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hoytti
03-03-13, 05:49 PM
Name: Sorish Mon Larsh

Age: 50

Race: Coralian

Gender: Male

Hair Color: None

Eye Color: Pure Pink Reflective Eyes.

Height:8'7 / Varying

Weight:300 lb / 5 lbs

Appearance: Coral Complexion, Blue with Green in the cracks of his Coral Body, a 3' tall Coralian Crown. He wheres a white scaled hooded robe over his Blue and Green Coralian Armor. He is muscular without his robe and armor. His neck looks like his veins are popping out due to Roxi. His ears are like coral rings and he has a beard shaped coral under his chin. He has never hosted and has been fed well so his Coralian Crown is as straight as the day of his birth. The crown plus his true height brings him to 11'7. The crown is never considered in a Coralian's true height. His arm length reaches his knees. His fingers are long and boney.

History: Sorish Mon Larsh was born in the Northern Sea. He had grown up with both his parents who were ex-adventurers. They would tell him stories of many of the adventures they had in the open sea. The one place that they never visited but whish they had was the land. Few Coralaians have set foot on dry land. there have been stories of the beings who lived above the waves but nothing more. After his 30th birthday he had his Adult Ceremony. His ceremonial challenge was to find a Coral Worm who would bond with him. It took him three weeks to find a Coral Worm willing to bond with him. He was about to give up when he found Roxi. him and this coral worm soon found out that they made a great team. Roxi was one of the wisest Coral Worms of her class. She also loved adventures. As soon as Roxi bonded with Sorish she discovered that he was going to be an adventurer and agreed to be his companion. After a few more weeks to really get to know each other Sorish and Roxi headed back to the ring of adulthood where Sorish's family and friends were waiting. As soon as he got into the ring it started to glow. It was yellow at first but then turned green. After it turned green his father stepped forward and asked him what profession he was going to choose. After telling his father that he was going to be an adventurer, which didn't need any for of higher education his father smilled and handed him his Coralian Necklace which had a walking stick and a pair of boots carved into it. After he told his parents goodbye he headed of to have adventures of his own.

Skills:

Tracking – Can track most animals easily especially in the water.

Abilities:

Water magic:

Water Bubble - A 2 cubic meter bubble of water appears for one minute and can be used twice per hour.

Water Gun - When used in water makes a strong current but when used on land requires Water Bubble and shoots it out at the enemy.
moderate damage, about as much as a really strong punch, he can sustain it for 6 seconds, and can use it 3 times per hour

Breathing Bubbles - 2 Bubbles that he places around his gills when he leaves the water.
Sustainable till he enters water. No attack or defense Stat Change. just makes him able to breath.

Rain Dance - Requires Water Bubble. When used the Water bubble changes into a creature which dances around Sorish protecting him from fire and small projectiles for 3 seconds. After this time it returns to being a bubble and it begins to rain in 1/2 mile radius. Rain lasts for an hour.


Gills - For breathing under water

Coral Regeneration- While wet Sorish heals at 1 mm every ten seconds via Coral Regeneration, lasts as long as he is wet. While dry it takes about the same amount of times it would any normal human. While active, ability absorbs water at at 2x normal rate drying him five seconds after water source stops.

Sea Creature - Due to being born and raised in the water, Sorish isn't as easily effected by it. The only way water effects him is if there is a really strong current in the water, However the flip side is that he is slower on land due to his slime hardening constantly.

Coldblooded - Coralians are cold blooded so they are extremely slow in the cold, however, they will not hibernate.

No Groin Shot - Coralians do not reproduce from the groin so they are not effected any differently from any other parts of the body being hit.


Combat Stances:

No Kamaes - Five stances that are used in Japan.

Jodan - The sword is raised above the head with the tip pointing back and the blade facing up, in readiness to strike. Sorish doesn't usually use this style often as it has a low defence

Chuden - The left foot is slightly behind the right with the left heel slightly raised, both feet are parallel, the hips are straight forward, shoulders are relaxed, spine is perpendicular to the floor at all times. The center of gravity should be centered between both feet. The Sword is held with the hands in front of the waist, with the tip of the weapon pointed at the opponent's throat. As a basic sword stance Sorish uses this one when he has to both defend and attack.

Geden - The sword is held out in front of the body pointing at the waist in kendo, or at the knee or sometimes the ankle. They are crouched down to help stabilize themselves looking almost like a rock. This is Sorish's favorite stance as it is good at defence and whenever he finishes a block it becomes an offence.

Hasso - The left foot is forward, and the sword is held pointing upright with the hilt in front of the right shoulder. The blade slopes slightly to the rear. When cutting, the sword is raised above the head. Sorish only uses this stance when he is surrounded.

Waki - The length of ones own blade is hidden behind their body only exposing the pommel to the opponent. That is the only requirement, how you stand and strike is up to you. This is Sorish's third favorite stance as it makes it impossible for others to ell how long your sword is or where you are going to strike.


Sorish's Special Stance - Sorish has his own stance as well. He lowers his body like Geden but keeps on his toes so that he can move quickly. He also has a spinning motion where he angles the sword horizontally and spins cutting all his enemies around him down.

Sorish's Normal Style - Sorish doesn't like to just charge into battle. Instead, he strategies then enacts the strategy.

Red Death - A disease that changes Sorish's fighting style to pure aggression. It appears when someone angers immensely. His eyes change from Reflective Pink to Reflective Red, thus the name. It has no effect on his stats or strength. All it does is send him on a rampage which is deadly to both friend and foe alike. He just constantly slashes at any creature he sees until there is no one left or someone can calm him down.


Equipment:

All equipment steel grade

Coralian Short Sword - A 6' sword made out of hardened coral.

Coralian Knife - A 3' knife made out of hardened coral.

Coralian Battle Armor - A set of plated Body Armor that is made out of hardened coral

A Coralian shield - A 7' diameter Shield that is made out of hardened coral

Coralian Water Magic Book.

Armor Information: The Scale Robes are like Studded Armor but due to the fact that they are made to be flexible they can't protect against blunt weapons. The armor underneath does that for him. His Hardened Coral Armor is as strong as steel.

Familiars:

Roxi

Age 50

Species: Coral Worm

Gender: Female

Eye color: Black Eyes

Height: Varies

Weight: 5lbs

Skills:

Tracking

Grabbing Things

Abilities:

Stretching Body

Enhancing Sorish's abilities / skills to 150%. Lasts 30 seconds. After 30 seconds they both are left winded. Can only be activated if she is connected to Sorish.

Sanderia

Age: 8

Race: Coralian

Gender: Female

Hair Color: None

Eye Color: Reflective Pink

Height: 4'5

Weight: 120

Appearance: Coral Complexion, Green with Blue in the cracks, a 1'3 Coralian Crown.

Skills: Novice Sword Fighter

Abilities:

Water Magic

Water Bubble - Can make a small water bubble about a cubic centimeter for ten minutes

Water Gun - When used in water makes a strong current but when used on land requires Water Bubble and shoots it out at the enemy.
moderate damage, about as much as a light punch, she can sustain it for a second, and can use it 2 times per hour

Equipment: Wood Practice Sword

Armor Information: White Robe made of Cloth

Letho
03-04-13, 11:16 AM
First, you have three new abilities (Rain Dance, Water Needles and Sea Creature) which brings your ability total up to 6. I can only allow 5 at this point, so you'll have to lose one.

Also, I need some additional info. How strong is the creature from Rain Dance? Does it block all damage during those 3 seconds?

What do Water Needles do and how strong are they? Because needles made of water aren't exactly able to prick anything.

In Sea Creature, is it basically regeneration, just coral regrowing at that rate? Either way, you should only be able to heal minor wounds at this point.

Lastly, going from 3 to 10 seconds in Water Gun is a bit much. I'll allow you to bump it to 6.

hoytti
03-04-13, 02:16 PM
Okay, I reduced the rate to 1mm/s for as long as he is wet, while dry it takes about the same amount of time as it would any normal human.
I removed Rain Needles which will come up in the next update. Also updated it so that the rain from rain dance will only last an hour and it effects an area of 10 mile diameter.

Letho
03-04-13, 03:47 PM
Ok, this looks acceptable.

You are approved. Thank you for your cooperation and welcome to the next level.

hoytti
10-17-13, 02:35 PM
Okay here you go Breaker just as you requested I updated the profile

Breaker
10-17-13, 11:14 PM
Thank you! Approved.