Kamile, Elvin Ranger

[Kamile]

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Name: Kamile Oltorain
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Elvin
Hair: Silver
Height/Weight: 6'1- 155lb
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Personality: Kamile is a honorable and riotous person, placing the well beings of others well above his own. Risking his life for others even when it looks bleak. 'This is his major flaw'

Appearance: Kamile is one of the captains of the Aurial Army, and as such carries a lot of presence in his home nation.

History: To be done

Skills: Spotting- When Kamile had first begun his extensive training he was thought to be a spotter. Being a spotter help him notice creature/characters hiding or hard to see. Sometimes a creature isn’t intentionally hiding but is still difficult to see, so a successful Spot check is necessary to notice it.

Archery- Kamile finished out his training in the are of the Bow & Arrow, and quickly became addicted to it. Practicing night and day to hone his passion, even surpassing his mentor in the art. Able to hit a target with near perfect accuracy from over 200 yards away. -Master-

Blades- As any good archer knows, always have a back up plan. If an enemy gets too close Kamile is proficient with a small dagger/dirk. -Intermediate-

Crafting- Kamile has had to spend time alone in the wilderness and has had to craft his own weapons before. He is more than capable of making himself a new bow with arrows if the right materials are around.

Abilities: Eagle Eyes (Enhanced Vision)- Through extensive train in his younger years Kamile had honed his eye sight immensely. He has near telescopic vision(3x distance) and limited night vision (2x Seeing in darkness). This paired with his excellence in archery he is a match for nearly anyone. -Passive Ability-

Simple Feats(Enhanced Dexterity)- Kamile is able to preform feats that a normal person could not. Among other things he was top of his class in climbing, leaping and has great balance. Roughly Kamile can hoist himself up anywhere he can gain a footing, this includes his lightweight gear. Also he is able to leap from tree to tree or roof to roof 7 feet in distance.(2x Dexterity.)

Rallying the Troops(Area Enhancer)- If Kamile is accompanied by NPC or other characters he can enhance their endurance to allow them to withstand just that much more of battle, often even giving them the edge in their fights. (1.5x Endurance to NPCs, 1.5x Endurance to Characters/Himself.) {Not active until stated, once active only effects those who were around him/that he had rallied. This lasts for NPCs 1 post Playable characters 2 posts.}

Equipment: - Lightweight Leather Chest, arms, legs, and boots
- Cloth Hood and Cloak
- Oak Long Bow (15 iron Arrows)
- Small Iron Dagger

[Max Dirks]

Hey, welcome.

Two things: 1) I'll need you to drop your character's deterity to 2x maximum. Please also describe what being "fantastic" means in comparative terms, as well. 2) You can boost NPCs to 1.5x endurance at level one, but you need to specify a duration. For example, 1 post, 15 seconds, etc.

You can have 15 iron arrows to begin with, if you want. If you want a better material, you can take that 200 GP over to the bazaar and purchase something a bit stronger.

Make the changes and I'll get you approved!

[Kamile]

Done, Ill just make my story in the forms.

[Max Dirks]

That looks fine, but I'm still looking for something a bit more tangible when describing dexterity. When I say comparative, I don't mean a comparative to something equally intangible like "top of the class," but rather specific measurements or vague similes. For example, these are acceptable specific measurements: "can leap x feet in a single bound" or "can react quickly enough to avoid a jab at x feet." There are acceptable vague similes: "climbs like a spider on a web" or "always lands on his feet, like a cat."

Basically, you can say "top of the class" if you give some comparative measure about what is normal for the class :)

[Kamile]

Ok I guess I was vague how about now?

[Max Dirks]

Looks good.

Approved!