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Sabatykos Maelstrom
10-08-13, 10:48 PM
(I'm at 2K so I guess according to the new levelling schematic, Sabatykos is level 2 correct? Anyway, I am doing a quick level 2 update. Updates in BOLD. Note I am mostly overhauling a couple of things with your permission, Moderator. Thank you very much. Level 1 (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?22722-Sabatykos-Chapter-1) and Level 0 (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?19358-Mutation-0))

~Alignment: LG (Lawful Good)

~Name: Sabatykos Maelstrom

~Title: Engineer

~Age: 35

~Race: Saenorakym Prime Hybrid

~Hair: Black

~Eyes: Dark Brown

~Height: 5'11"

~Weight: 200 lbs (Sabby has gained some weight)

~Job Class: Engineer/Adventurer

~Psychological Profile: Sabatykos is a fierce problem solver. His mind works with a vast intellectual capacity, and he analyzes matters quickly. Sabatykos thinks in terms of figures, quantities and schematics. If it can be built, Sabatykos will find a way to make it. He works constantly with a set of tools close by and is most at home in a laboratory making something. Though recently, he has taken to various endeavors in The Citadel where he hopes to train his growing skill with the glorious light. Sabatykos is very good natured, and has a fair sense of humor. But when it comes to making things, or training in The Citadel, Sabatykos takes on a completely serious demeanor. He is generally a good person, and quite friendly.

~Description: Sabatykos has average height and build. He has black spiky hair, and has since let his hair out from his older style. His hair curves at the spikes, and he keeps it relatively short. He has bangs that partially cover his forehead. Currently, he has taken to wearing a beard. He likes wearing a simple green cloak of late to keep him warm, and wears simple dress hats. He wears gloves, and boots. His favorite color to dress in is black. He has good personal hygiene.

-Civilian Attire: When he is out, he dresses simply. He keeps on a pair of tanktops, wears his gloves, and generally dresses in a very agreeable fashion. He sometimes wears glasses, since he has trouble focusing normally and has somewhat poor eyesight.

-Work Uniform: Commonly, he wears overalls to work and carries his packs of equipment and tools at all times.

~History:

Chapter 4 (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?23339-A-story-yet-unwritten-(Closed))

Chapter 5 (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?21765-Holy-War-2-Chapter-3/page2)

Sabatykos has decided to start training a lot in The Citadel. No longer a youth, Sabatykos carefully climbs The Citadel Leagues with a steady and disciplined approach. He is not trying to be the best there is, BUT he is trying to be the best he CAN BE. Sabatykos works hard at his Engineering trade, and that is something he does take seriously. Alongside the heritage of his people, he wishes to help Althanas usher into a new area of technological wonders. Sabatykos hopes to build a machine to one day cure all famine and disease. That has become one of his most constant goals and dreams. Sabatykos is working to becoming the man he is meant to become. He currently has no family, except for his biological parents and no mate to call his own. However, he is always busy with work anyway and doesn't mind it that way.

His journeys have taken him all across Althanas, and he looks forward to continuing to travel on various adventures in order to gain knowledge. Sabatykos is hungry to learn knew things, slowly becoming the master he is meant to become. Sabatykos has been making things since he was a small child, and fixing things. Where things break, Sabatykos is there to repair. Sabatykos currently works at an attempt to obtain his own laboratory where he can tinker and invent things to his heart's content.


(Completed Threads)

~Ability/Skill Sheet:

-(Ability) Sphere of Celerity-Level 2. (Name change only, no other updates.) (Formerly Halfbreed Elven Dexterity)

Level 1: Halfbreed Elven Dexterity-As a Halfbreed, Sabatykos has developed even quicker reflexes than before. He has obtained the capacity for reacting at 3.0x's the normal reaction rate of an Althanian Human. Furthermore, he has developed some basic land-speed with running. On foot, Sabatykos may run at 35 M.P.H.'s in one direction. Sabatykos is deft with both hands and can used both hands for skilled, quick maneuvers.

-(Ability/Racial) Symbols-Level 2. (Formerly Saenorakym Prime Symbols) (From 0-5 Five being the highest possible skill level that can be achieved) The Prime symbols have evolved as Sabatykos has trained his use with them. They now are capable of manifesting Sabatykos's holy aura as holy energy. The energy completely surrounds Sabatykos in a five foot radius. The holy energy is simply referred to as "ki". Sabatykos can make the energy manifest virtually at will. But once it dissipates, it takes sometime to be able to manifest again. Roughly a full I.C. Day. Currently, with the holy energy, Sabatykos may manifest simple beams and spheres to perform different tasks. Spheres are used as simple torches and can light up dark rooms in a snap. Spheres are typically used to break simple objects like vases, etc.

Beams are used in direct combat. They take roughly ONE I.C. turn to conjure. They are quick acting and cause damage as holy energy. Sabatykos primarily uses these beams in combat to defend himself with.

(New!!!) After learning the true nature of his power, Sabatykos has discovered a new use of the holy energy. Able to construct a pure energy blade known as a prismatic weapon for a brief amount of time, Sabatykos allows this weapon to float around him attacking targets. The weapon is roughly equivalent to the damage output of a BRONZE AVERAGE sword.
So far, Sabatykos can only manifest one weapon in this time. Optionally, he may wield this weapon as an aesthetic energy blade. It simply causes holy damage when it connects to a target.

-(Finishing Move) Furnace Beam Level 2. Sabatykos is capable of summoning TWO Furnace Beams in one attack. One from each hand. This version of the technique is only used for finishing opponents off. It takes extreme concentration to maintain both beams at the same time, but he can do it with enough prep time. Takes roughly TWO I.C. turns to pull off this version of the attack.

Level 1-This new power, earned from an adventure, is a set of tattoos emblazoned along the length of one of Sabatykos's arms. At will, Sabatykos can call forth the power stored within the symbols. These symbols, once activated, can release tremendous energy, classified as Holy Energy that is used for a dual-purpose. First, the energy may be used as a power-source to power up complex Machines and Power Cells. Second, the energy released may be called to cause damage to Sabatykos's opponents. Versus creatures of the night, the light can deal roughly 3.0x's the damage that it normally would deal against non elemental opponents.

Furthermore, the attacks, when in beam form, can punch right through low-tier armour. It can punch through Cloth, Leather, and Iron. Against Steel and higher level tiers, it can currently cause a knock-back effect. Currently, Sabatykos cannot summon the light for more than one attack per usage. Also, the symbols have a cool-down effect in which Sabatykos must wait a full I.C. minute before being able to call upon the light once again.

Against non-elemental targets, the light causes burning or heat damage in heavy-large quantities. But nothing more than that. The light is mostly summoned from Sabatykos's eyes, mouth, or arms or hands. It can be either a beam weapon or a sphere weapon.

Level 1-Furnace Beam-Used when an opponent is facing certain doom, Sabatykos calls upon the light. The time, he calls upon the light in such an effect that it creatures a beam of energy that is much larger and much more powerful than standard beams of light. This beam, focused and intense, is capable of Lethal damage within the proximity of a fallen opponent. This beam-weapon requires P.C. permission and can only be attempted once per battle, or once per quest. The beam has short-ranged, but can be easily evaded if the target sees it coming. This beam is usually shot from the symbol-hand and is golden-white in colour.

Notes: The beam weapon is designed to travel short distances. From the hand roughly to about a 6'.0" distance. Each beam is roughly around Three Inches thick in circumference. A symbol appears whenever the Furnace Beam is used. It's not instant travel or anything and it takes a few moments for the beam to reach the target. Which is why it is used as a Finisher. (I hope this helps bro)

-(Skill/Racial) Intellect Level 2. No change from the last update. (Formerly Alien Intellect)

Level 1-Alien Intellect-Trained in the intellectual capacity of two noble races: The Elves and The Saenorarkym Prime, Sabatykos is gifted with alien intellect. As a Super Genius, Sabatykos can learn at 5.0x's the learning capacity of the average Althanian. This knowledge is for learning new techniques, and understanding technical and engineering based data.

-(Skill) Invention-Level 2.

Sabatykos can now make FIVE machines at will in one day given the proper parts, schematics and tools. No other changes take place.

Level 1-After acquiring significant knowledge of Invention during recent events, Sabatykos has increased his basic knowledge. Now, Sabatykos has become a Master Inventor for his skill bracket. Sabatykos can acquired basic parts, or, complex parts for Machines simple or exotic in nature. Taking time to build a Machine requires effort and is taxing on the mind and body. Sabatykos can make 3.0 Machines a day. Furthermore, he can Repair Machines at will given proper plans, schematics, and Tools.

Complex Machines require a Team of Mechanics and Technicians. There are also many parts required to build a complex Machine.

Currently, Sabatykos may construct any combination of the following:

Small Vehicles-Such as Carts or Siege Engines.

Clockwork Devices-Such as clocks, gears, etc.

Incendiary Devices-He can make lightweight, portable, and small bombs that are used to explode after a certain amount of time. (Causes damage dependent on what Moderators give me)

Clockwork/Flintlock Guns-Alerar style guns that are simple and effective to use. Sabatykos knows how to maintain and micromanage these weapon, including the repair of these weapons. He may currently USE a gun with his Intellect level. (Fair compromise bro) Sabatykos can manufacture a clip of up to 10.0x's Bullets in one clip then must rest. Pending the availability of resources at the job.

Gunpowder and other Chemicals-Complex chemical substances are able to be manufactured thanks to Saenorakym Prime knowledge. This will be explored later on in Sabatykos's career however so currently, Sabatykos can make a few chemicals such as Gun-Powder.

-(Skill) Swordplay-Level 2. No change from last level.

Level 1: Sabatykos has trained against some of the mightiest warriors of The Citadel Leagues for his skill bracket. This constant fighting has incurred tremendous new knowledge of skirmishing warfare. Now, Sabatykos has become Skilled for his bracket in The Citadel Leagues. This new knowledge allows Sabatykos to dual-wield one-handed, light weapons of the same weight class. Currently, Sabatykos cannot dual-wield heavy weapons. Sabatykos prefers to fight with Daggers and Shortblade type Weapons. Sabatykos uses light feet, and quick speed to dual-strike opponents in a deadly dance macabre.


-(Skill) Martial Tactics-Level 2. Name change only. (Formerly Unarmed Combat)

Level 1: Unarmed Combat-Trained in The Citadel Leagues, Sabatykos has become Skilled as a warrior with melee knowledge. Though his combat tactics are not quite refined as they should be, Sabatykos has picked up on the basics and learned them well. Using his hands, Sabatykos is capable of moving into various styles of combat stances, he may attempt to disarm a foe with some skill, and he can fight with his whole body. Sabatykos prefers to use unarmed combat only when desperation calls for it. He can kill a man with his hands if the situation calls for it.

~Inventory:

1-Iron broadsword Masterwork in quality. It comes with a scabbard.

1-Pair of Iron Daggers Masterwork in quality. They both come with a scabbard and are worn on the hip.

1-Set of basic technician equipment.

Breaker
10-08-13, 11:12 PM
Hmm... could you please make sure that all of your character's abilities are listed in this profile? I glanced over your level 1 and it looks like you've only listed your new abilities. And you've done that very clearly, which I thank you for! But in order to move this through I'll need to see all of Sabatykos' abilities listed above. Thanks for your co-operation!

Sabatykos Maelstrom
10-09-13, 12:27 PM
Hey Numbers, I did actually list everything if you go back over my level 1 profile. I simply changed the names of some things. I can list that for you if you need it too where names were changed, would that work for ya bro?

Also I added in notes where name changes DID occur to help facilitate this whole thing :) thank you for being a doll. If there's anything else you need me to edit, let me know.

Breaker
10-09-13, 12:34 PM
Ahh I see what you did there. You can call them whatever they want, but the description of how they help your character still needs to be there. So "Sphere of Celerity" needs to describe what abilities it adds, for example.

Just think of it this way: anything your character can do that's outside the scope of a normal human being, needs to be listed and explained in abilities. It looks like you're just missing the sphere of celerity description, but make sure you add any others so you don't get dinged for powergaming in battles!

Sabatykos Maelstrom
10-09-13, 05:22 PM
I pasted all the info I could from the level 1 update where it was needed. I THINK that covers everything bro. Let me know what else is needed :) .

Breaker
10-09-13, 08:27 PM
Man I am really sorry, I just realized that since level 1 is the new level 0, level 2 is the new level 1, and our power system has shifted accordingly. I was aware of this but I'm so used to seeing you level up I didn't think about it. Again, I apologize... how about if you just lock all the new stuff and I'll approve this, that way it's all there for you when you hit the next level?

Elthas_Belthasar
10-10-13, 01:03 AM
Numbers dood, it's okay bro. I was just making sure I understood how the new level up system worked so I could explain it to people. And yeah it's cool dude, I can use this profile when I level up next and that is fine by me. I just THOUGHT since I was at 2K experience for level 2 that I was level 2. Wasn't sure about it or not but thanks for pointing it out. So the next level up would be at 3 correct? Feel free to let me know :) . And yeah Sabatykos is one of my alts i posted with the wrong account, my bad bro :) .

Breaker
10-10-13, 04:07 PM
Alright, thanks for your understanding. This profile is not approved but Sabatykos may require that it be moved back out here once he hits the next level. For all roleplaying purposes please revert to his original level 1 profile, linked above.