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giga123
01-12-11, 06:34 PM
Name: Wolf the Explorer
Age: 10612
Race: Dark Elf
Hair Color: Cannot be seen, but is Black
Eye Color: Toxic Green
Height: 6'8"
Weight: 186
Occupation: Infamous Assassin

Personality: Wolf has a very serious personality, even though he is a very sagacious person in a way, his ways were diluted differently nonetheless. His appearance gives off a very different look, being one of the few Assassins left and that are known to most guards.
Wolf is most famous especially for no one knowing his real name and appearance, only his eyes. A man of few words, Wolf makes each and every word he says count.

Appearance: Wolf would appear to be a fully robed dark person, nothing is of view, but his fully robed and hooded person, the only part of his body showing is his eyes. He would appear to be covered in brown blackish cover that fits an assassin. Wolf would be almost muffling his voice as his mouth and nose is covered, but his eyes still are like his entire body by themselves. None of his weapons or armor is visible, all are covered in his robe.

History: The dark twisted days of sitting in the alley watching people walk away from him, his name unknown, he had to fend for himself. No one knew he lived for years in that place, no one knew he was a Dark Elf. His debut only started with pain and anger as he was taken in by a trainer who died after signing everything he owned to him. The man never named him, calling him that kid or etc. Wolf soon tore out of the world as an Assassin, training in the arts for centuries, honing his skills, making him a powerful threat. He explored only though, memorizing every single possible area and making his memory powerful. He then started his onslaught, doing every job he got and even as a Dark Elf made his way into any city and made himself able. My name is Wolf, and this is my story.

Skills:


Invisibility: Wolf has the power to disappear into the shadows, his main use of the Assassination tactics. He can easily disappear into thin air and be virtually unsee-able to the man, this also makes him faster by .5, but if he goes too fast, the enemy can hear the sound and react. He can hold this for 15 seconds and doesn't make any noises when invisible. The back drop to this is that, if you can sense anything, you can sense him and it is also possible that you hear the only part that he does, the very slight breathing.

Dopellganger: Unlike the name, this ability allows Wolf to make an exact replica of himself, it will be able to do anything he does, but cannot talk and can only take one hit. When he dies, Wolf's sign the mysterious metal W with a thunderbolt striking it will come in his place and show that they got duped. The ability is bad because the clone has virtually no other weapon but two poison short swords, cannot use any abilities or anything.

Weiesturo: The move inflicts fear towards the opponent if they are of the same level, they will be scared of him and will emit bad things into their minds, forcing maybe a mental breakdown. If higher the fear slowly goes down and doesn't work for anything 4 or more levels higher. It works how his eyes will start growing more green and bright up and he will become the enemies worst nightmare, if they have full control of their emotions this can be avoided, but that would be very broad and high pressed to happen. The drawback is his eyes will continually get badder sight and his strength and defense is lowered by a bit, but his speed stays the same.



Equipment:

Two Steel Short Swords: He has two short swords engraved with the law of the Dark Elves which cause poison. Dipped in poison and having the aura of the Elves in them, they are carefully stored on his back unsee-able, each on has a steel chain behind them which can go for very far, and he can use them to spin the swords or attack long range.

Light Steel Armor: Hidden armor in his robes, even though they are seen useless, they are very helping in combat and saved Wolf from many die situations.

Hidden Blades: Wolf has two hidden blades that can come out with a swing of his wrist on the under side of his hands, his main assassination tools are these, covered with heavenly blood.

Throwing Knives: Wolf has hidden all around his body, knives that he can dip in poison and throw at the enemy.

Max Dirks
01-12-11, 08:43 PM
First off, welcome to Althanas, Wolf.

We only let new characters begin with three abilities. I count seven on yours: faster speed, better agility, the ability to create a bow from thin air, invisibility, Dopellganger, Weiesturo and Speciele. You'll have to take away at least four abilities right off the bat.

As written, invisibility, Weiesturo and Speciele are a bit too powerful for a level zero character. The ability to disappear, teleport behind an opponent, and attack with 3x speed would not be very fair to other level zero characters. So, if you'd like to keep those abilities, you'll have to tone them down. I'm fine with your character starting off with extra speed and agility, but in order to keep them you'd have to forfeit all of your other abilities.

Let me know what you'd like to do by editing your thread.

giga123
01-12-11, 10:15 PM
edited Max

Max Dirks
01-13-11, 09:54 AM
Dopellganger and Weiesturo are excellent now.

I still cannot let your character become invisible indefinetly though. If you add a time limit to it, maybe 5-10 seconds, I will approve your profile.

giga123
01-13-11, 04:08 PM
edited

Max Dirks
01-14-11, 05:07 AM
I'll let you go with 15 seconds.

Just don't bunny with the Weiesturo ability!

Approved.