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Dr. Why
09-07-13, 08:47 PM
Name-Unknown, Goes by Dr.
Age-A few days over 130756
Hair-Silver
Eyes-Grey, flicker with gold and silver light
Height-6' 4" in human form. 9' 4" in Kallian Form
Weight-150 Lbs

Time may not pass, but the Death Waltz continues. The universe counts down, to the end of life.-Timeslayer

History
Little is known about him, other than his strange ways. He lives in a small house in Radasanth, painted silver and gold. He leaves daily and comes back at 5:00 and 9:00 respectively. But his true form is a race called the Unexplained. The seclusive men of infinite life, and unlimited power. They will not die only regenerate that which was lost and walk away like it never happened. Dr. is a rare man in their species, granted the power of light control, and in his case, techno-light.

Skills
Music-Master-Dr. can produce any music from his technolight, and it will play any song for any amount of time before Dr. stops it.

Stave Combat-Grandmaster-A skill learned in the excruciating heat of the dying star Xallius, Dr. was trained in the art of stave combat for years. Hundreds of years of physical and mental pain, and the power of thought dominating him, driving him to do anything that was possible. He was told to do everythign he could and best the previous Grandmaster in single combat, using none of his power but the metal staff. He won.

Abilities
Technolight Staff Blade-Using some of his power, he can project a blade of light onto the end of his staff, which is as strong as an iron sword, for up to one hour. Once the hour passes, the blade will dissipate. It will also dissipate if the blade is struck by a spell directly. In which case, Dr. will take 2x damage from the spell and be unable to produce another blade for 5 hours. Is just about a foot long.

Gauntlet-A duo of weapons, claws and swords, all combined in a beautiful juncture of TL that can be formed on his hands, at will. They last as long as he has nothing in his hands. The weapons can be switched with a tad of focus. They act the strength of iron.

Immortality-Dr. is immortal, and will regenerate all damage caused to him when not in battle if given a period of 15 hours (I think this fair, 15 hours, but im willing to up it to 20.) If he is beheaded, he will not be able to speak for a total of 2 hours after he regenerates. (Because of the fact that i need to live through quests, in quest, regeneration of lost limbs is instantaneous, but Dr. cannout use them for a 8 hour period after regeneration. All minor injuries, and overkill take 15 hours of rest to fully heal) He cannot use this in any battle. And in quests, the usage time

Inventory

Kraken-A Kallian Steel staff, made of a metal that is equivalent to normal steel and cannot be stolen. It can however be sold ONLY in the case of Dr. finding a better staff, in which case, it will be worth 200 gold (I also think this fair, it'd take, what? 3 levels to get to a DECENT staff like this?)

Eye-The orb of TechnoLight that hover slightly above his shoulder. It is used for calculations, and storage. It can hold anything that is not stolen or larger than a regular great sword. It also plays music.

The Eye contains the following
Flint and Steel
A folded set of Kallian robes. (Made of cotton)
A strip of TechnoLight that goes over his eyes and acts as-Sunglasses, Pedometer, Remote Death Waltz Tracker, Heart Monitor, Lung Monitor, Music Player.
Food
A waterskin.

Pets
Klask'Vhan-Shoir Laktu
Race-Drake
Coloration-Grey, Red, and White.
Klask s a drake, owned by Dr. and procured on Kallus. He is passive, and does not show up in battles. He will not fight or attack in any way. (More history to come in a solo later on.

Letho
09-09-13, 01:27 PM
What's the range of Death Waltz? Also, the duration is too long. I'd rather see it as a single burst, since it hits on all sides. Something that lasts that long and hits like an arrow can effectively kill a lot of people within the area of effect because an arrow at point blank is very hard to dodge especially if it's not an arrow, but an energy burst.

Also, I can't allow resurrection at level zero, even if it does bring you only to half strength. People can usually regenerate only minor injuries at level zero in a short period of time, and anything above that takes substantially longer. You can have eventual immortality, but nothing that can get you back in a battle after you're killed.

My last issue is with the Kallian Form. While you say that it's purely cosmetic, I beg the differ. If he can make himself 9 feet tall, that is significant. It increases your reach if nothing else. If it's purely cosmetic, you shouldn't be able to change into anything larger than your normal form. If you absolutely need to, then it's a combat ability.

Dr. Why
09-09-13, 02:53 PM
Sorry. Te Immortality can be edited to te point of no battles or quest resurrection or none at all.

Death waltz extends about 6 inches to one foot around him.

Kallian form was just something i was toying with. I don't like the idea of it now.


Edits to be added within 12 hours.

Dr. Why
09-09-13, 09:31 PM
That should work out. I added some serious weakness in there for good measure. Downed it to 20. Will happily go lower.


Kallian Removed.

Dr. Why
09-19-13, 08:04 PM
Bump

Max Dirks
09-20-13, 11:15 AM
At the speed of light, death waltz is essentially unblockable. Please either narrow the range or limit the direction it fires.

Dr. Why
09-30-13, 08:35 PM
Updated.

Max Dirks
10-01-13, 09:25 AM
Does the technolight staff blade extend forever, or does it end (like a light saber)?

Gauntlet will have to be cut down to two weapons to begin with. The staff cannot be indestructable at level 1.

Prophet
10-01-13, 02:30 PM
It cannot be destroyed by normal means. Drop a brick on it, it won't be scratched. Hit it swith a sword, it'll get harmed. Light it on fire, it'll burn, but sure. It's sellable as of my squid son of a new staff though.

Willing to edit gauntlet. Im not find of whips anyways. Too clumsy.

Dr. Why
10-03-13, 03:59 PM
Updated.

Max Dirks
10-04-13, 12:56 PM
Great approved.