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Silverline
12-22-15, 07:54 AM
I'm overriding the last character.






Full Name: Hanuh Rose Icebreaker-Tabor.
(Hanuh Tabor)
Gender: Female.
Race: Human (with some elvish blood)
Age: Terrible Two's! Look out, Althanas!
Height/ Weight: Tater tot sized. So cute!
Eye Color: Brown.
Hair Color: Blond.
Skin Color: Fair.
Occupation: What? She's just a kid, sheesh...


Appearance:
She's a cute little toddler with adorable, curly blond hair and big brown eyes. Her clothes are fluffy pink.

Personality:
Um... she's a toddler? Who causes trouble and property damage? Uh... yeah.

History:
She's but a teeny tiny child of adorableness, so she has little history to talk about. She certainly seems to have a journey ahead of her though, looking at her parents and current care taker.

Hanuh was born to two young members of two powerful families. Originating from Eiskalt, Julius Tabor and Ashla Icebreaker with the shock of the sudden start to a family. Once she arrived though, the two fell in love with her. Unfortunately, this would not last long. Only newly wed, one of Hanuh's parents would meet his early death at the hands of the one and only Madison Freebird. Following Tabor's death, Icebreaker (who kept her virgin name) mentally snapped. When Hanuh was only about a year old, her mother left her too.

Icebreaker gifted her child to her guardian and close friend Daisuke Shield. Daisuke would take her to her grandmother's home, Raiaera, and take care of her himself. In the years ahead, it is certain she will become the skilled fighter her parents were. Hanuh Tabor will leave a lasting impact on Althanas for sure.

Abilities:

Tabor Abilities:
Abilities Hanuh has inherited from her father's lineage.

- Warmth of Eiskalt: the Tabors have long been considered the fire and warmth of Eiskalt. In this, they themselves have become immune to the element they control: fire. Hanuh has followed in suit. Hanuh is immune to any burning and scorching caused by flames. She has yet to develop her lungs against smoke, but that is a trait discovered later in life for the Tabor family.
- Flamethrower: Hanuh can control fire up to the size of a German Shepard from up to thirty feet away. She can fire these flames to forty feet away. Yes, a toddler can do this...

Icebreaker Abilities:
Abilities Hanuh has inherited from her mother's family.

- Ice Cast: Hanuh can develop ten pounds of iron strength ice every twelve hours. Yup, she's some freaky little girl...


Skills or Traits or Whatnot.
- Icebreaker Eyes: Whenever she feels strong negative emotions, Hanuh's eyes will resemble chips of ice. Its all a show, folks, it's completely useless aside just showing when she wants her next bottle (or nap?)
- Unusual Emotions: Hanuh has become unusual in her emotions. She'll appear happy and playful for one hour, then the other her Icebreaker eyes are just on and she seems tired. Oh, and she's had raging fits. Daisuke has been deeply concerned with this.
- Toddler: She, uh... baby talks... and she also... crawls... eats, sleeps... um...

Cards of Fate
12-22-15, 11:40 AM
Hey there Ash! I have a few problems at the moment. Complete immunity to an element is impossible at level one no matter which way you spin it. The flame thrower needs a reduced range and I need to know how much it burns on touch!

Ashla
12-22-15, 11:45 AM
Ello, Cards!

Flamethrower: The fire is not made by Hanuh, she cannot create fire under any circumstance. She could get heated fire out of a burning building, candle fire... the damage of the fire is what it was before Hanuh decided to tough it. Also, what would be your suggested range? With her daddy, Julius, he was capable of throwing fire 60 feet away at level one (of course, this was his only ability, so that could be why it was perhaps stronger than normal.)

Immunity: So, Hanuh's immune to fire that causes first and second degree burns, but not third?

Tobias Stalt
12-24-15, 02:43 PM
Hey, Ashla. I'll be taking over to expedite this for you.

Warmth of Eiskalt: the Tabors have long been considered the fire and warmth of Eiskalt. In this, they themselves have become immune to the element they control: fire. Hanuh has followed in suit. Hanuh is immune to any burning and scorching caused by flames. She has yet to develop her lungs against smoke, but that is a trait discovered later in life for the Tabor family.

As Fred mentioned, Immunity at level one is not feasible under any circumstances. Please edit this to a partial resistance.

- Flamethrower: Hanuh can control fire up to the size of a German Shepard from up to thirty feet away. She can fire these flames to forty feet away. Yes, a toddler can do this...

Unfortunately, no, a toddler cannot do this. At level one, that distance is too much. You'll have to cap the strength of the burn because saying "however strong the fire she's controlling is" is too vague, and thus open to exploitation. First or second degree would be fine. Also, please give a number of times this can be used.

If you can edit in these changes for me, I can get you approved.

-Cheers, Tobi.