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hoytti
02-12-14, 11:06 PM
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Name: Sorish Mon Larsh

Age: 60

Race: Coralian

Gender: Male

Hair Color: None

Eye Color: Pure Pink Reflective Eyes.

Height:8'7 / Varying

Weight:300 lb / 5 lbs

Appearance: Coral Complexion, Blue with Green in the cracks of his Coral Body, a 4' tall Coralian Crown. He wheres a white scaled hooded robe over his Blue and Green Coralian Armor. He is muscular without his robe and armor. His neck looks like his veins are popping out due to Roxi. His ears are like coral rings and he has a beard shaped coral under his chin. Sorish's Crown has been cut into the shape of a King's Crown. The crown plus his true height brings him to 12'7. The crown is never considered in a Coralian's true height. His arm length reaches his knees. His fingers are long and bony.

History: Sorish Mon Larsh was born in the Northern Sea. He had grown up with both his parents who were ex-adventurers. They would tell him stories of many of the adventures they had in the open sea. The one place that they never visited but whish they had was the land. Few Coralaians have set foot on dry land. there have been stories of the beings who lived above the waves but nothing more. After his 30th birthday he had his Adult Ceremony. His ceremonial challenge was to find a Coral Worm who would bond with him. It took him three weeks to find a Coral Worm willing to bond with him. He was about to give up when he found Roxi. him and this coral worm soon found out that they made a great team. Roxi was one of the wisest Coral Worms of her class. She also loved adventures. As soon as Roxi bonded with Sorish she discovered that he was going to be an adventurer and agreed to be his companion. After a few more weeks to really get to know each other Sorish and Roxi headed back to the ring of adulthood where Sorish's family and friends were waiting. As soon as he got into the ring it started to glow. It was yellow at first but then turned green. After it turned green his father stepped forward and asked him what profession he was going to choose. After telling his father that he was going to be an adventurer, which didn't need any for of higher education his father smilled and handed him his Coralian Necklace which had a walking stick and a pair of boots carved into it. After he told his parents goodbye he headed of to have adventures of his own.

Skills:

Tracking – Can track most animals easily especially in the water.

Abilities:

Water magic:

Aurora Awakened - Aurora, the spirit of water, has chosen Sorish as one of her hosts. She has recent awakened and because of this Sorish no longer needs to chant in order to use his magic. He just has to think of the spell and it happens.

Water Bubble - A 4 cubic meter bubble of water appears for 1 minute 30 seconds and can be used twice per hour.

Water Gun - When used in water makes a strong current but when used on land requires Water Bubble and shoots it out at the enemy.
moderate damage, about as much as a really strong punch, he can sustain it for 10 seconds, and can use it 4 times per hour

Breathing Bubbles - 2 Bubbles that he places around his gills when he leaves the water.
Sustainable till he enters water. No attack or defense Stat Change. Just makes him able to breath.

Rain Dance - Requires Water Bubble. When used the Water bubble changes into a creature which dances around Sorish protecting him from fire and small projectiles for 4 seconds. After this time it returns to being a bubble and it begins to rain in 1/2 mile radius from Sorish. Rain lasts for an hour.

Needle Rain - 1/3 mile radius from Sorish is turned into water needles which punctures any armor under steel for 2 seconds. Can only be used once a battle.



Gills - For breathing under water

Coral Regeneration- While wet Sorish heals at 2mm every ten seconds via Coral Regeneration, lasts as long as he is wet. While dry it takes about the same amount of times it would any normal human. While active, ability absorbs water at at 2x normal rate drying him five seconds after water source stops.

Sea Creature - Due to being born and raised in the water, Sorish isn't as easily effected by it. The only way water effects him is if there is a really strong current in the water, However the flip side is that he is slower on land due to his slime hardening constantly.

Coldblooded - Coralians are cold blooded so they are extremely slow in the cold, however, they will not hibernate.

No Groin Shot - Coralians do not reproduce from the groin so they are not effected any differently from any other parts of the body being hit.


Combat Stances:

No Kamaes - Five stances that are used in Japan.

Jodan - The sword is raised above the head with the tip pointing back and the blade facing up, in readiness to strike. Sorish doesn't usually use this style often as it has a low defence

Chuden - The left foot is slightly behind the right with the left heel slightly raised, both feet are parallel, the hips are straight forward, shoulders are relaxed, spine is perpendicular to the floor at all times. The center of gravity should be centered between both feet. The Sword is held with the hands in front of the waist, with the tip of the weapon pointed at the opponent's throat. As a basic sword stance Sorish uses this one when he has to both defend and attack.

Geden - The sword is held out in front of the body pointing at the waist in kendo, or at the knee or sometimes the ankle. They are crouched down to help stabilize themselves looking almost like a rock. This is Sorish's favorite stance as it is good at defence and whenever he finishes a block it becomes an offence.

Hasso - The left foot is forward, and the sword is held pointing upright with the hilt in front of the right shoulder. The blade slopes slightly to the rear. When cutting, the sword is raised above the head. Sorish only uses this stance when he is surrounded.

Waki - The length of ones own blade is hidden behind their body only exposing the pommel to the opponent. That is the only requirement, how you stand and strike is up to you. This is Sorish's third favorite stance as it makes it impossible for others to ell how long your sword is or where you are going to strike.

Sorish's Special Stance - Sorish has his own stance as well. He lowers his body like Geden but keeps on his toes so that he can move quickly. He also has a spinning motion where he angles the sword horizontally and spins cutting all his enemies around him down.

Sorish's Normal Style - Sorish doesn't like to just charge into battle. Instead, he strategies then enacts the strategy.

Red Death - A disease that changes Sorish's fighting style to pure aggression. It appears when someone angers immensely. His eyes change from Reflective Pink to Reflective Red, thus the name. It has no effect on his stats or strength. All it does is send him on a rampage which is deadly to both friend and foe alike. He just constantly slashes at any creature he sees until there is no one left or someone can calm him down.


Equipment:

All equipment steel grade
Coralian Short Sword - A 6' sword made out of hardened coral.

Coralian Knife - A 3' knife made out of hardened coral.

Coralian Battle Armor - A set of plated Body Armor that is made out of hardened coral

A Coralian shield - A 7' diameter Shield that is made out of hardened coral

Coralian Water Magic Book.

Armor Information: The Scale Robes are like Studded Armor but due to the fact that they are made to be flexible they can't protect against blunt weapons. The armor underneath does that for him. His Hardened Coral Armor is as strong as steel.

Familiars:

Roxi


Age 50

Species: Coral Worm

Gender: Female

Eye color: Black Eyes

Height: Varies

Weight: 5lbs

Skills:
Tracking

Grabbing Things

Abilities:
Stretching Body

Enhancing Sorish's abilities / skills to 150%. Lasts 30 seconds. After 30 seconds they both are left winded. Can only be activated if she is connected to Sorish.

Sanderia


Age: 8

Race: Coralian

Gender: Female

Hair Color: None

Eye Color: Reflective Pink

Height: 4'5

Weight: 120

Appearance: Coral Complexion, Green with Blue in the cracks, a 1'3 Coralian Crown.

Skills: Novice Sword Fighter

Abilities:
Water Magic
Water Bubble - Can make a small water bubble about a cubic centimeter for ten minutes

Water Gun - When used in water makes a strong current but when used on land requires Water Bubble and shoots it out at the enemy.
moderate damage, about as much as a light punch, she can sustain it for a second, and can use it 2 times per hour

Equipment: Wood Practice Sword

Armor Information: White Robe made of Cloth

Max Dirks
02-14-14, 02:53 PM
Hey hoytti, before I can approve you I need need a more specific description of water trap. I need to know how it works and how you plan to use it. Right now, it's so vague that you could do alot of damage with it. Similarly, water rain with 1/3 mile radius, combined with rain dance and water trap (based on how I think it works) is simply too powerful. I'll need you to limit it to a short radius within a specific effective distance (like it can effect a ten foot area; Sorish can summon it while up to 1/3 miles away).

Let me know when you've made changes.

hoytti
02-14-14, 03:46 PM
How is that? If it is too powerful, I will need a suggestion on how to weaken it.

Max Dirks
02-14-14, 04:46 PM
It's too powerful because you're level 3 and it's unblockable. Yes, a person with a shield can lift the shield or someone can find cover, but someone without a shield and without cover can't really dodge unless they can teleport 1/3 of a mile. Even folks with ice rain (which I'm equating it to), still have a limited area of attack.

At level 3, I can't let you summon four creatures plus your two familiars, either.

hoytti
02-14-14, 06:03 PM
okay, updated.

hoytti
02-17-14, 07:24 PM
Bump

Max Dirks
02-19-14, 09:13 AM
Please don't bump threads while awaiting approval.

Hoytti, you're still coming in a bit strong, even when considering your character's reduced land speed. The easiest ways to fall within your level would be to either a) make it so your abilities are not innane (i.e. require chanting), b) reduce the area of rain dance back to where it was initially (i.e. 1/2 mile) or c) reducing the defense of your pet fish. Obviously, I'll entertain other ideas, but these ones jumped out at me.

Max Dirks
03-20-14, 10:41 AM
This is being archived as not approved.

Please send me a message if you'd like the profile reopened.