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Krausus
04-08-13, 07:55 PM
Name-Krausus De Axiaz Sovien
Gender-Male
Age-165
Race-Demi-Human
Occupation-War Magus of Fire/Librarian
Height-2 Peds, 1 Palmspan, 4 Nailsbreadths
Eye Color-Nor’sidian
Hair Color-Karikrimson
Weight-1 Pygge, 1 Hafeb, 2 Ods, 10 Mut
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Krausus De Axiaz Sovien, his true name. Krausus to many of his friends and his soon to be wife. His father, the former Lord Magus of his village lay dead in his tomb. With his last dying breath he finished an ancient ritual that lengthened Krausus and his three brother's lives by many many years. He himself was coming upon his 142nd birthday. His power was strong but he still yearned to learn more. So he used magics and created something nobody had ever seen before. A small box that given an incantation and a few drops of blood could expand into a fully operating cataloged library. His magic was only the things that his father taught him. and he was young at the time. But still he was The War Magus of Fire, one of the elements of nature. his brother Xion mastered Water. Therefore they became close, working together to perfect a way to make water and fire mix, without extinguishing fire and making the water evaporate. He had no formal training, yet he could break a man with a single word. "There is much to learn" he mumbled as he walked up the road, flames searing the path behind him. "I simply must seek out Xion once more. Together we can finish that method and speak to that... Elf....."
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Clothing- Many days he works with a hooded cloak over a thin light plate hauberk with leather gloves and boots, he preferred many days some wool pants but work when he was fighting an enchanted set of featherlight steel leggings.
Personality-He was once a charismatic energetic man, but fighting saps the happiness from your bones. All that is left is a grim quiet man bent to learn the secrets of his world.
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Strengths- Powerful uncontrolled magic, he will drive you out with bursts of fire and blasts of hot steam when his brother Xion is around.
Extraordinary Intellect-Known to be a very smart person his village seeks out his advice when they have war coming to their borders.
Also, Krausus has a towering build and is rather agile, able to cast complex spells while moving due to his 140 years of experience
Weaknesses-Anger, he has a hot temper, known to be quick to fight.
Light armor- Magi cannot wear plate armor due to the fact that they need their hands.
Flames- A great strength yet his greatest weakness he simply must be warm to concentrate his power into reality.
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HISTORY
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Krausus was known to be an odd kid out, that saying it take the whole village to raise a child is true. His mother died when his final brother Avirian was born. His father, the lord in line for his village taught him in some magic especially in fire, his magic is volatile. When he was 16 he got a job as the village blacksmith, and there he got his muscular build. When a visiting mage came through the town he taught Krausus how to focus his magic into blades through simple sword hilts. At 24 he moved out through the wild but came back when he heard his father was sickly. At 25 his father died, but not before extending his life by centuries. So then he started experimenting with various other weapons and become known as the War Magus. After a while he decided to start learning so visited a library and thought "what if i could make this portable" and there became the Library of the War Magus. So now he is here, seeking out xion his brother and the Water Elementalist. He is Krausus the War Magus of Fire. Ward of Blackthorn and Blacksmith of Red Forest.
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BElongings/Weapons
2-4 Sword hilts to focus his magic into blades of living fire.
Multiple storage mini-dimensions for his belongings
Various Whip handle mace chains and spear handles for his focused magic.
His portable library, a small pin and a book of incantations.
A staff of pine topped with a fire cored onyx.
Single Torchstone
*Most Wepons are made out of steel, only one, His first sword hilt was made out of Ebony*
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He also owns the rights to his horse of fires Ragnaros and a Flamewolf named Dreadforge.
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Powers
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Immense knowledge of fire magics, able to create objects out of fire including but not limited to staves, swords daggers, books tents and basic food.
Transmutation and very little shapeshifting (wolf due to family blood)
Fire Blasts tend to cause disorienting burns on contact.

Letho
04-09-13, 12:10 PM
It says under "Clothing" that he owns dragonscale leggings. I can't allow that material at level zero. You can have steel at best.

His fire and steam should cause only moderate burns on contact.

I also need to know the material of sword hilts and whip handles. If they are made of just regular entry-tier materials like steel and leather and similar, then it's fine.

Krausus
04-09-13, 02:15 PM
The thing is i was a former lvl 3 and then left for almost a year due to army enlistment. I'm currently on leave. I never got back to that acct. Also Krausus here had had 140 years of experience. You think he can't kill a dragon?

Letho
04-09-13, 03:22 PM
If you have a link to your old profile, or someone confirming your claim, I can reinstate your old character if you wish so. Alternatively, you can reincarnate that character if you wish to do so in order to boost the new one, in which case you will lose all the experience on the old character, but will be able to use 50% of that experience to jump start a new character.

However, if you're starting out fresh with a brand new character, I will have to ask you to adhere to the same limitations as the rest of people registering a new character. Meaning, I still need the stuff mentioned in my initial post.

Krausus
04-09-13, 03:26 PM
done

Letho
04-09-13, 05:58 PM
Ok, moving on. You can only have three abilities at level zero. Currently you have fire control, agility (I need to know exactly how agile is he when compared to a normal human), transmutation, shapeshifting, short range teleport and portal making. As you can see, there are too many, so you need to lose three. Also, keep in mind that the short range teleport is not something I'll be able to allow unless it's something that you can use only once per battle and even then only if it leaves you disoriented afterwards.

Krausus
04-09-13, 08:14 PM
The agility isn't a power but more of a trainer thing. But scratch agility and teleport. Also take portal making and let i burn. But I simply will not stand for you taking the library. Once I write a real history that will be a HUGE chunk of his life.

Krausus
04-09-13, 08:18 PM
Ok. I talked to Logan. He said it was decent. I need this cleared tomorrow or else I won't be on for a few weeks due to millitary duties

Krausus
04-09-13, 09:13 PM
At least here people don't say no no no that's not allowed
Of this i say. C'mon people, will anyone here help me build an RP that you can be free on? With anything out minds can dream? That's my idea of a great RP. Where you choose a genre an let your mind flow free. I will make a quest like that. You take you. Your keyboard and your computer somewhere private and write. Make your ideas come true. All RPs now are controlled law filled CD making holes of bullshit. If I can't just sit down and have a good time the. I think that the RP is a horrid one. A system full of checks thru quad checks and the. Saying. Oh sorry, you messed up you history. Doing that is like taking me. Ripping me to shreds and burning me. So, email me your thoughts at theseerin@yahoo.com

Letho
04-10-13, 06:19 AM
Logan is not in charge of profile approval and even if he was, I am handling this profile. If you feel that you are treated unfairly, please contact one of the admins and we'll escalate the issue to higher powers.

I am terribly sorry that Althanas' system isn't tailored to your specific desires. If you're not comfortable with the rules (to which coincidentally we all need to adhere to), I would suggest trying out either our Nexus segment of the site, (http://www.althanas.com/world/forumdisplay.php?317) or posting your writing in the Creative Endeavors section. However, if you wish to write in the regular RP part of the site, please adjust your profile accordingly.

So please edit out the abilities you mentioned out of your initial post, leaving only three. And please note that I haven't mentioned or insisted that you should remove the Library.

Krausus
04-10-13, 02:56 PM
OK, fixed all the abilites, full spell checked and all things agree with the lvl 0 stats.... Am i good?

Letho
04-10-13, 03:41 PM
The changes will suffice. You are approved. Thank you for your cooperation and welcome to Althanas.