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Stormborn God
10-21-13, 05:16 PM
Name-Archon Magnus
Age-N/A (Appearance Varies)
Weight-120Lbs
Height-6'4"
Race-Storm God

Archon is a man of average height, with grey hair, the color of thunderheads. The braid he keeps it in is held in by the metal band at the end, and he sports a pair of glasses. His skin however, is a deep tan, with white veins showing, but the decorations on it. The insane, black, tattoos all over his torso arms and neck, the ones that none can read. They stand out like his electric blue eyes, which seem bright enough to glow. His


It all started with the meeting of a thunderstorm and a rock. So long ago, when lightning struck a rock in the center of an empty plain, life was born. In the form of a god, one named Archon, a soul of thunder, a body of lightning.

It seemed he was trapped in the middle of nowhere, with a slip of paper, and a few sets of traveling clothes. He donned them, a white, buttondown shirt, and a pair of jeans, with wraparound sunglasses, and a hoodie included. Black dress shoes were in the box too...


Triumvirate-Three essences of storm form in his right hand. He fires them where they will move forward in a straight line at the rate of 1Ft./Second. Usable 3 times a day, can fire off one at a time. Faces winds enough to know a very light person over, or make a normal one stumble. About 1 foot wide, and 5 tall.

Controlled Demolition-Through his Rod, Archon channels the natural fury of storm and nature, into a single bolt of lightning, which, when fired, thickens the air in front of it, effectively smashing anything up to 30Lbs. In living things, it will knock them over. Easily detectable, and flies straight. Target must be within 30 feet. Can be used twice a day.

Runic Decent-Archons tattoos glow electric blue, with white at the center, and his eyes glaze as he gives in to the thunderous will of his soul. His strength is doubled. This spell does sap his endurance, so he can only maintain it for 15 seconds before they lose their glow and he returns to normal stats. Maintains a cool down of 1day

Rune Glow-(Cosmetic) Archon can make his tattoos glow at will, and they will be an electric blue color. This lasts until he decides to end it. (Cannot be used as a light source in a battle, they only glow, projecting NO light around him.

Skills-Blade Combat-7/10
Staff Combat-2/10
Magic-9/10

Inventory

Clothes mentioned above, which are all enchanted to never get dirty.
1 steel sword
1 steel cane, with wood outer layer of oak. (Can be used as a conductor)
Food
Water
Leather Briefcase-Combo is 910-392-155 (For those people who wanna face a GOD. Or for those who wanna get into the case for no reason)
His journal (Enchanted to never run out of writing space.
Pens

Stormborn God
10-21-13, 08:50 PM
Done. Can I get someone to take a look at it?

Luned
10-21-13, 09:41 PM
Alright, just need to tweak these abilities a bit before you can start writing.


Triumvirate-Three essences of storm form in his right hand in the form of tiny tornadoes. These are fired in a triangular pattern, where they will move forward in a straight line at the rate of 1Ft./Second. Usable 3-4 times per battle-5 in quests.

We can either allow the three at once, only one time per day, or you can split them up so he fires just one at a time, up to three times per day. They should be small, let's say 1-2 feet in diameter and six feet in height, with the winds at a strength which could knock someone off-balance or interrupt light projectiles. They should disappear fairly quickly as they run out of steam, lasting under 10 seconds.


Controlled Demolition-Through his Rod, Archon channels the natural fury of storm and nature, into a single bolt of lightning, which, when fired, thickens the air in front of it, effectively smashing anything up to 30Lbs. In living things, it will knock them over. Easily detectable, and flies straight.

We will treat this as a basic stun. Keep in mind that it may be less effective on some characters and objects, depending on their own abilities and what they're made of, and the range should be limited. Let's say the target needs to be within 30 feet and he can use it up to twice per day.


Runic Decent-Archons tattoos glow electric blue, with white at the center, and his eyes glaze as he gives in to the thunderous will of his soul. His strength is doubled, and he can cast spells 1.5x This spell does sap his endurance, so he can only maintain it for 15 seconds before they lose their glow and he returns to normal stats.

Remove the 1.5x spell casting and this one looks good.

The wood surface on the cane should be noted as oak.

Do you have any questions?

Stormborn God
10-21-13, 09:48 PM
Nope. I believe everything is in order, so. Updates soon.

Stormborn God
10-21-13, 09:56 PM
Edited properly.

Luned
10-21-13, 10:05 PM
I still need you to clarify the size of the tornados as well as how long they last according to my first response. Your wording is also confusing, as you still mention the triangular pattern when he can only do one at a time. Please edit that so it's clearer.

Stormborn God
10-21-13, 10:11 PM
Sorry. Meant to delete the part before this browser crashed. I mentioned the proper size, and removed the other detail.

Luned
10-21-13, 10:14 PM
Looks good, you're approved!