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MysticMathius
02-01-14, 01:19 PM
Name: Mathias Arkus
Race: Mystic
Age: 23
Height: 6'
Weight: 173 lbs
Eyes: Green
Hair: Black

Appearances:
Mathias has pitch black hair with emerald eyes that almost glow with intensity. Wears a dark blue, almost black cloak with countless hidden pockets inside. He is pale, with a dark menacing voice. Despite this, he is kindhearted, and will never harm innocent people unless truly necessary.

History:
When Mathias was six, his mother had a sudden miscarriage, causing his unborn brother to die in the womb. He later learned that this was due to a Mythic woman named Kyla. Though he hated her for it, he knew that she meant no harm to anyone. He vowed to never hurt innocent people and to help those in need. When he was sixteen, against his parents' will, he chose shadow magic. His parents disowned him from the family, because they felt he had dishonored their family name.

Skills:
Expert swordsman

Abilities:
Mystic Protection- Any hit Mathius takes is blocked, and causes glass shards to burst from his body, provided the weapon is iron or the spell is of a low level. The shards only do enough damage to startle a enemy who is not expecting the glass. If the attacker expects the shards, it doesn't do much to help Mathius.

Shadow Persuasion- Mathius can turn any shadow into a weak ally, pulling it from the ground and into reality. Each shadow can be killed with any blow, and a shadow can only be "persuaded" twice per thread. This ability is more of a diversion, as is Mystic Protection.

Equipment:
A iron sword, double-edged
An iron dagger that is sharp enough to cut through bone with ease

Hysteria
02-01-14, 11:36 PM
Hi and welcome.

At the moment both your abilities are quite high level, similar to ones that you'd fine in level 6 or higher characters. You will need to down grade these somewhat. For Mystic Protection this could be limiting it to providing a minor amount of protection (enough to stop iron arrows, low spells, etc). Likewise the shards shot out would need to be quite weak given it explodes in every direction.

For the shadow summon you might need to come up with another ability to replace it. Being able to summon something (without the ability to channel the damage back to them) is quite strong.

MysticMathius
02-05-14, 09:33 PM
I tried to tone it down a bit. Is this good for my level?

Hysteria
02-06-14, 06:39 AM
Alright, those look ok.

Last thing is the equipment. For starting levels we only go up to iron. Could you change your sword to Iron? The same goes for the dagger.

Max Dirks
03-06-14, 01:06 PM
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