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Revan88
06-10-15, 01:59 PM
Name: Izdaan

Age: 120

Race: Undead

Hair Colour: White

Eye Colour: Yellow

Height: 5’10

Weight: 8 stone


Personality:

Izdann’s personality is somewhat unhinged, it has been this way since he died, leaving his mind shattered and disturbed. He has become very unpredictable as his now rather insane nature makes him prone to speaking out abruptly and generally being rather odd.

This is in contrary to that fact Izdaan is actually rather intelligent, his knowledge of alchemy and life in general remains. So while his lack of empathy and dark sense of humour have become at the forefront of his mind, parts of humanity may exist behind what he has become.

History:

Izdaan’s past is one of hubris, Izdaan lived a solitary life with his only companion being a talking ginger cat named Mondo. Izdaan spent most of his time at his house on top of a mountain, experimenting with various chemicals, herbs and toxins. With the aid of his vast library Izdaan was a capable alchemist, sorcerer and also an expert in gardening, it was something Izdaan liked to do in his spare time when not trying to destroy the world.

Most of Izdaan’s experiments often ended in disaster, causing damage to his lab and killing his assistants which meant he had to acquire new assistants from the nearby village, which didn’t please the mayor of the village very much. Eventually the mayor and the villagers grew tired of Izdaan’s insane behavior, his lack of empathy with any form of life and the fact they were very jealous of how nice Izdaan’s garden was.

They formed an angry mob, pitchforks included and stormed towards Izdaan’s house. Despite all the shouting from the mob Izdaan didn’t pay any attention to them and continued with his experiments, carefully mixing two extremely dangerous chemicals together. When the angry mob barged through into his house and marched to Izdaan’s lab he still didn’t pay them any attention. It was only when the mayor shouted Izdaan’s name at the top of his lungs, that he turned around. Izdaan still wasn’t fazed by the sight of the angry villagers because he knew had an ace in the hole, he had just finished combining the two chemicals together into a vial.

“This is the thanks I get for bringing a little joy and humor into your worthless lives” Izdaan said with an insane smile, the angry mob slowly walked towards Izdaan, he threatened to throw the vial and blow everyone up. The mob stopped in fear giving Izdaan the chance to head towards the back exit. Izdaan started to slowly move towards the exit, everything was going smoothly till Izdaan stepped onto Mondo’s tail causing him to trip and fall, the vial fell out of his hand and onto the floor.

Upon hitting the floor the vial detonated causing a massive, volatile explosion killing everyone, this should have killed Izdaan but instead the chemicals in the vial mixed with some of the other herbs in the lab and bonded into Izdaan’s body. The chemicals restored Izdaan back to life but as an undead creature, Izdaan looked around his now destroyed lab and saw shadows of the villagers painted across the walls. However Izdaan wasn’t the only one who survived the explosion, Mondo also survived the blast but is now an undead talking cat. Mondo is still rather upset that his master stepped on his tail and blew up their home.

Izdaan decided it was now time to move on and explore the world, acquire new data for future experiments. Izdaan took everything that wasn’t damaged or destroyed and left his old home behind, Mondo who was still angry with his master decided to tag along because he nowhere else to go.

Appearance:

Izdaan’s hair is a tall white Mohawk, while his eyes are a dark yellow. His skin is a pale grey colour because of after his many years as an undead creature. Izdaan stands around 5’10 tall but his bodily structure is quite thin he appears to not have a lot of weight on him as he no longer requires to eat.

Izdaan wears a long brown leather jacket with no sleeves, the jacket is very worn and has various stitches to keep it from fall apart. The jacket has two pockets on either side but the left one has a hole in it. The jacket has four small iron buckles that connect the two sides but Izdaan only uses the middle two buckles, underneath the jacket is black wore shirt with grey patches stitched on.

Across Izdaan’s chest is a dark brown strap with various iron buckles, this strap connects to the Void Bag that Izdaan carries. Izdaan wears leather pants that are torn at the bottom and holes on the right leg near the knee. Around his waist is a worn leather belt that has a holster for his iron knife, as for his feet Izdaan wears broken leather boots with no laces.

Skills:

Alchemist
Izdaan spent years learning various techniques in alchemy, learning to combine different elements, herbs and chemicals to create dangerous potions. However Izdaan has a pretty decent memory when it comes mixing chemicals, he knows which ones go well together.

Sorcery
Along with alchemy Izdaan also spent time learning black magic, even the forbidden kind. However compared to his knowledge of alchemy Izdaan’s abilities in casting spells is still very limited.

Abilities:

Vials

Izdaan carries various vials in his bag, these can be used on himself or thrown at an enemy, current vials Izdaan uses are:

(Izdaan can create 12 vials a day, 4 of each vial)

Yellow Vial: Firebomb: Izdaan creates and throws a vial contain unstable, volatile mixture of chemicals. If Izdaan throws at enemy it will a splash of nearly 1ft and leaves a puddle of burning liquid on the floor, anyone caught in the blast will receive first to second degree burns.

Green Vial: Poison Smoke bomb: Izdaan creates a vial containing deadly toxins and throws it a nearby enemy's feet. A green like cloud starts to spread out from the point of impact and spreads out up to 2ft, anyone caught in the cloud will start to feel the effects of the poison. The symptoms of the poison in the vial are dizziness, vomiting, hallucinating and stabbing pains throughout the body. (The poison can only last for 2-3 posts). Izdaan is immune to the poison within the cloud because has built a immunity to it.

Blue Vial: Black Slime Bomb Izdaan creates a vial containing some thick black slime, when thrown at a enemy the vial explodes and unleashes the black slime. Upon impact the enemy will get tangled within the thick slime trapping them, the more the enemy struggles against the slime the stronger it will become (The slime will melt away after 1 posts. The slime is also quite flammable so when struck any form of fire the slime will catch alight and can cause second degree burns.


Equipment:

Void Bag:

This is Izdaan’s greatest achievement, aside from creating his talking cat, the Void Bag was a magically created satchel that houses its own dimension. Within the bag are all the chemicals, herbs, poisons and vials that Izdaan needs to complete any task or use as weapons create the various vials he uses. (As listed above)

Mondo the cat also makes his home within the Void bag and pops out every now and then to annoying Izdaan.

Vials (Each vial contains different chemicals)

As listed above, Izdaan carries these with him to use when necessary. These vary in colour but are otherwise just empty vials until prepared for use.

Iron Knife

A short serrated knife that Izdaan uses both to hurt people who get too close and to cut herbs from the ground.

Cards of Fate
06-10-15, 02:12 PM
Hello and welcome to the site! My name is Fred and I will be your freindly neighborhood staff member helping you out today.

I need you to describe the damage on the fireballs and give me a uses per day on it.

The vials are a cool concept but unfourtunately count as three seperate abilities and you can only have three at level one. Would you be willing to flesh out the damage and uses for one vial and "Lock" the other two (by wrapping ooc tags around them) for level two?

If you have any questions feel free to Pm me or ask for me in chat!

Revan88
06-10-15, 03:02 PM
Am unsure how to flesh out the damage for the vials, the major concept of my character is his alchemy skills and using the different vials is key.

I have changed the fireball ability to be used once per day.

Revan88
06-10-15, 04:54 PM
I have changed the abilities, I have removed the fireball and dismemberment abilities, I have decided to keep all three vials as separate abilities. Maybe later on as this character gains experience and levels up he will gain those abilities back. I hope this meets approval now.

Cards of Fate
06-10-15, 05:49 PM
I still need you to describe their effects. How big is the explosion? How many times a day can you use these vials?

For example...

Alchemical Vials- 10 times a day Izdaan can whip up an academical bomb in the many vials he keeps on his person.

Firebomb- Izdaan creates and throws a vial of a potently burning oil that explodes on impact. It has a splash radius of 1ft and burns for one post before petering out. Deals light fire damage such as a first degree burn.

etc

Revan88
06-11-15, 02:19 AM
I have started to add in a few details about the vials but I haven't finished yet.

Revan88
06-12-15, 02:18 PM
I have finished the changes, is it ok now for a level 1 character

Cards of Fate
06-12-15, 03:48 PM
Can we reword your poison immunity to state hes buolt an immunity to that poison? Poison immunity itself is a high powered ability.

The stun on the fire bomb is too much on this level simply becuase it adds another ability to the mix...

I like the slime but can you reduce the duration to 1 post for now?

Thank you! Sorry if I sound like Im nitpicking...

Revan88
06-12-15, 04:11 PM
I have made the changes you have suggested

Cards of Fate
06-12-15, 04:33 PM
Sweet man, looks good!

Approved!