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Dannaluth
10-21-13, 07:50 PM
Name: Dannaluth Grey
Age: 21
Race: Human
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Steel
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 150 pounds
Occupation: Assassin
Personality: Dannaluth is quite mild-mannered, but when a fight arises, his inner spirits light up and he is a vicious pugilist. He is highly skilled in the martial arts, trained in the high Dral'aa mountains. He is humble, for he does not want to become big-headed.
Skills: While Dannaluth is a very skilled swordsman, he is also a great peacemaker. He will always try to avoid a fight, but if it is unavoidable, he's not afraid to battle.
Abilities: Dannaluth is as strong as two men , with quick cat-like reflexes, and his agility is comparable to that of two men.
Equipment: A steel broadsword, and steel Platemail armor.
History: Dannaluth was born to nobles in the kingdom of Salk'a. His father was a great war hero and his mother was the most beautiful woman in all the land. He had wanted to be an adventurer for as long as he could remember, so his parents sent him to train with the monks of the Dral'aa mountains. after his trainig, he roamed the countryside as an assassin, doing people's dirty work. when he became tired of this horrendous lifestyl, he fulfilled his dream if becoming an adventurer. He traveled to Alkari, his current location.

Luned
10-21-13, 08:27 PM
Welcome to Althanas! I just need some quick clarification and then you're ready to start writing.

Strength, reflexes, and agility need to be described a bit better for easier comparison with other characters. To keep it simple, we can say he's up to twice as capable in those areas compared to a regular person. Does that sound fair?

If it does, please make a note of it in your original post, and if you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask!

Dannaluth
10-21-13, 09:34 PM
Thanks for the help!(:

Luned
10-21-13, 09:49 PM
Looks good, you are approved!