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Flensor
06-28-14, 12:03 AM
Name: Flensor Abriell

Age: 25

Race: Orc

Height: 6 ft./182 centimeters

Weight: 183 lbs/83 kgs

Occupation: Blacksmith Apprentice

Personality: Seemingly emotionless, Flensor holds a calm but stoic demeanor. His fears had been melted away, leaving him to be nearly fearless in the face of any challenge or obstacle that found itself in his path. He believes everything can be settled with actions, with some thought behind it. But behind his demeanor lies a kind man that is sympathetic towards all of life, good or evil.

History: Flensor accepts Corone as his home, marking it as the place where he began to form consciousness. From the beginning of his awareness, he knew a friendly human Blacksmith as a father. His father was a well-respected man in the area that he was known and was loved by many. A few years after Flensor’s father had begun teaching him how to use the weapon forge, his father admitted to rescuing him from a war ridden battleground that was home to many Orcs and had killed his parents in battle. Flensor, growing distant and cold, began to respect his human father less and less each day, not noticing that the only father he knew formed a sickness that had deteriorated his health. By the time Flensor noticed the man’s illness, it had been far too late to save or care for him.
Near his father during his last moments, Flensor listened to his father’s dying wish. He was told not to be chained down to one place and travel the world in search of treasure and fame while carrying his Human father’s name as his surname, Abriell.

Appearance: Broad shouldered, pale white eyes and softly pale green skin. Has slightly muscular arms and chest from hours hammering down objects on an anvil. Several burn marks cover his hands and arms, marking his lack in proficiency with hot objects on the anvil.

Skills:
Hammer proficiency – Flensor has worked with a hammer for many years and has grown fond to the feel of it in his hands. He prefers to carry a hammer with him at all times, making him prefer the hammer as his weapon of choice.

Abilities:
Strength – Many years behind a weapon forge doesn’t come without physical benefit, Flensor hits moderately harder than an average man would.
Fire resistance – Due to being scorched by the flames of his own projects, Flensor has developed a slight resistance towards the feel of fiery properties, being able to withstand more “Fire damage” than the average man.
Durable – What Flensor lacks in speed he makes up for in his tolerance of pain. Flensor’s skin is tough, making it harder for weapons to penetrate his hide like skin.

Equipment/Weapons:
Common Iron Hammer

Alyssa Snow
06-28-14, 11:32 AM
Hello and welcome!

You have a good profile set up there. I want to get you approved right away but need just a few more details from you. When you say that he can withstand more "fire damage" could you put it to scale? For example, if a red hot iron were to burn the average man and send him into a fit of pain, Flensor would only flinch and swear.

Could you do the same for the toughness? Like if a blade were to cut an average man to the bone, it would only provide Flensor with a moderate laceration.

And similarly for strength. If the average punch from a man would stagger, Flensor's would outright knock them down. Let's also say he can bench a solid 300lbs for good measure.

Add those minor details in and let's get you going!

Flensor
06-28-14, 01:24 PM
Name: Flensor Abriell

Age: 25

Race: Orc

Height: 6 ft./182 centimeters

Weight: 183 lbs/83 kgs

Occupation: Blacksmith Apprentice

Personality: Seemingly emotionless, Flensor holds a calm but stoic demeanor. His fears had been melted away, leaving him to be nearly fearless in the face of any challenge or obstacle that found itself in his path. He believes everything can be settled with actions, with some thought behind it. But behind his demeanor lies a kind man that is sympathetic towards all of life, good or evil.

History: Flensor accepts Corone as his home, marking it as the place where he began to form consciousness. From the beginning of his awareness, he knew a friendly human Blacksmith as a father. His father was a well-respected man in the area that he was known and was loved by many. A few years after Flensor’s father had begun teaching him how to use the weapon forge, his father admitted to rescuing him from a war ridden battleground that was home to many Orcs and had killed his parents in battle. Flensor, growing distant and cold, began to respect his human father less and less each day, not noticing that the only father he knew formed a sickness that had deteriorated his health. By the time Flensor noticed the man’s illness, it had been far too late to save or care for him.
Near his father during his last moments, Flensor listened to his father’s dying wish. He was told not to be chained down to one place and travel the world in search of treasure and fame while carrying his Human father’s name as his surname, Abriell.

Appearance: Broad shouldered, pale white eyes and softly pale green skin. Has slightly muscular arms and chest from hours hammering down objects on an anvil. Several burn marks cover his hands and arms, marking his lack in proficiency with hot objects on the anvil.

Skills:
Hammer proficiency – Flensor has worked with a hammer for many years and has grown fond to the feel of it in his hands. He prefers to carry a hammer with him at all times, making him prefer the hammer as his weapon of choice.

Abilities:
Strength – Many years behind a weapon forge doesn’t come without physical benefit, Flensor hits moderately harder than an average man would. A training dummy hit by the average man would only move slightly from the man’s hit, If Flensor hit the training dummy it would instantly fall to the ground and would be in need of minor repair. Flensor can lift approximately twice his body weight (366 lbs./166 kgs).
Fire resistance – Due to being scorched by the flames of his own projects, Flensor has developed a slight resistance towards the feel of fiery properties, being able to withstand more “Fire damage” than the average man. If a man were to reach into a fire he would normally cringe in pain and tear up, Flensor would only shake his hand to cool it off while grunting in pain.
Durable – What Flensor lacks in speed he makes up for in his tolerance of pain. Flensor’s skin is tough, making it harder for weapons to penetrate his hide like skin. A normal stab of a knife would penetrate a man’s skin easily leaving a deep stab wound, an attack like this towards Flensor would only go in half as much leaving a shallow cut.

Equipment/Weapons:
Common Iron Hammer

Alyssa Snow
06-28-14, 01:38 PM
Excellent! Approved!

Now get out there and start posting!