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[Dane]

Name: Dane Ironhand
Age: 17
Race: Jumi
Hair Color: Light Grey
Eye Color: Crimson
Height: 6 ft.
Weight: 166 lbs.

Occupation: Prince, Dark Knight

Personality: Dane is quite often calm, quiet, and cold. He will hardly show some sort of emotion and his face will continually to remain the same. At times a smirk can be seen, but the origins of this slight smile is normally twisted.

Appearance: Dane is tall and slender, but slightly toned. His skin is naturally tanned. The iris of his eye is a dark shade of red. His hair is shaggy and light grey to a shaded white. The features of his body are smooth out of youth. He is normally seen in a black outfit made of a tunic and loose trousers. These are embroidered with silver colored designs that present his nobility.

While suited for battle, Dane is covered in black armor dressed over his typical wear. The armor is quite bulky and represents Dane’s mentality on the battlefield perfectly. The shoulders are layered until finally coming out round with a spike coming off from each to rise to his height. The chest is layered by a detailed full chest piece. This is the same for his armor covering his legs, arms, and thigh. The remaining exposed areas are layered with individual pieces of plate to maintain protection and flexibility. His helmet is horned and made to cover his head in the same bulky way, but with a sliding piece to move when needed to protect his face.

The design of this armor is to depict fear and will give of a natural illusion that Dane is much larger than he actually is.

History: Dane Ironhand is the son of Emperor Zain Ironhand and Empress Thalia Ironhand. Being born into that nobility, he was given the title of prince, but was shared amongst his sibling and twin, Saiya. A shared concept that boils within Dane. The imperial family that he came from were the rulers of the Castol Empire of Castol, a small region off the southern coast of Kebiras. It shared the sea there with three other islands.

Dane, being prince, grew with an already predestined future. He was to excel at imperial tradition and follow in the footsteps as a warrior and a leader, so that one day he was to be emperor of Castol. It was a heavy weight for any one man to ever carry and yet, Dane was forced upon with its encumbrance throughout his childhood. Surprisingly, it was something that he welcomed with open arms and looked upon it with pride.

After years of training since childhood, and the occasional battles against rebels., Dane has finally been released from his upon graduating the military academy, so that he can take his place at the side of his father to rule Castol…

Skills:

Blood Weapon (5): The ability allows Dane to imbue his sword with Dark Magic, so that every strike done, he will leech the life from his opponent to replenish his own.

Stone (1): This ability allows Dane to manipulate the Earth around him. At such a low a level, it takes quite the concentration for him to even push a rock across the ground.

Water (1): This ability allows Dane to manipulate the Water around him. At such a low level, it takes quite the concentration to even cause ripples in a puddle.

Aero (1): This ability allows Dane to manipulate the Wind around him. At such a low level, it takes quite the concentration to even push a breeze through the air.

Items:

Steel Great Sword: A steel two handed sword.

Iron Burgonet: An iron helmet that has been blackened.

Iron Cuirass: An iron cuirass that has been blackened.

Iron Gauntlets: Iron gloves that have been blackened.

Iron Flanchard: Iron leggings that have been blackened.

Iron Sollerets: Iron boots that have been blackened.

NPC:

Name: Brisk
Age: 57
Race: Gyren
Hair Color: Grey skin / Black fur
Eye Color: Yellow
Height: 9’3” ft.
Weight: 543 lbs.

Occupation: Bodyguard

Appearance: Brisk, like most Gyren, is a huge muscular beastial. They stand on two legs that are shorter than most creatures of that height. Their torso is broad and thick. Their heads are normally flat in the front, much like that of a cat, and their fur creates a thick mane around their face that climbs down to the middle of their back. The rest of their body is a thick hide that is a dull color compared to their pelts. They have a tail that is rumored to be a weapon of theirs just as a leg or arm would be. Their narrow eyes and fanged teeth are natural.

Brisk can always be seen wearing a full set of black armor and carrying a massive axe.

*The points next to the skills are rated form 0 to 20. 5 is of being Average.

[Letho]

You can have up to four abilities at registration, so either lock or remove two. Also, a bit more clarification on what the numbers mean would be great. I mean, what does it mean that his fire manipulation ability is at 3? How much fire can he manipulate, how much damage can he do with it, how many times can he use it, that sort of thing.

Also, seeing as you have a full body armor, I have to ask you to make it iron.

And lastly, Brisk is a bit too powerful for a level zero familiar. Walking into a battle with a 9-foot behemoth as a support is a bit unfair to other players of your level. I would rather if you registered him as a NPC. You wouldn't be able to use him in a battle with other players, but you could use him in all your quests just fine. Then at a later level, you may promote him to full familiar if you desire to do so.

[Dane]

Done. I didn't know where to register an NPC, so I just labeled NPC on the form until I can do it later on.

[Letho]

It's fine, this is usually how people register NPCs.

The description of your armor pieces is a bit contradictory, since it says it's iron, but under description it still says steel.

Also, you don't need to have your skills at 1. If on your scale from 1-20, 5 is average, you can have them at five. And make them a bit more powerful. For example, under Stone, I would allow you to manipulate a head-sized stone as if it was handled by hand. Similarly, under Aero you would be allowed to manipulate weaker gusts instead of just breezes, and under Water you could create waves instead of ripples.

[Dane]

Fixed, and they are meant to be extremly low and not of average.

[Letho]

Your call.

At any rate, you are approved. Thank you for your cooperation and welcome to Althanas. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to contact me or any other moderator.