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kitsune
03-02-16, 09:22 PM
Name: Kitsune Aoimoku

Nickname/Alias: Aoimoku no Ichino no Kitsune; Aoimoku

Age: 10

Race: Fox Spirit

Height: 20” high

Weight: 30lbs

Occupation: Student

Personality: Friendly, hyper, funny, prankster with a big ego

History: Aoimoku is the first blue eyed Fox Spirit. Because of this he is both feared and worshiped in his village. He has no true friends as he is avoided by all the kids his age, either out of fear or respect. The only being inside the entire village to treat him like he is everyone else is the leader of the Kitsune Clan Inari. It doesn’t help that Aoimoku likes pranks.

Appearance: A red fox with an extra long tail.

Skills:

Prankster – Aoimoku has a sharp and creative mind when it comes to pranks. Something he could use to make traps if need be.

Stealth - Aoimoku has learned how to be stealthy. He has learned how to be light on his feet and keep his breath down to a minimum. he has also learned how to hide in every terrain possible in the village.

Abilities:

Fox Fire (School)– Allows Aoimoku to control fire however it also makes him more susceptible to water attacks.

Flash Fire - fire will be expelled by Aoimoku up to three feet away in all directions. This fire will scorch the earth under his feet and leave anyone in that radius with first degree burns.

Fire Absorption – Aoimoku can absorb a campfire worth of fire with little trouble, however, ask him to absorb anything bigger and he could start feeling the effect of the flames in his body.

Transformations (School) – All Fox Spirits know how to transform.

Human Hybrid Transformation – Aoimoku can transform into a human shape with his tail and ears being the only difference. Aoimoku’s hybrid form is that of an average ten year old boy with red hair, fox ears and tail. He wears a kimono that has a print of him running all over it..

Cards of Fate
03-03-16, 01:07 PM
Hello and welcome to the site! Sorry gor the slow reply, I was trying to figure out how to handle your profile the best way possible. As it currently stands you have four abilities when the max we allow at level 1 is three. Your speed, while listed as a skill, counts as an ability. A tip to tell them apart in the future is that skills are things you know, abilities are things that you can do.

To help you fit all you have listed might I suggest the following edit? Perhaps your character should need to absorb fire in order to expel it? This could get both of those abilities in as one, and then in updates you can split them back to two abilities and buff them?

Just a suggestion, let me know what you want to do.

EDIT: In my haste I forgot to mention that if you had any questions feel free to PM me.

kitsune
03-03-16, 10:53 PM
updated

Cards of Fate
03-03-16, 11:41 PM
Looks good, Approved!