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huron663
08-30-06, 04:34 PM
Name: Bar
Age: 28
Race: Human
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 6'2"
Weight: Heavyset
Occupation: Bar is a wanderer. He does odd jobs that require his strength to support himself.

Personality: Bar travels around sometimes by himself, sometimes alone, never staying in one place to long. Bar is afraid he will become to attached to someone, where the pain of leaving hurts to much. He can be friendly, or blunt, or somewhere in the middle--it all depends on the mood he's in. Bar doesn't care what others think of him, and doesn't care much about others.

Appearance: Bar is a big man. He is tall, and heavyset. He wears common travellers clothes, though they are tattered and dirty. He has a full beard on his face, and a large axe strapped across his back. At a quick glance, Bar is intimidation. However, if someone was to closely examine his eyes, they would see that they show something more, something deep and painful.

History: Bar's father was a drunk. When Bar was born, he named Bar after the one thing he loved. The bar. Bar's mother died at childbirth, so Bar worked hard to support both him and his father. Eventually, Bar's father died from his alcoholism. Bar couldn't stay where his father fell anymore. So he left. He traveled from place to place, tavern to tavern. Bar never made friends, though some people might remember him for some help moving stones at a quarry, or hay bales on a farm. Bar became a wanderer, and that is what he is.

Skills: Bar is strong, and can weild his large axe quite well. He also intimidates people once in a while. Other than that, Bar is pretty simple.

Equipment: Large Axe (wood and steel), Travel Bag, Travel Clothes (linen), Small Money Pouch and some Coins, Cloak (wool), food and wineskin.

INDK
08-30-06, 05:33 PM
Welcome to Althanas! If you have any questions let me or another moderator know.

Your profile looks fine, though you might want to elaborate a bit on your history. It would make writing for your character a bit more consistent.

Besides that, I'll need to make sure that you know your axe is made of our standard starting material (oak and steel, or steel and steel should you prefer) and that your cloak, travel clothes etc. are made of basic cloths like linnen and wool. Once thats cleared up, I'll be more than happy to approve you.

huron663
08-30-06, 06:25 PM
I just edited my first post if that's alright. I put the materials his items are made of in quotations. I didn't really elaborate on the history much (just added a sentance or two), because that history is of this world, which i don't know much about yet.

INDK
08-30-06, 06:27 PM
Editing is fine. Once I close this thread, you won't be able to make any more edits though. However, once you reach level 1, you can make a new profile with updates to talk about what new developments have happened to your character.

You are approved, have a good time!