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Special Forces
11-30-06, 12:36 AM
Name:Leo Milner
Age:18
Race:Human
Hair Color:Black
Eye Color:Black
Height:5'9
Weight:147
*Occupation:

Appearance: Leo has black hair and black eyes. Leo is short for his age. He seems to be royalty but he denies it.

Skills: He is an above average fighter in rapier fighting.

Equipment: Steel rapier with a tin capsule full of very poisonous venom. studded leather armor and full iron mask. The poison paralyzes the muscles around were the sword hit. He carries 6 vials of the poison. He puts it on before every fight. He can only use it twice in a fight

History: Leo was born when day turned night. A philosopher in the village told the whole village of three babies being born on an Eclipse the day Leo was born and two babies were to live one was born in the light and one was born in the dark. Leo was born in the light as royalty he is a prince of a very small country of one city. He ran away from his mansion with 250 gold coins his rapier, his silk shirt,and silk pants and some food. He ended up in a city with a bar named The Peaceful Promenade.

Cyrus the virus
11-30-06, 01:15 AM
Can you please describe the venom? How potent is it? Maybe include how many 'doses' he carries in the vial (if he puts it on his rapier before a fight or something).

Special Forces
11-30-06, 04:44 PM
ok it done and done.

Cyrus the virus
11-30-06, 06:41 PM
The venom is too potent. If someone's hit with the sword on any part of their body, they lose. How about you change it to a kind of poison that paralyzes the muscles around where the sword hits? That would be much more fair, I think, and still be a cool poison to use.

Special Forces
12-02-06, 10:56 PM
Its been changed.

Cyrus the virus
12-03-06, 12:01 AM
Approved.