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Fay
10-14-13, 11:28 AM
Name: Fay

Age: 3417

Race: Soud. Soud are tree people. Their skin is bark and their hair is leaves.

Hair Color: Dark blue green

Eye Color: Purple

Height: 7 feet.

Weight: 150 lb.

Occupation: Adventurer/Mercenary

Personality: Fay is a purposeful young adventurer. Even though he is 3417, he is young because Soud live to be eons old. He is modest and kind always seeking to help others. When people see him they are very inspired.

Appearance: A strange looking tall man made of bark around 7 foot tall and his hair...a unique color--a dark teal. It looks as if this man is a tree himself.

History: Fay was the last born of his city because the hour after he was born the undead attacked. He himself was able to escape (barely) because Soud are born from a tree already around 20 years in appearence. His Mother Tree was destroyed but with her last thought she turned one of her branches into a boat for Fay to escape on.

The undead swam for a mile or two but Fays boat sailed on. He docked at a human port city tired, starving and over all had one foot in the grave. A fisherman by the name of Joe helped Fay out of his boat and led him into a nearby inn. Fay had a bite to eat and some to drink then the sounds of merry laughter got quieter and quieter through the night and Fay went into a sleep he should have had for days.

Joe showed him around town and Fay was very interested. "So this is a city?" he asked, wondering because he had never seen one before.

"Not exactly this is more of a," he looked at the falling apart inn and the rotting dock below them, "town." They walked in silence untill they heard a scream from uptown. "Stay here, I'll go investigate!" Fay was very curious and followed anyway. They saw what was making the commotion and it was bad. A minotuar was holding a screaming woman by the ankle.

Fay stepped forward raising his hand "I call you back from the dead!"All the sudden a hole opened in the ground and out stepped a bone minion. It looked like a wolf but completely made out of bones for the exeption of hanging bits of flesh."Attack!"The minion ran as fast as he could and struck the minotaur in the heart.The minotuar struck the wolf but Fays minion doged and struck again this time in the leg. The minotuar fell to the ground just in time for the guardians of the town to come forth and strike the final blow.

The lady crawled out from under the minotuar "Thank you so very much, what can I do to reward you?" Fay shook his head.

"I wouldn't take it...I'm fine." With that he said his farewells to Joe and walked off.That was the start of his adventure.

In the next 3417 years Fay was mainly nomadic, helping people in need. He has killed many dragons, a few liches and many other threats the the world he is and has been a hero to the people for generations and hopes to continue giving hope to everone.

Skills: Necromancy (summoning), Swordsmanship, Alchemy (potion making), Carving.

Abilities: Death magic - He can summon 1 undead minion(The minion is the same strengh as a man.)
Blood magic - Can steal the life of others with swords.(If he stabs someone it depletes some of their endurance.)Takes about four hits to incapitate someone.
Souds blessing - Regenerates life faster then Humans.(Minor cuts and bruises can heal within minutes)

Equipment: Sword of Darkness-has a blade of pure darkness.(Same strength as steel)
Cloth armor-not much protection but good in the cold.
Eirembene-A staff made from a branch of his mother tree.(Same strength as oak)

Luned
10-14-13, 11:38 AM
Welcome to Althanas, we're stoked to have you guys here! I just have some requested tweaks for your abilities so they fit starting level strength.

Death magic: Fay should start being able to summon one undead minion, and that minion's stats should be comparable to a normal human being.

Blood magic: Can you please clarify how this works? For example, perhaps if he gets a hit with his sword on someone, it depletes some of their endurance to wear them down. How does that sound?

Souds blessing: Do you mean he outright heals quickly, or something else?

I'd just like two clarifications on the equipment, as well –– the sword should be equivalent to steel and the staff to oak.

Please don't hesitate to ask questions!

Fay
10-14-13, 11:57 AM
Thank for the responce!Yes I'll make those changes.

Fay
10-14-13, 12:06 PM
Oh yeah and a quick question-is it ok if i buy weapons that are stronger than Oak and Steel?

Luned
10-14-13, 01:26 PM
Sorry for the trouble, just a bit more work to be done!

For blood magic, let's say it takes four successful hits to incapacitate someone. Please keep in mind that if someone has enhanced endurance or other competing abilities, it may be rendered less effective.

And for Souds blessing, healing quickly is a high level ability, so we'll need it to be very limited to be appropriate at starting level. Let's say that minor wounds heal in a few minutes and you can work up to something better as you level up (this would mean he can't heal moderate or severe wounds quickly). Does that sound fair?

Fay
10-14-13, 05:25 PM
Ok, I meant to say minor in the first place but frogot to put it down. Change has been made :)

Luned
10-14-13, 05:29 PM
Sorry to nitpick, but could you please just add the bit where it takes about four hits with the sword to incapacitate someone? Then you're approved!

Fay
10-14-13, 05:41 PM
I think I have now made all neccicary changes. :)

Luned
10-14-13, 06:54 PM
Looks great, you are approved! Happy writing!