin becomes like the embers of a fire. Her hair and her horns glow white hot, and her wings seem to burn. Her eyes go from black to red instantly. This isn't just for looks, she will deliver painful burns to anyone that touches her, and leave a trail of burn marks in whatever surface she's walking on. This state is affected by Hellfire Conditions. When Hellfire Conditions is active, Hellfire will radiate from her presence.

History: Calbrena is the daughter of Aiko, and the powerful Demon God known as Grandfather. She is kin to The Seven Deadly Sins. When Calbrena was young, Grandfather feared what she might become, and so killed her in her sleep one night. To his chagrin, her soul fled into her mother's tiara of insanity, and thus was beyond his reach forever, or so it seemed.

Her mother's story is a short one, she fled Grandfather and The Seven Deadly sins, and while trying to repair her doll, edward, died under mysterious circumstances. Grandfather thought that was the end of things, and went on to ally himself with a force known as The Dark Man.

But things it seems, has a way of coming back to haunt those who perpetrate foul deeds, and on a dark and stormy night in Dheathain, a bolt of golden white lightning shot into Aiko's body, taking it away, splitting the tiara in the process.

Calbrena was free. There are many mysteries in this world, and some it seems, will never be known, at least not right away, and one of them is the mystery of what happened to Calbrena after that. Reports tell of a cute little girl growing up to be a beautiful young woman amidst a troupe of dancers, one of which acted as the young girls mother. Others tell of a frightening demon child that raged through cities and towns leaving death in her wake.
Still, it's the fact that these different tails are all generally within fifty miles of one another that make others think it's the same woman.

After journeying around, she returned to her family, and learned Grandfather's true name. Xith'Rith'Xail, the demon god. After an attempt at corruption went wrong due to the interference of the Orlouge family, Calbrena decided to quest after a legendary power thought to be uncontrollable, sealed away for centuries. Much to the chagrin of her own brothers and sisters, and the horror of her father, and the terror of the holy forces of Althanas, Calbrena succeeded in gaining the unattainable powers of The Eternal Hellfire. Now that she's been empowered and improved by its dark flames, she's set out to burn her mark upon the world forever more.
Skills:

Spirits of The Eternal Hellfire: This in and of itself is not a skill, but it is what has given Calbrena her new skills. When her spirit merged with those of The Eternal Hellfire, it chose her as its vessal to carry it forth into the world. So merged, all of Calbrena's previous skills vanished, save for a few, her knowledge and skills replaced by those Hellfire has given her.

Offensive Skills:

Demon's Rage: Taught to her by The Eternal Hellfire, and trained in its usage by The Deadly Sin of Wrath, this technique teaches Calbrena to save up her anger, and bottle every petty irritation that comes her way. In any other species, this technique is unadvisable, but in Demons, like Calbrena, it allows them to release all their anger at once, like an exploding Volcano. What this actually does for Calbrena, is double all her physical attributes for 2 minutes. However, after the 2 minutes, Calbrena becomes slow and lethargic, highly susceptible to any and all attacks.

Demon's Rage also causes her to take her enraged form, causing first degree burns just by holding her for 15 seconds. Holding flammable objects will cause them to catch on fire, and she leaves a trail of scorch marks behind her. According to the normal rules of her Fire Aura, despite the scorch marks, and the appearance of burning wings, she's not actually on fire, she's just extrordinarily hot.

Demon's Fist: Gone is the dancing she originally fought with. It has been replaced with Demon's Fist, a standard Martial Arts style available only to demonkind. Hellfire has caused her to become Above Average with this style.

Secrets of the Drunken Masters: Among the spirits consumed by Hellfire, are those who knew various styles of fighting, whose execution actually benefited from being drunk. When sober, these same styles were poor and almost useless. These styles have been made known to Calbrena, thus when drunk, she is almost as deadly as she is sober. With this she is below-average.

Magic powers:

Fire Aura: This power never vanished, but it was altered substantially. Now normal fire burns from Calbrena constantly when she chooses to have it do so, and this consumes no energy. However, it also is an illusion. Yet, if Calbrena chooses, than twice per day, she can make the flames real for one full minute, and they act as normal fire, unless Hellfire Conditions are in effect.

Fireball: Calbrena can through a ball of fire four times per day. Affected by Hellfire Conditions.

Essence of the Dark Djinn: Calbrena can grant the wishes of others if she so chooses. This power cannot work, unless a proper contract has been written out, stating EXACTLY what will happen. Each contract differs by situation. As always, be careful what you wish for, you might just get it. However, this power is weak within Calbrena at the moment, and unlike her older, more powerful and experienced siblings, she can only grant minor wishes.

Hellfire Conditions: By far the single most important aspect of Calbrena's new powers. Once per day, Calbrena can call upon Hellfire in its truest form. This fire burns with far greater intensity and power than any other fire. It appears black, with a red outline. This fire is pure destruction incarnate, and not even most water can stop it, as Hellfire will burn even under the deepest ocean. The only way to actively stop it is to use Holy powers on it, or douse it with Holy Water. Most folks don't have that, but they needen't fear though. Hellfire is weak, never having been used before. With its current strength, which is also Calbrena's strength, it burns everything it touches for a whole 30 seconds before vanishing. Adamantine is immune to this of course. When Calbrena has activated this ability, it must be used in conjunction with her other powers, or it is useless.

Curse: Neither altered, nor removed by Hellfire, this power was enhanced, to allow Calbrena to curse not only people, but objects and areas as well. No curse lasts more than a day. No curse is more significant than lowering an opponent’s skills by one step.

Demonhide: Calbrena is a demon, but lacks the legendary toughness of even the inferior demons that live in Haidia. Presently her skin is only leathery, nothing more.

Demon Claws: Her claws are as Steel when she is in Demon Form.
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Wings: She has no skills in flying, her wings being too weak to carry her for any distance. She can glide for thirty feet though.

Equipment:
Amulet of Castus Malum: Marks her as a priestess of Castus Malum, serving the Dark Gods of Althanas. It allows her to go to and from Castus Malum at will, but not in battle. Gained here (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?t=20230)

Set of clothes: It involves a pair of shorts and a shirt, and a leather duster with Delyn plates sewn into it. Gained here (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?t=20191)

Familiar:

Spirits of The Eternal Hellfire:

Manifests as disembodied voices that echoes around her. It will give her advice, according to the collective knowledge and wisdom of all the souls it has collected. If Calbrena kills someone, it has a small five percent chance to absorb a piece of their soul, adding their knowledge and wisdom to its collective.

Aiko
09-04-10, 08:04 PM
I apologize, for being so generous with her skills. I know, there is work to be done, but I had reached a point where I could not continue on my own.

Letho
09-05-10, 05:27 AM
Alright, let's get this show on the road.

First, I need you to remove two of your powers, one of which must be from the magic section. The only reason why I'm allowing even this much is because you lost some abilities from your last profile.

In Demon Rage, make it so that someone must hold her for about 15 seconds before suffering the burns. Also, drop the duration to two minutes.

Fireball, drop it to four times a day.

Wish Granting has way too much potential for abuse. I want you to make it so she can grant minor wishes for now. Like someone wants some money, she can grant them a pouch of gold, not a vault filled with the stuff.

Hellfire Conditions: one minute of unquenchable flames is too much as you can pretty much kill anything by roasting it for one full minute. Drop it to 30 seconds.

Aiko
09-05-10, 10:37 AM
Done and done.

For quick reference: Dropped Her wall crawler ability, and her sinful presence.

Letho
09-05-10, 12:51 PM
You didn't drop the duration of Demon Rage to two minutes. Fix that and you'll be set to go.

Aiko
09-05-10, 05:57 PM
whoops, in all honesty, I thought I had. It's done now though.

Letho
09-06-10, 05:43 AM
What this actually does for Calbrena, is double all her physical attributes for 2 minutes. However, after the five minutes, Calbrena becomes slow and lethargic, highly susceptible to any and all attacks.A bit of a contradiction there?

Aiko
09-06-10, 10:14 AM
I sincerely neither thought of, nor noticed that part.

Letho
09-06-10, 04:10 PM
That's why I'm here.

You are approved. Thank you for your cooperation and welcome to the next level.