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black shadow
07-03-14, 11:02 AM
Previous sheet HERE (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?25908-Black-Shadow-(level-1)&highlight=)

Updates in Purple

Name: Black Shadow
Age: 27
Race: Human
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Black
Height: 6'3"
Weight: 195 lbs
Occupation: Archer

Personality: Doesn't talk at all, to communicate uses sign language. Values others lives over his own.

Appearance: wears all black and his face is completely covered, you can't see any part of him at all.

History: He was once a prince of a powerful country. He was out with his brother, training his archery skill, when they were attacked by a group of soldiers from an enemy of his kingdom. In their retreat, Black Shadow's brother, Elinther, was killed. When Black Shadow made it home his father blamed him for the death, and sentenced him to a fight. Black Shadow accepted it, but when his opponent faced him in the arena, he turned and would not fight. He would have had to kill his younger brother. Black Shadow ran, trying to escape. In his attempt his throat was slit, severing his vocal cords, and causing him to be unable to talk. He then made his way into Raiaera.

Skills: Sharpshooter - extremely good with bows, hasn't missed since he was 10
(this was at the ability area before, but I realised it's not really an ability.) Stealth: can remain hidden fairly well

Abilities: Strength: due to heavy training, and the draw strength of his bow, he has strength 4x that of a normal human. this allows a punch of his to knock a man down, break weak bones, and deadlift 600lbs
Speed: He is 4x the speed of a normal human due to his training, allowing him to run at speeds of 60mph and react quickly to avoid attacks.
Agility: His Agility is 4x that of a normal human, allowing him to dodge attack with ease, moving his body is ways no normal person can. (but no jelly arms, that's just weird.
Hearing: His sense of hearing is 4x that of a normal person, allowing him to hear a whisper from 10ft away
Balance: His balance is 4x that of a normal human, allowing him to run across a rope suspended over a cliff with ease, even firing his bow while doing so.
Eyesight: His eyesight is 4x better than a normal human, allowing him to see something from 60ft away that it normally takes someone 20ft to see.
smell: Whenever he chooses, Shadow can smell an aroma from 75ft away that would normally take 20 ft. He can also use smell to track opponents (4x smell)


Equipment: A yew bow with steel tipped arrows, the shaft of the arrows are hollow steel giving him the ability to use them as close range weapons without them breaking.
A steel sword with "Courage" carved in the elvish tongue of Raiaera.
A book with a list of names of wanted people throughout Althanas. (both earned here)
Two diamond daggers bought HERE (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?27458-A-New-Weapon)

Erikar
07-04-14, 07:22 AM
I'm afraid you're a bit too strong for a level 3. Please choose an ability or two to nerf.

black shadow
07-11-14, 02:50 PM
I don't know what I was thinking when I posted it originally! Edited it to be a bit less powerful. how's it look?

Erikar
07-12-14, 08:28 PM
You're cool, bro. Go have some fun!

Approved.

Hysteria
11-14-14, 04:57 AM
Re-opened!

Can you tone down your description for speed and strength slightly?

black shadow
11-14-14, 07:17 AM
okay, so I did research and found an average man could run around 15 mph, so 4x would be about 60, as I have changed.

Also after research, an untrained man at Black Shadow's weight can lift about 155 lbs, bringing 4x up to 620, so i left it at 600, though i am unsure what to use as a description on what i can do with that strength.

anymore changes I need, Hyst?

Hysteria
11-14-14, 05:08 PM
The only other thing is dodging bullet. While it may be indeed possible, it would depend on a lot of factors (including the type of bullet). Can you change it to something like 'can react quickly to avoid attacks'?

black shadow
11-14-14, 05:14 PM
There you go Hyst. Anything else?

Hysteria
11-14-14, 05:19 PM
Perfect, thanks heaps.