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Kiri
08-15-06, 11:46 PM
Name: Kiri Cuneo
Age: 19
Race: Human
Hair Color: Black on the top ;; Red on the bottom.
Eye Color: Green
Height: 5'5
Weight: 145lbs.

Appearance: Kiri's style is dark. While she's out and about she wears baggy camoflauge pants, her black DevilDriver t-shirt that has DevilDriver written in white and the bands symbol in red. She always wears her favorite shoes ;; her black low-topped converse. Kiri almost always has her long, dark hair down, unless she fights--then she pulls it up in a pony tail. Her beautiful green eyes sparkle in the light, and at night they seem as if they're a coal black; almost like she's evil.

History: There isn't much to tell about Kiri's history. Her parents were [and still are] happily married, she has two older brothers and a younger brother. Even though Kiri's a girl, her parents and brothers treated her like a boy; which is why she is able to fight so well and why she's a tomboy. When Kiri's two older brothers went to college she wanted to go in search of other good fighters.

Skills: Until she learns more, Kiri's only skills consist of fighting and being sneaky.

Equipment: Kiri's only possesions are her tiger claw knives, her dagger that she keeps hidden, and the clothes she's wearing. Once Kiri finds a way to get money she will purchase more items.

Cyrus the virus
08-16-06, 06:19 AM
Ah, a character with loving, alive parents. Delightful!

It sounds like I'm nitpicking, I know, but please include a line in equipment that says all of her weapons are made of steel.

Also, under skills, include how good a fighter she is. Like 'average' or something. Also, feel free to add another spell or skill if you like.

Kiri
08-16-06, 08:51 PM
Name: Kiri Cuneo
Age: 19
Race: Human
Hair Color: Black on the top ;; Red on the bottom.
Eye Color: Green
Height: 5'5
Weight: 145lbs.

Appearance: Kiri's style is dark. While she's out and about she wears baggy camoflauge pants, her black DevilDriver t-shirt that has DevilDriver written in white and the bands symbol in red. She always wears her favorite shoes ;; her black low-topped converse. Kiri almost always has her long, dark hair down, unless she fights--then she pulls it up in a pony tail. Her beautiful green eyes sparkle in the light, and at night they seem as if they're a coal black; almost like she's evil.

History: There isn't much to tell about Kiri's history. Her parents were [and still are] happily married, she has two older brothers and a younger brother. Even though Kiri's a girl, her parents and brothers treated her like a boy; which is why she is able to fight so well and why she's a tomboy. When Kiri's two older brothers went to college she wanted to go in search of other good fighters.

Skills: Until she learns more, Kiri's only skills consist of fighting and being sneaky. Her fighting skill is average.

Equipment: Kiri's only possesions are her tiger claw knives, her dagger that she keeps hidden, and the clothes she's wearing. Her dagger and knives are made of steel. Once Kiri finds a way to get money she will purchase more items.

Cyrus the virus
08-16-06, 08:57 PM
You should make edits to your first post rather than make a new one, it's easier that way ;)

It's not a big deal, though. But you need to edit in that she's an 'average' fighter, since different people have different levels of skill depending on potential, etc, bla bla. Just say she's average :p

Cyrus the virus
08-23-06, 12:13 AM
Ah, approved. Sorry for the wait. I hadn't realized you'd edited.