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Cruzians
04-01-06, 02:28 PM
Name: Quake
Age: 20
Race: Half Elf/Half Vampire
Hair Color: Black with gold streaks
Eye Color: Golden brown
Height: 5'11
Weight: 170
Occupation: Explorer

Personality: This character is torn between light and darkness. The elf in him respects all life, but the vampire in him allows him to kill for survival. The elf in him says peace onto other's, while the vampire in him says if they refuse peace, slaughter them all. He respects strength and power, and dispises weakness and ignorance.

Appearance: He has bronze skin, the ear's of an elf and the fang's of a vampire. His hair is worn in a ponytail. He's well built, but has a small frame. As far as dress goes, he's very much into hip hop. He wears baggy black jeans, a peanut butter custom biker jacket, peanut butter timb's and black and peanut butter batting gloves.

History: His mother was an elf and his father a vampire. His father was a servant in a vampire covenant. During a war of the race's, he saved an elf and took her as his bride. They feelin love and had Quake. Now Quake travel's the universe hoping to gain knowledge and power. He travels with a young dragon named Bleak, which he found stranded on a distant planet he was exploring. Quake took him in and became his parent/friend/mentor. Now he explores the land of althanas. His ship malfunctioned and he was forced to land here. The ship will take some time to fix, plus he has taken liking to althanas,so he has decided to stay here for a while.

Skills: All these skill's are based on a scale of 1-10. Once level 10 in achieved, the skill will become super. It will them become super 1, super 2, ect. This character has the ability to communicate with animal's, elven speed(1, 40 mph), vampire strength(1, strength of 2 men).

Equipment: Retractable staff. Nothing special about it now. It's no more powerful than a steel pipe. It will power up when character levels up.

Familiars: Bleak-baby dragon, no bigger than a horse, wing's, black scales, basic dragon fire breath(1, powerful enough to destroy a tree), strength(1, strenght of a bear). He speaks and is very serious most of the time. He has the ability to fly for short periods of time, 20 minutes tops. This is equal to level(1).

Cyrus the virus
04-01-06, 02:37 PM
I'll just keep my personal opinions on the side for this one.

If he has a familiar, don't you think you should mention how and where he got it as well? Perhaps in his history?

Also, your character's skills are too powerful. People who've trained for their entire lives have a difficult time hitting a target using a bow and arrow from a hundred yards away. The speed isn't too bad, neither is strength, but a complete immunity to pain is a bit much for level 0. Choose two racial advantages and keep them, but take the rest off until you level up.

Cruzians
04-01-06, 04:55 PM
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Cyrus the virus
04-01-06, 04:58 PM
Okay, the edits are fine... But how does he travel between worlds like that?

Cruzians
04-01-06, 09:02 PM
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Cyrus the virus
04-01-06, 09:08 PM
Approved.