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Enriler
06-15-14, 03:52 AM
Name- Enriler Tiquez
Race- Bolian
Age- 243
Gender- Male
Hair Color- Dark Burgundy
Eye Color- Brown
Skin Color- Dark Green
Height- 8’4”
Weight- 290 lbs
Languages- Common, Bolian
Occupation- Blacksmith
Weapon- 4’6” Iron Broadsword
Armor- Thick Leather

Personality:
Enriler is a quiet individual. He does not seek out fights, unless he believes that it will bring him closer to finding a way home to his family and home world.
He talks to his phoenix more than to other people.

History:
Enriler Tiquez was a bright young Bolian with seventeen brothers and sisters.
When he was fourteen years old, Enriler began learning the skill of Metalworking. His teacher, Leonder, believed that it is vital that every man knows how to protect his family. Over the next fourteen years Enriler continued his Metalworking training as well as learning how to fight. Being one of the largest Bolians, he focused his fighting on his strength. Not relying on acrobatic techniques or fighting styles, he instead used his brawn and strong weapons. He developed a collapsible iron bow staff as well as a 4’6” Broadsword.

When Enriler turned thirty-six, he learned that an asteroid was headed towards the planet of Boliar. A witch doctor visited him and said he would send him back in time to save and spare his planet. After a long enchantment, Enriler was knocked unconscious. He existed in a state of constant thought, though unconscious. He woke up with his thirty-six year old body 207 years later, in a city he had never seen before, in a place known as Alerar.

After several years of struggling to survive in Alerar, Enriler, having learned the common language, decided that he could no longer waste anymore time in the city. He must journey, searching for a way back to Boliar, searching for a way to save his planet.

Skills and Abilities:
Skills:
Recognizes physical fighting techniques and is sometimes able to Block or catch kicks or punches that are directed at him. Is not used to or easily able to recognize Magic attacks.
Advanced Metalworking (Blacksmithing)- With the proper equipment, Enriler is able to build swords, axes, and most weapons. However, Enriler has not yet learned how to build armor.
Slow but strong fighting
6' Collapsible Iron Bow Staff
Novice Guitar Playing
Master Knot Tier
Dehydrates Easily
Carries 3 1/2 Gallon Water Pouches
Enhanced intelligence due to 207 years of constant thinking and analyzing

Abilities:
Strength- Enriler is very strong based on his size. His focus on strength has caused him to neglect speed and fighting techniques. It is difficult for him to land a hit on an appointment, but when he does it often knocks them out. After eight heavy swings, Enriler becomes dehydrated to the point where he needs a gallon of water.

Equipment:
6’ Collapsible Iron Bow Staff
Guitar
3 1/2 Gallon Water Pouches
4’6” Iron Broadsword

Familiar:
Enriler Befriends a miniature phoenix. It can spit lava at a distance of 13 meters, burning through iron or any weaker material for two seconds before evaporating. This can be done only three times a day.

Hysteria
06-17-14, 08:46 AM
Howdy!

First off, starting items need to be iron, can you change the Staff and Broadsword? You can upgrade it at the bazaar or as quest rewards.

Second, I think you want to use your Metalworking to create stuff in threads, in which case it should be moved to skills. In some cases players use it to interact with the bazaar, but I don't think that you wanted that (correct me if I'm wrong).

With the familiar, it counts as another ability, and any abilities that it does also counts as one. So, the phoenix and its ability to spit lava would count as two, giving you a total of four (assuming metalworking is a skill). The same goes for the Strength ability:


Strength- Enriler is very strong based on his size. His focus on strength has caused him to neglect speed and fighting techniques. It is difficult for him to land a hit on an appointment, but when he does it often knocks them out. He is also able to withstand a large number of hits depending on the strength of the opponent.

Strength counts as one, taking hits another ability. Can you limit it to one?

Enriler
06-17-14, 03:06 PM
Adjustments have been made, I moved metalworking to skills, and I limited the "Strength" features, also I removed the thermal vision ability in order to keep the phoenix and it's lava spitting ability (I removed it's healing ability)

Hysteria
06-18-14, 08:00 AM
Ok, it'll be strength, phoenix and the lava attack. You'll have to limit the lava burning through metals, and put a use limit per day (say three?). Giving it a higher than normal starting level, it'll be able to melt through iron. How does that sound?

Enriler
06-18-14, 08:16 AM
Okay, so the Phoenix can only melt through iron. And yes, 3 times a day works.

Hysteria
06-18-14, 08:36 AM
Looks good dude. Get out there and raise hell.

Approved!

EDIT: Edited for change

EDIT2: Finished