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Azami
02-21-15, 04:32 PM
Name: Azami Wren
Age: 15
Race: Human/Gorgon
Height: 5ft, 11in
Weight: 146 lbs
Occupation:
Personality: Happy and bouncy with friends and party members but cold and ruthless and maybe a little unstable on the battlefield. She loves chocolate and plum-filled rice balls, her favorite animals are snakes. Her favorite color is blue.
History: She prefers not to talk about her family, at all. She doesn’t like talking about her past or where she’s from most of the time unless she’s really comfortable with you and even then it’s like trying to get water from a rock. All in all, don’t ask her.
Appearance: Short black hair, red eyes and fair skin
Skills: She is proficient in martial arts and herbalism. She had above average skills in swordsmanship and archery. Okay knife throwing skills. Is incredible at dodging and evading attacks.
Abilities: If she has direct eye contact she can stun an enemy for about a minute before she gets too tired and has to drop it.
Equipment: For formal events she wears a purple kimono with a pink obi, and pink sandals. For informal events and everyday things She wears a White tanktop under a black cardigan-like coat, grey shorts and black sneakers.
Weapons: Two tanto, one katana, some kunai, 13, 20ft long spools of wire.
Items: A thin silver ring that grants her semi-invisibility if she is standing in shadows and is completely still.

Max Dirks
02-25-15, 12:29 PM
Hey welcome.

Sorry for the delay, we were using your thread for training, but our operations administrator has been out. Just a few minor things for you. Could you please:

List your stun ability in terms of posts rather than minutes for now. A minute is quite a bit of time in a battle. Reduce the number of kunai you have to 5, and list the materials of each weapon? We allow you to start off with iron.
Please edit your changes into your profile then post a reply when you're finished and we'll get you approved!