The Golem Army

[Zack Blaze]

So yeah, I'm looking for 2-3 people to help me find a sleeping army of golems deep beneath Raiaera.

What's in it for your character? I'm sure you guys and Zack can work something out.

Who's in?

[Zack Blaze]

Okay, apparently you guys want something trivial....like details.

Neosaim Hyakureiki was notorious for being able to stop his foes from conquering the world through various means. One of these foes planned to revive a golem army in order to take over Althanas. Neosaim not only stopped him, but sent the flying factory that held the golems crashing into the ground.

This is where we come in, Zack hears tell of the deactivated golems surviving, and the factory is somewhere deep underneath Ettermire. As such, Zack goes on his merry little way to go and see what the big hooplah is about the golems.

Your character can either hear the same story Zack has heard, and go on to do their own thing to meet up with Zack later, or you can just happen into Zack and ask him what he's doing. I don't care.

Now I ask again, who's in?

[MetalDrago]

Eh... Why not?

[Ganlon Martel]

Hey I'm farily new at this but I go as long as I can get a little guidance.

[Hysteria]

I'll tag along if you'll have me.

Drago, we could make this a request from Lorenor to try and capture the golem army, or in not possible destroy it? It'd give us a reason to introduce our characters.

EDIT: just read Lor's fairwell, it could still work *shrug*

[Zack Blaze]

All three of you are more than welcome to join.

Look forward to it.

Also, the thread is up in Ettermire.

[Hysteria]

Yo Ganlon, your first post was good, but its hard to read in one big block. You should work in some paragraph breaks. I try to have each paragraph being around five sentences so the reader can have a break.

[Ganlon Martel]

Hysteria,

I think I got the idea now. Hope this is easier on the eyes for every one. Thanks.

Hey do we go in order for the process or is there a polite protocol on how we write in the thread?

[MetalDrago]

Just one little error from skimming the post, you have a triple space right before your final paragraph

I'll work on a post tonight, so I can join in on this little thing too

[Hysteria]

Hysteria,

I think I got the idea now. Hope this is easier on the eyes for every one. Thanks.

Hey do we go in order for the process or is there a polite protocol on how we write in the thread?

Generally we'll follow the same post order, so after MD posts it'll be:

Zack Blaze
Ganlon Martel
Hysteria
MetalDrago
Zack Blaze
Ganlon Martel

and so on. It won't normally change unless someone can't post, or goes inactive (which will normally be talked about in here before we skip them).

[Ganlon Martel]

Just one little error from skimming the post, you have a triple space right before your final paragraph

I'll work on a post tonight, so I can join in on this little thing too

Thanks, I'll get it before too long. Look forward to reading your post.

[Zack Blaze]

Next post is up guys.

Essentially, the arrows aren't coming down all at one time, but slowly in a 'pushing towards the back' fashion. Like a boulder going down a hall. It won't hit everybody at once, but it may get everyone eventually. I hope I'm clear enough in the description.

Essentially, all but one of the four books Zack read aloud are traps (Of course, if you want to make up your own title and make it a trap and/or the way out, thats up to you). But one book is the way out. While I don't care who posts next, I would prefer it if each of you grabbed a book and created your own kind of trap for the library to have. I also want one of you to pick the right book, shifting the bookshelf upwards and creating a path of stairs leading down into the dungeon.

Which one of you does it, I don't care, I'm trying to allow you guys to be versatile and creative here.

[Ganlon Martel]

I'll be happy to add another trap and if any one would like Ganlon is willing to heal anyone a trap hurts.

[Hysteria]

Is the idea that we find the entrence when pushed to the back of the libary?

I was thinking of taking a book and keeping it to use in a later quest, I may do that and trigger a trap.

[Zack Blaze]

Once again looking for your own input on what your imagination can fathom what happens after the next step.

Is it a trap? Is it just a broken light? Will it illuminate the entire golem factory? Just what can you come up with for what happens next? I'm interested.

Also, if your character wouldn't take the reins, and that includes all of you, Zack will take the next step. I just figured I'd let imagination run rampant.

If you guys don't like the way I'm running this (Allowing you to come up with your own stuffs), just let me know and I'll make it more linear. I just feel its more fun when you have the vast expansions of your mind to work with.

[Ganlon Martel]

Hey just wondering is this quest dead?

[MetalDrago]

Sorry. Seems I forgot to post. I'll get to work on it ASAP.

[Hysteria]

*pulls out a chainsaw*

"One false move and thread gets it."

Zack... I was liking this thread, care to continue?

[Zack Blaze]

I'd like nothing better, Hysteria.

[Ganlon Martel]

*raises hand quietly*
May I play too?

[Zack Blaze]

Go ahead, you two are free to continue posting on, I'll talk to Drago as to whether or not he still wants in.

[Hysteria]

Well, I had the last post, Ganlon the second last. If Drago is non-respondent or can't continue, then mayhap you'd post? :p

[Zack Blaze]

Yeah, Drago's out, meaning I've got to find a decent way to write him out and continue the story. I'll have something up today at some point.

[Ganlon Martel]

Awesome, I mean about having something up not about Drago.

[Hysteria]

Walk through the door and have it suddenly disappear before he could enter? Or maybe have it sense something about his race and teleport him away?

[Zack Blaze]

I figured something out, maybe we can elaborate on the teleporting him out later.

If you need me to edit something about my post, Hys, I'd be glad to. I just thought it'd be nifty to make something out of what you created. I you have some pre-ordained plans for the stars though, I'll change my post up.

[Hysteria]

A few subtle jabs at Talen I see :P

*slaps Zack with a leather glove*

Very well Sir, I accept your challenge.

The post looks fine IMO.