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Drak
11-22-06, 05:18 PM
Name-Drak Fireheart
Age-14
Race-Demon
Gender-Male
Hair Color-Black
Eye Color-White

Occupation: Bounty Hunter

Appearance

-Drak has the sleek head of a wolf on the body of an extremely muscular upright frame with clawed hands and feet, from which sprouts a long and powerful tail reaching nearly the full length of the body. The body’s skin is completely black and allows no measure of light to escape, the liquid like black mane of hair starts just over his forehead and extends down the skull and continues over the spine. His face is sharp and predatory like a wolf or dragon, the teeth and tongue all completely black with the only spot of light being the eyes that never blink and glow the purest and brightest white. By necessity, Drak has taken to wearing clothes to conceal himself.

Skills

-Body of the Beast: Drak is much larger than most humanoids and is generally superior. His muscles allow him nearly 300 pounds of force at his disposal, he is faster than a human, has sharper reflexes, and improved senses.

Magic

-Distortion: Drak’s body is able to shift slightly so that he appears closer to human with his mouth receding to form a more human shaped visage and retracting dramatically. Overall his form diminishes enough to make him nearly seven feet tall. The change takes a couple seconds to perform but he can revert almost instantaneously.

-Flare: Drak naturally absorbs as much light as he possibly can, storing the light as a potent weapon. Given that he has absorbed a sufficient amount, Drak is able to emit the light in various ways such as a blinding flash or a bolt of superheated energy capable of piercing common woods and leaving moderate burns.

History

-Drak is belongs to one of the many species that exist within the void, a place of eternal darkness from which conjurers will often pull lesser sprites to and bind them into servitude. One such magic user was employed as an apprentice and needed to perform just such a summoning as a demonstration of his worth as a student. He performed all of the writing, alchemy, research, and sacrificing necessary to summon an imp of the fifth caste, nearly the lowest of all denizens of the void, when his fatal mistake occurred. With nearly twenty other apprentices watching him, and not having particularly good nerves in the first place, the apprentice paused too long in the placement of caste and stuttered during the naming portions of the incantation, unwittingly pulling forth Drak instead of the intended imp. Having performed the summoning for the first time, he did not know his folly and proceeded rapidly with the binding ritual, managing only to produce reddish runes on Drak’s wrists, ankles, and neck. It did manage to restrain the brunt of Drak’s power, but he killed all those in attendance with little hindrance. That one unwitting mage had unleashed Drak unto the world.

Cyrus the virus
11-22-06, 06:53 PM
Skills are too extreme. If you want that much strength, you need less speed, not more, at least this early on. Even then, 600 pounds of force is beyond what I think is acceptable. 400 seems reasonable.

Besides that, you be good.

Drak
11-23-06, 12:15 AM
Edited.

Cyrus the virus
11-23-06, 10:31 AM
Also, please make him only slightly faster than a normal human, as he has enhanced senses, reflexes, and some magic.

Drak
11-23-06, 02:29 PM
Edited.

Cyrus the virus
11-23-06, 03:46 PM
Approved.