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Shortie_Chee
12-06-06, 04:19 PM
Name: Shiva Mateus

Age: 105, but 22 in demon years.

Race: Erinyes - a demon crossbreed between a succubus and a male human. The result is always female.

Hair Color: Blue with white highlights

Eye Color: Bluish green

Height: 5'10" (7'2" with wings)

Weight:128 lbs (180 with wings)

Occupation: Mord Sith - a group of female warriors who offer their services as proffesional bodyguards. They are usually recognized by the Agiel that they have with them all the time.

Personality: Shiva is very happy go lucky, having an optimistic view on life and can be described as hyperactive and, sometimes, annoying. But she values freedom of life most of all and goodness to prevail over the world, so she will be extremely violent against those who try and take away that which she holds dearest. In battle her attitude completely changes and she becomes serious and moody.

Appearence: Shiva, like her counterpart Ifrit, is openly demon. She stands at 5'10" and weighs a mere 128 lbs, but her frame is very curvy and sensual. Her hair is sky blue with streaks of white, and her eyes are bluish green with catlike slits for pupils. Her skin, like Ifrit, is what pronounces her inhuman, as it is platinum with blue designs. She wears nothing but a black dress that all Mord Sith wear and her inactive Agiel, which hangs around her neck and between her breasts.

However, she can, at will, open up a pair of black, feathery wings that seem to sprout from nowhere. These wings are big and while they sacrifice her acrobatic skills they make up for it in flight and hovering. She can fold and unfold these at anytime.

History: Shiva was born and raised in the same village that Ifrit Obsidian was. The pair grew up together and eventually became more than just friends as they were the only demon children in the village and were viewed by many as freaks and outcasts. However, unlike Ifrit, she was raised by her demon parent, a succubus cast out from her own family for her love of a human. While this act was not illegal, it was certainly looked down upon as mutiny or treason.

Shiva's mother hated how demons were looked upon as evil beings and thus she taught her daughter to raise the cause of Good. However the succubus did teach her daughter also the ruthlessness of the demons and now her daughter is more violent than Ifrit, who was raised by his human mother.

Shiva and Ifrit were together for about 27 years when one day he came to her holding a sword she had never seen before. He told her that he had to leave the village and that he had to leave alone, but that he would come back soon for her. She protested at first, but finnaly gave in when he slipped a ring on her ring finger and asked her to be his fiance. She accepted, but cried as he left.

A couple years passed, but he never came back. Infuriated by his absence but also worried about him. Finnaly she decided she would go after him.
But as she was departing his own mother stopped her, saying that an attempt to go after him was useless. His mother never liked Shiva and said that she was a bad influence upon him, but this was something completely different. His mother said that he would be gone forever and to forget about him cause he was never coming back.

At first Shiva was enraged and attacked his mother, but she was thrown back with magic. His mother, to her surprise, was a powerful sorceress. Overcome by depression and a broken heart, Shiva tried suicide by throwing herself off a cliff several miles away from the village. Her body, though, prevented her from dying, and she was merely injured and rendered unconcious.

She was picked up by a wandering Mord-Sith who didn't know where the demon woman had come from but that she was heavily injured. The mord-sith treated Shiva's wounds and took care of her until she was fully concious. Once concious, however, Shiva didn't know what to do. Her whole life had been about one thing, and that was Ifrit.

Desperate to restart her life, she became a Mord-Sith and trained under the woman who had rescued her. She is still a mord-sith to this day, but has yet to have her Agiel enchanted, which is the final mark of becoming a mord-sith. And as she travels, she searches for her one love, knowing he is still out there...

SKills: Shiva posseses some martial arts skills, including tae kwon do and judo, as it is required in becoming a Mord-Sith. However, her real skill lies in acrobatics, and she can perform (with out her wings) flips and twisting cartwheels and such with ease. She also has a little skill in wielding a dagger, but it is below average.

She posseses enhanced speed, strength, and stamina, but only to a limited degree. For example, her speed as if she was running would be slightly faster than a normal human, as if she were a sprinter. Her wings also allow to fly at speeds of 20 mph, but only for short, quick bursts before she tires. The magic in her wings, though, allow her to hover indefenitely.

DarkIce: She posseses power over a shadow element, hers being ice. She has had a good amount of practice in using her skill and uses it without hesitation.
Shiva's darkice has the special ability to drain the strength out of any organic thing it touches, but only a small amount of strengh at this point. However, her darkice does notihing to undead creatures or and it is completely dissapated if a blast of light is used against it.
Using darkice costs Shiva "mana", or the inner energy that is stored within her. Although it replenishes with time, if she is not careful she can run out, leaving her body weak and nearly helpless.

Level 0 spells;

Darkice Dagger: Shiva creates a dagger of about a foot and a half in length and an inch in width made out of darkice. However it is only about as strong as iron and can be broken with a well-time smash. to compensate for this she can always create another one as long as she has enough mana, but only one at a time at this level.
COST: Low.

Frost shield: in order to protect herself Shiva can conjure up a shield roughly 2' in diameter and hold it with her hands. The shield, like the dagger, is only about as strong as iron.
COST: Medium.

Equipment:

-An Inactive Agiel: the mark of a mord-sith, this red, steel rod is about a foot in length but when active it is extremely deadly. It is able to create boils and warts with a single touch and when pressed into a man's ear it is able to cause death. However, Shiva still has a long ways to go before her Agiel is enchanted.

-A black dress: This outfit is worn by all Mord Sith.

-Ifrit's Engagement Ring: A ring given to her by Ifrit shortly before he left. It has a red-blue stone set in the center.

((This profile was helped written by Seth Rahl so if you see some of his style in this writing it is his.))

Witchblade
12-06-06, 08:00 PM
Do not reference another person's profile in your own, it just makes it confusing. Explain moves and abilities as they are to the character, not in comparison to someone else's character, please.

Change the 26-28 mph to enhanced speed; she can run slightly faster than that of a normal human.

Either your skill with your dagger or your martial arts needs to be below average, the other one can be average.

Make those changes and then I'll look it over again.

Shortie_Chee
12-07-06, 12:11 PM
I made the changes like you said. sorry about the references so much to Seth Rahl's character, I wanted to make them similar so I took some stuff from his (with his permission). The dagger skill was already below average, but I changed it so it says that now.

I'm surprised you didn't say anything about the wings, because I personally thought they were a bit too much. So, is there anything else that needs to be changed?

Witchblade
12-07-06, 05:54 PM
I was leaving the flying and the magic alone until you made the first changes so I could see if they needed to be adjusted as well.

You can make references to Ifrit in your profile, but don't base skills and abilities off of him, especially when you say things like 'having the strength of Ifrit's hellfire'. That just complicates things when you could just give it a strength reading yourself.

Change the 35mph to 20mph and then that should be good.

Shortie_Chee
12-08-06, 06:44 AM
done and done. Thank you!

Witchblade
12-08-06, 06:50 AM
I have cleaned it!

Before it was all dirty, but now I have wiped it clean so it shines.

Be gone with you and populate Althanas with your many quests!