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Orious
08-17-06, 11:47 PM
Name: Orious De’lay Ventrue

Code Name: Satchet

Age: Seems around in his twenties somewhere

Sex: Male

Height: 6’0”

Weight: 196

Occupations: Assassin and terrorist. (Will work for money.)

Personality:

Orious or A.k.a. Satchet is a man of great charm even though you never see his facial remarks under his mask. He does what he believes is right for the people and only for the people. His will is strong and he’s willing to die for whatever he believes in. He’s a man that will never give up no matter the consequence.

Weapons:

The only weapons that Satchet has on him at the moment are three throwing daggers and three Hatchets made of strong Iron. These weapons are deadly and the only weapon he’ll ever need.

Armor:

The only sense of armor he has is his steel breast plate that hides underneath his clothing. His mask is made of iron just like his daggers. They protect his face from any harm.

Other Equipment:

His long black cape with a hat, Black clothing, and a few explosives if ever needed.

Appearance:

The man is completely dressed in black and not an ounce of his skin is showing. Hands are hidden by leather gloves and his face is covered by a Iron mask that’s always smiling and has pointed facial hair. On top his head is a hat and long locks of silky soft hair run down to his shoulders, straight as could be. Inside his coat holds his three daggers and three hatchets, his neck is hitched to a long cape.

Skills:

Dagger and Hatchet Professions:

Satchet is Fairly skilled with daggers and hatchets, they are his weapon of choice. Years of practice enabled him to throw with half decent aim and still misses here and there. Not only can he throw them averagly, but he also fights like a killing machine when wielded.

Hand to hand combat:

If the terrorist ever comes in a hot spot with out his daggers, there is no need to worry just yet, for he is skilled at hand to hand, but isnt a master at the art yet.. He was trained by a personal martial arts master who was well known during the day. Satchet's hands are trained to kill, not so much defend. Most of his attacks are pretty deadly. (This skill still needs some work)

Stealth:

To do what this man does, you need great stealth and always expecting the unexpected. His feet are as quiet as field mice and as light as a feather. Many years of practice took him to learn this skill and he still has much to learn about it. He’s stealthy enough to sneak behind a man and rid his throat, but is still detected once in awhile. He hasn't hit this skill perfect just yet.

History:

Satchet never really ever talks about his past and only a few know about it, for nobody discovered who was behind this mask of his. It all really started when Satchet was a rebel against the king and worked for a gang well known in Scara Brae. He was a handsome man and always got his way with his charm. Charm was his greatest weapon against his enemies, for he was a handsome as could be. His eyes were a beautiful hazel and his hair was fine.

One day while out on a secret mission, he was caught and captured by the guards and sent to jail. They demanded answers about who he worked for and where were they hiding out, but Satchet refused and therefore was tortured until he spoke up. The bad thing was, he never did. This man was to go three years in the cell being in painful situations. When he was refusing facts they got tired of him, So they just decided to kill him.

They figured he was dead when he bleed for awhile so they tossed him with all the others to rot. Some how, with some kind of miracle Satchet survived this horrible fate. How exactly he did, his will, he was too stubborn to die. He wouldn’t let himself go until he was sure that the king was dead.

That night he escaped and was announced dead for then on. He was no longer the man Orious, but Satchet, who now was a terrorist against the king’s laws. Hiding under a disguise that never leaves him, he set out to work for the gang once again as a new soul.

Now days, Satchet is more of a soloist and does whatever he pleases, but if a job is offering him money, he’s always up for it. He’ll kill any man or woman that gets in his way. There isn’t a night that goes by when he’s not reminded of his hideousness. There is no longer a hope for him to find his one lover he always wished for. That is why he is what he is today. His mission is to destroy the king as he did to him. No soul deserves a life like this…. There for….the king must be stopped at all cost…. Satchet will stop at nothing to fulfill his mission.

Cyrus the virus
08-18-06, 01:06 AM
This is a little too similar to the character from the movie/comic/whatever. Try to change his appearance and weaponry around, or something. In the meantime, I'll try to gather info on the character so I know they're not too similar.

Orious
08-18-06, 01:21 AM
Alrighty fixed it.

Cyrus the virus
08-18-06, 07:51 AM
Eh... Whatever.

He's a bit too skilled with his daggers and hatchets, and his hand-to-hand combat. Make him an 'average' dagger thrower, an 'average' hatchet fighter and a 'below average' hand-to-hand fighter, or have one of the other two be 'below average' in exchange for average h-t-h.

Orious
08-18-06, 11:26 AM
ok got it.

Cyrus the virus
08-18-06, 11:33 AM
Actually, I can't believe I missed it, but your hatchets can't be made of mythril. Make all of your weapons iron and either get rid of the sword, or all of one other kind of weapon. Change the mask description as well, so there's no confusion.

It's a pretty basic rule, I don't know why you put Mythril there.

Orious
08-18-06, 11:36 AM
Oh alright.. *nods* sorry mate.. I'm not used to Althanas standards yet..so please be patient with me.

Alright there Iron now.

Orious
08-18-06, 11:37 AM
hold on didnt work

Orious
08-18-06, 11:39 AM
lol ok go ahead.

Cyrus the virus
08-18-06, 12:06 PM
Approved! Sorry if I seemed harsh, yo.