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Philomel
03-13-15, 06:25 PM
So ...

I am now ending my third year of university, and have got my fourth and final before me. For it, however, I am in the lucky position of being able to essentially hand in 8000 to 10,000 words worth of a creative writing folio rather than write a dissertation. The thing is, however, I have to specifically apply for this. In this purpose I need to submit a folio of short pieces of work, up to 1000 words by 27th March (two weeks today).

I already have some flash fiction pieces I wrote recently as well as my poetry. What I am wondering is, would anyone be willing to help be an editor/critic/general nice person and read over some of the stuff I am thinking of submitting and help me get it to a university standard?

For a hint of what I am going to submit here is a link to my writing blog Small Golden Wings (http://smallgoldenwings.blogspot.co.uk/). Most of it is poetry up there, the stuff I read out monthly at my local spoken word event. If you want specifics, my favourites on the first page for submission are "Gentle Sun (http://smallgoldenwings.blogspot.co.uk/2015/02/gentle-sun.html)" and "You Told Me (http://smallgoldenwings.blogspot.co.uk/2015/01/you-told-me.html)." Pretty much every poem has a story behind it.

I also have written recent flash ficition I may submit. I have to dig it out of folders but yeah ...
(Here's a bit of random prose called "Other Things (http://smallgoldenwings.blogspot.co.uk/2014/05/other-things.html).")

Anyway, anyone willing to just look over some quick poems and comment? That and/or prose. I can submit a mixture of both.

Flames of Hyperion
03-13-15, 06:58 PM
Bummer, where was that option when... oh aye, science degree ^^.

I'm not much of a poem person myself, and neither am I certain what 'university standard' entails, but I'm happy to offer my editorial eye for any prose you might be considering. Do let me know, and the very best of luck!

Philomel
03-14-15, 05:02 AM
Flames,

You would literally be my person of the week/month/half a year if you did this for me. I have a number of weird short fiction pieces I wrote as part of a writer's forum some time ago, that are maybe my best examples of short work.

I will make a google doc, so you can look at them and others can too. In general, I need comments, criticisms, everything!!! This is the main thing I have been leading up to in the past three years of university so its really important to me.

Philomel
03-14-15, 05:14 AM
Okay, some short fiction. All are made to be bite-sized etc. If all of them are rubbish I can write something new.
They are all google docs with comments allowed.

Demographics (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GDTfL5kZXiKv1VSay0OIGaJ8q92-y2E8SVHOoJSDn3c/edit?usp=sharing) (2012)

A bit of a farce ... Shadowtown (https://docs.google.com/document/d/178FgSQuumiHsnuewfwBz5tayTaCeIgnRszsfMnWa8aY/edit?usp=sharing) (20.... no idea)

I Continue On My Way (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TgiMrtRHKkZrk0EdSXZPadzzBL3WLmm46hX5j3B7xDg/edit?usp=sharing) (2012)

A bit mroe recent - last month in fact as part of my Creative Writing Societies "flash fiction February."
In the Forest (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mX_Q5iwtGVKvpAENef2Xq0HzMxPLY1fcXEysPCCxEdM/edit?usp=sharing)

I am also working on a short piece called Entrance or To Entrance