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Karelinkski
05-24-11, 10:58 PM
Ok, so I've returned to Althanas after several failed attempts and a few years. I've also posted up a short solo intro. Here's the rub, I'm considerably less confident in my writing than I'd like to be. So if anyone is interested in perusing my story and offering up some criticisms before I do a final edit and submit it, I'd be much obliged. Story is in Underwood, titled New Beginnings and Lessons Learned.

Furthermore, as my current project is nearly complete, I'd be interesting in collaborating as I move forward. Anyone find my character interesting enough to work with? Any ideas for stories?