Breaker
11-05-13, 08:55 PM
This thread (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?23953-Drink-With-Me) is an old solo between two of my accounts which I was working on before I got involved in so many other projects. Since I probably won't get a chance to finish this over the next little while, I figured I'd throw it up for commentary in the meantime.
There's three things I'd like to ask for anyone reading to focus on, and those are storyline, character development, and my portrayal of "vampyres" as a race (not whether it suits prior conceptions of them, but whether they are interesting/effective as portrayed). I'm open to commentary on pretty much anything though, I like to try new tools and devices as I'm working on stuff so hit me with your favorite techniques!
There's three things I'd like to ask for anyone reading to focus on, and those are storyline, character development, and my portrayal of "vampyres" as a race (not whether it suits prior conceptions of them, but whether they are interesting/effective as portrayed). I'm open to commentary on pretty much anything though, I like to try new tools and devices as I'm working on stuff so hit me with your favorite techniques!