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Necrofim
11-03-06, 11:33 AM
Name:Necropolis
Age:170
Race:Elven
Hair Color:Light Brown somewhat golden
Eye Color:Black
Height:5'2"
Weight:120
Occupation:Freelancer

Personality: Neutral, Friendly, Talks well with others, Cooperates if needed, Likes to go out on his own.

Appearance: Stands 5'2", Has a Long Elven Blade with a golden handle and Silver Blade, Wears Steel Plate Armor, Steel Elven Helm (sometimes), Golden Gauntlets, Golden Boots, Steel Plate Leggings, Golden Lightish Brown Long Hair, Black Eyes, Pointed Ears, Long Cape

History: After waking up in a world of peace, Necropolis left his parents to train and become an elven warrior. During his training he noticed that he had a great skill with swords and daggers. He acceled at his training and soon was enlisted in his army. They went out to a battle against the evil accursed vampires. While he was in the battle he slaughtered all vamps in his path. He soon became a Top General. He was given Steel and Golden armor and had a special elven sword crafted for him. He was on a mission to find and destroy any evil remaining in the area. When he killed the few remaining vampires in the area he went back to camp. Only to find that the other generals were waiting to try and attack him. He fought them off and fled. He sailed to Althanas. There he is making his own legend. He still has his golden armor and his elven sword. He moved his family to Althanas so he could protect them if need be. Now he is working as a freelancer. Stop by and talk to him if you want he will always be there to help you for the right price.

Skills: Swordplay allows him to be an average user. Daggers allows him to do the same as swordplay but with knifes and daggers instead. Stealth allows him to be a lot more stealthy so he can sneak up and kill easily.

Equipment: Steel Plate Armor, Golden Gauntlets, Steel Plate Leggings, Steel Shoulder Plates, Golden Boots. Elven sword made of a silver blade and a golden handle, and an Elven Hunters Knife.

Cyrus the virus
11-03-06, 04:05 PM
Please don't send me messages on MSN to check your profile. I'm almost ridiculously active, so there's no need to do that.

Change swordplay and dagger skill so that he's an 'average' fighter with each. This can improve as you level up.

Your equipment can't be enchanted so powerfully. The sword, especially, is simply too powerful to be approved.

Golden armor is a lot softer than steel armor, so you might want to change that around. I suggest you make it iron or steel :)

Necrofim
11-03-06, 04:38 PM
hey i changed it and ill stay with the golden armor

Cyrus the virus
11-03-06, 06:23 PM
Approved, remember how weak gold is.