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Lucifer
12-22-16, 12:48 PM
Name: Lucifer (Formally Castiel)
Age: 21 (Host) Aeons (Real age)
Race: Ancient Ar'tuel
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Blue (Host) Red (Lucifer) Gold (Castiel)
Height: 6'2
Weight: 184 Pounds
Occupation: Founder of the Order of the Dusk


Appearance

Lucifer is what humans would call handsome. His skin is flawless (unlike other corrupted Ar'tuel who normally have red or black cracks in their skin), his features are soft yet rigged, and his hair is snow white. He has a slightly lean build and is tall for typical humans. The typical Ar'tuel insignia is burned onto his hosts chest. Disregarding the host, Ar'tuel's are ethereal beings that appear to be glowing orange spirits. However once corrupted as Castiel was, their orange turns black, in lucifers case his spirit had turned red, along with the hosts eyes changing from its innocent blue to a bleeding red, being affected by his soul.


History

Castiel was one of the oldest Ar'tuel to exist and was apart of the 'Ancient Order of the tree blood' which was founded by 6 elders. It's primary function was to work on relations between the Ar’tuel and other various races, both ethereal and physical. It was their duty to record the knowledge of the Ar’tuel, and to ensure the race flourished; sending younglings off to spread life and mana to the world as well as be a guide for those who needed it. They did this for many millennia and watched over the earth as it flourished. However, over time, Castiel became fixated on the behaviours of the mortal beings. He witnessed countless wars and struggles, the mortal nature of lying and stealing, everyone seemed to be too fixated on their finite existence and forgot the value of the lives that others held. Those with good hearts were simply destined to corrupted or be taken advantage of.

The more he watched, the more he began to challenge the other elders. The elders however didn't see what he saw, they didn't fully understand how wicked men were. The Ar'tuel used to walk the earth before humans, and as such he felt as though his race was driven out by them, along with the other (what he considers lesser) beings. He believes the Ar'tuel shouldn't hide in fear and live to serve people as pitiful beings who are slowly dying away. This feeling of anger and resentment and love for his own kind was what turned his soul red, and from there his power to heal was turned to harm once his vibrations changed from love to despise. His new outlook was not in line with the Ar'tuels philosophy and as such he metaphorically fell from their grace and became what some mortals would come to call Lucifer. Soon enough he tempted other Ar'tuels to join his cause in the order of the dusk and their souls turned black. With his coven of Ar'tuel and careful plotting, he plans to exterminate all mortal creatures and claim back the Earth which had been defiled by them.

Personality: Lucifer is cunning and charming, his voice is smooth like honey and as soft as the coo of a dove. Everything about him is designed to allure those around him, from his looks to his natural ability as an Ar'tuel. However, this natural allure is just a mask, hiding his lustful megalomaniac thirst for power and desire to end all mortal life. Lucifer never lies but bends the truth, and is virtuous in his own right.


Skills

Tracking: Exceptional
Lucifer is able to connect himself with the earth and communicate with it. Natural tracking signs such as broken twigs, footprints, toiled earth, and more, are all especially apparent to him.

Charisma: Exceptional

Emotional perception Exceptional
Lucifers ethereal nature allows him to connect with and feel the souls of other people, thus he is more sensitive to the emotions of those people. Things such as lying, sadness, pain, are natural for him to pick up. (This does not mean he can read minds, but simply feel the same emotions others do)

Abilities:


Ar'Tuel Abilities

Presence of the Elder Lv:1 (Passive)
As an Elder Ar'Tuel, Lucifer possess a profound aura which brings on a sense of serenity and peace to those around him. His love for the Earth is most clear as this part of himself is still uncorrupted. His lifeforce spills into the flora around him and invigorates them. This also works on animals, but is less effective on mortal beings like humans. Though while less effective on people, it still is strong enough to influence a sense of trust (However the people influenced are still free to make their own decisions). The stronger this aura becomes, the greater influence he has over the people around him. However, this aura is lost when using its corrupted counterpart. This influence can be used once every 3 posts.

Corrupted At'tuel Abilities

Will of the Corrupted Lv:1
As the first corrupted Ar'Tuel, Lucifers natural aura of peace and serenity are completely polarised. In an instant all living things near him become terrified, a type of fear that makes the heart skip a beat and make knees buckle as well as causing mass hysteria. The strength of this aura depends on the will of the person under its effect, those with strong wills will only show mild physical reactions such as flinching, sweating, and an increased heartbeat, while those with weaker wills will simply crumble. This allows Lucifer to pacify weaklings who'd waste his time. This aura can be used once every 3 posts.

(Will of the corrupted will pacify people of a lower level than Lucifer with fear. Those of an equal level will show physical signs of fear such as the ones listed but will not effect their performance. Those of a higher level wont be effected)

Despise of the Corrupted Lv:1
The natural ability to heal those around him is lost in corruption and polarised. Now instead of healing those he touches, he causes them intense pain comparable to that of a black widow bite, at the area touched. This pain is also not just illusory, the body of the touched is physically harmed, burning the surface area of the site touched and causing scaring. At its current stage, the damage only occurs at the site of the touched area and creates 2nd degree burns. This requires skin to skin contact to take effect, and only when it is willed. Lucifer can use this on a person once every 4 posts with the effects lasting up to 4 posts, and on a different person after 2 posts.

Equipment: N/A

Familiars: Dusk Ravens tend to flock near him. Dusk ravens are typical ravens apart from a dark red tinge to their feathers and bright crimson eyes. They're typically an omen of death, and a sign that Lucifer is near. Purely vanity.

Shinsou Vaan Osiris
12-22-16, 12:54 PM
Well hey again! I'll be looking over your profile today. Once I've had a read i'll post here to let you know whether I can approve this straight away or whether you need to make some adjustments.

Don't worry though; we'll have you up and running very soon!

Shinsou Vaan Osiris
12-23-16, 06:57 AM
Ok. I've had a chance to look at your profile and I have a few questions:

1. Can your emotional perception be used to sense the locations of people or read minds in any way? At the moment I am classing this as an ability, and because you are using the word 'exceptional' to describe it I am struggling to allow it at this level. With further clarification we may be able to do something about this.

2. Presence of the elder is quite vague when it comes to the limitations or parameters of the influence. At level 1 I would be unable to approve this if it meant outright control or even strong manipulation. I also would like to see a usage cap on this: how many times a thread can this be used and how long do the effects last?

3. Will of the corrupted has the same issues as point 2. Please provide clarification and a usage limit.

4. Despise of the corrupted causes "intense or unbearable" pain. Again, at level 1 I think the wording on this is too strong, especially given your other abilities. I also need to know how long the effects last and how many times a thread it can be used.

If you would like an idea as to the sorts of limitations that get approved at this early level, please look at the registration archive for examples of other level 1 profiles that have been approved. This might help you to gauge where your limits should be.

In the meantime, please let me know the answers to the above and we'll work on getting this approved :)

Lucifer
12-23-16, 07:20 AM
1. Can your emotional perception be used to sense the locations of people or read minds in any way? At the moment I am classing this as an ability, and because you are using the word 'exceptional' to describe it I am struggling to allow it at this level. With further clarification we may be able to do something about this.

By exceptional I'm referring to his racial ability being not typical of a normal person, and not that is better than conventional means. For example a conventional way to tell a lie would to pick up on physical ques such twitching, averting eye contact, etc. It does not mean to sense other locations or read mind, but just being able to feel the emotions other people are feeling.

2. Presence of the elder is quite vague when it comes to the limitations or parameters of the influence. At level 1 I would be unable to approve this if it meant outright control or even strong manipulation. I also would like to see a usage cap on this: how many times a thread can this be used and how long do the effects last?

The only influence he is able to have on people at this stage is a sense of trust, they are still free to make their own decisions and think for themselves. Think of it as an emotional technique. If you still need a cap on it I can edit it to be able to used once every 2 or 3 posts?

3. Will of the corrupted has the same issues as point 2. Please provide clarification and a usage limit.

Will of the corrupted will pacify people of a lower level than him with fear. Those of an equal level will show physical signs of fear such as the ones listed but will not effect their performance. Those of a higher level wont be effected. If you need a usage limit then maybe also once every 2 or 3 posts?

4. Despise of the corrupted causes "intense or unbearable" pain. Again, at level 1 I think the wording on this is too strong, especially given your other abilities. I also need to know how long the effects last and how many times a thread it can be used.

I'll remove unbearable and keep intense considering what it does and how close he has to be to use it, It should be painful. The effects last for up to 4 posts and can be used once on the same person every 4 posts, and on a different person after 2 posts. However, considering its a level 1 skill and he only effects the area touched like a handprint.

Shinsou Vaan Osiris
12-23-16, 08:59 AM
Thanks for getting back to me quickly and clarifying your abilities!

The final thing I need you to do is to edit your actual profile with the information you provided above. It seems arbitary but that is the first point of reference for anyone checking your abilities (including yourself) and will help us in future updates.

Hopefully I can then approve this profile! Thanks for being patient.

Shinsou Vaan Osiris
12-23-16, 03:31 PM
I've just had a closer look at your ability for despise of the corrupted and it is still too strong for this level. Internal bleeding and cellular degeneration is a bit much for level 1, regardless of how close you have to be to activate it. The most we would be able to offer are surface burns that scale up to be more effective attacks when you hit higher levels.

At the moment I can't approve the profile, but if you tone the ability down for a short time until you hit higher levels we can approve this and get you going.

Lucifer
12-23-16, 06:59 PM
Ok made all the changes.

Shinsou Vaan Osiris
12-24-16, 02:24 AM
Great! Thank you for bearing with us!

You are now approved!