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Penance
11-27-13, 08:07 PM
Act boldly and the gods will reward you. (http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2013/042/0/2/mars_and_venus_by_hellstern-d2mzmb8.jpg)

Name: Malarik Sorenson
Age: twenty-six
Race: human
Hair Color: black
Eye Color: ice-blue
Height: six foot seven
Weight: two-hundred and fifty pounds
Occupation: highland lord



Personality: A cold killer, portraying the archetype of the 'tough guy.' Malarik is a man of little words, preferring to let his actions do all his talking. Always the first into a fight and the last out of it, he's survived some rough experiences and it has changed him irrevocably. He believes in old codes of justice: blood for blood and an eye for an eye. Despite the harsh, icy exterior reflective of the Kalev Highlands his people hail from there is a soft underbelly: a sort of romanticism to the man. Though he's emotionally shallow, fearing genuine commitment and having a habit of fleeing such endeavors. Something that puts him at odds with his chivalric sense.

Appearance: Tall, handsome and covered from head to toe in muscle and scar tissue, Malarik is the image of an Andvallian warrior to a t. His black hair is generally kept trimmed short at about the same length as his facial hair. He has a wide, powerful build to match his height.

Skills:

Skilled in horesback riding, mounted combat and fighting with sword and spear.
Advanced hunting & tracking.
Passable cook.
Adept combat medic.
Capable map reader.
Extensive survival knowledge.
Proficient hand to hand combatant.
Knowledge of battlefield tactics.


Abilities:

_________ Agares, The Nightmare Steed

A massive, many winged demon horse that Malarik has made a grudging alliance with as neither can kill the other. He ripped out the beasts black heart, only to watch in despair as it melted in his hand and bonded to his flesh in a skin-tight glove unable to be removed by blade or magic. The creature; Agares, a demon that occupies its time torturing damned souls and inevitably making them its servants, regularly intrudes his mind with its mocking voice. Despite the enmity they hold for one another, Agares sometimes lends Malarik his strength. On such occasions, Agares manifests as a four-winged horse that towers above other destriers, made of solid muscle and a shadowy intangibility. Its mane is comprised of scorching flame, hotter than the forges of Andvall. The sight of the creature drives fear into the heart of the weak, scattering formations as it charges them, though the terror it inspires is short-lived as it dissipates after only a few short moments. Agares can only be summoned thrice per day.

_________ Sangréal, The Hungering Blade

Sangréal is a relic of the north. It's a masterwork blade forged of steel belonging to an old king of Andvall at a time their heirarchy was more structured than it is today. The blade itself is black and its surface is scoured in pulsing gold runes etched symmetrically along its grooves. Fitted on its hilt and cross-guard is a curious red gemstone unlike any else with a strange nebulous of black storm clouds unfurling within its center. Those who have seen the blade ensanguined in the blood of its victims swear that they beheld a glimmer of sentience. A living blade. Not an extension of its user, but the user an extension of its own ravenous hunger. It's said that when blood runs its entirety, the old words of power inscribed on it are once again restored and the sword grows harder, razor-sharp, ensconced in an aura of its wielders will, allowing it to cut through magic with ease. Its adjoining sheath is leather rung in three bands of iron for decoration, two at each end and one between.

_________Andvallian Eugenics

For centuries, his family has undergone extensive biological engineering. By mating only the strongest, fastest and smartest, and through occasional magical tampering by wizards they've hired to improve their line, their descendants are thorough-bred warriors. It allows Malarik to move with unsettling grace for a man his size.

Equipment:

Sangréal.

A large oak round-shield to provide more than ample protection for a man of his size with Malarik's family heraldry painted on its surface: three leaves interposed; yellow, orange, and brown resting above a sword. The shield's edge is covered in a band of iron to delay its eventual demise, and its back is further reinforced by iron studs.

He dresses like a tank into battle; a chainmail shirt beneath a steel breastplate, articulated steel leg armor, thick steel plate pauldrons, and steel boots and gloves. He wears a hooded wolfskin cape that makes him appear more animal than man.

He wears a large linen rucksack backpack to carry an assortment of necessities from a cooking kit, wooden bowl and eatingware, rope, lantern, torch-making materials and a few bits of extra clothing.


History:

A man shrouded in secrets and mystery, though what they are, he isn't saying. The little known information about him is merely extrapolation from his motley appearance or whatever useful tidbits could be gleaned from those with the misfortune of having come across him in his past. Born in Andvall, son of a prestigious noble family with an impressive pedigree. His father was a warrior of note. He seemed a promising prodigal son until he fell off the face of the earth. Friends and family members were questioned by Andvallian soldiers about his whereabouts and informed that Malakrias was wanted under suspicion of treason.

Hysteria
12-01-13, 05:22 AM
Hi, welcome aboard.

With Sangréal, you've put in the main destription that it is mythril, but then below it is iron. Which one is it?

At the first level being able to summon a creature is too powerful. You could limit it to being able to summon the creature and having it act like a powerful blast and charge a few metres before dissapearing and then work to getting it as a summon. Or lock the ability completely and bring it in at a later level.

Lastly, can you limit the number of knives Malarik has. If you want a few different items you will need to limit them all to iron strength, max of 2 daggers and the sword. Because we have the ability to sell and trade items, we need to be specific with how many you have ;)

Penance
12-01-13, 07:24 AM
With Sangréal, you've put in the main destription that it is mythril, but then below it is iron. Which one is it?

Mythril. I meant that the sheath was leather rung with some bands of iron for decoration. I'll edit it to make it more clear.


At the first level being able to summon a creature is too powerful. You could limit it to being able to summon the creature and having it act like a powerful blast and charge a few metres before dissapearing and then work to getting it as a summon. Or lock the ability completely and bring it in at a later level.

I like the earlier idea.


Lastly, can you limit the number of knives Malarik has. If you want a few different items you will need to limit them all to iron strength, max of 2 daggers and the sword. Because we have the ability to sell and trade items, we need to be specific with how many you have ;)

The knives aren't that important to my character. They're more there for cool aesthetic effect. I can make it so he only has one or remove them entirely. He'll mostly be using sword and shield, anyway. And I can always buy knives later.

Penance
12-01-13, 07:30 AM
Made all the changes you recommended and cleared up the wording in the Sangréal description.

Edit: I'd also like the EXP from my previous character to be transferred to this one. I don't know what the exact rule is, but I think he's similar enough to get all the EXP and gold, no?

Hysteria
12-02-13, 06:06 AM
Made all the changes you recommended and cleared up the wording in the Sangréal description.

Unfortunately for starting characters they are limited to iron strength weapons and armour. You can upgrade the strength of your weapons through the bazaar once you have earned some money, or as a reward from a quest. This would extend from your sword to your armour.


Edit: I'd also like the EXP from my previous character to be transferred to this one. I don't know what the exact rule is, but I think he's similar enough to get all the EXP and gold, no?

I'll check it out, I haven't dealt with this sort of request before.

Penance
12-03-13, 06:45 AM
Unfortunately for starting characters they are limited to iron strength weapons and armour. You can upgrade the strength of your weapons through the bazaar once you have earned some money, or as a reward from a quest. This would extend from your sword to your armour.

Huh, I thought I read somewhere that a few people started with full steel plate. Is there anyway I could drop the sword from mythril to steel, get rid of all my other weapons, and keep the armor, too? Since the sword is also taking up an ability slot I figured you'd be a bit more lenient about it.

Hysteria
12-05-13, 03:58 AM
Ok, I'll treat it as an ability.

Can you clarify the speed of Andvallian Eugenics? The part where you have written 'unsettling speed and grace', does he have greater agility as well as speed? If he does, then it would count as two abilities.

With Agares, can you put a limit on how often he can summon the horse? 3 times a day would be standard, at the moment the horse shouldn't be able to kill anyone outright unless they are unlucky.

With the Eugenics, Steed and Sword you will be quite a bit over. Even if your Sword skill was only the strength of steel (creating a mythril sword is something you might get a level 5 doing). You could nerf Eugenics completely and cut the sword back to being masterwork steel and you'll fall back into the power level.

Penance
12-05-13, 03:28 PM
Ok, I'll treat it as an ability.

Can you clarify the speed of Andvallian Eugenics? The part where you have written 'unsettling speed and grace', does he have greater agility as well as speed? If he does, then it would count as two abilities.

With Agares, can you put a limit on how often he can summon the horse? 3 times a day would be standard, at the moment the horse shouldn't be able to kill anyone outright unless they are unlucky.

With the Eugenics, Steed and Sword you will be quite a bit over. Even if your Sword skill was only the strength of steel (creating a mythril sword is something you might get a level 5 doing). You could nerf Eugenics completely and cut the sword back to being masterwork steel and you'll fall back into the power level.

Edited. Everything should be good now. I reduced Andvallian Eugenics to just being super graceful which is an incredible feat for a man of his size. Think of Brock Lesnar charging somebody with a back leg thrust kick at full speed, missing, diving into a roll and then springing to his feet with the grace of a cat and turning on his foe. (The kind of shit Brock Lesnar can do, but it's still phenomenal to see, and peak human).

I removed all the weapons except the sword which I turned into masterwork steel and added the 3x per day clause for the summon.

He all good now?

Also any word on getting my level and money transferred?

Hysteria
12-07-13, 04:57 AM
Looks all good to go!

Thanks for your patience. I'll PM someone to switch your exp, unfortunately I can't edit it. You get 50% of the xp of the other character, which is then locked and can't be used again.