EmpressAstrid

[EmpressAstrid]

I would really appreciate it if you could look at my character and approve her. Thank you.

[Witchblade]

You have to post your profile in order for me to approve it. ^^

If you're not sure what it is you need to do, just look over some of the other character profiles that are in the registration archive and check out the registration threads we have posted here in this forum. Feel free to pm me or contact me on AIM/MSN if you're still confused after looking through all of that though.

[EmpressAstrid]

Full Name: Empress Astrid Sworstorm
Race: Elite Vampire
Age: 10, 000 years looks around 30 years old
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Crimson red
Eye Color: Dark red
Skin color: Caucasion/very pale
Height / Weight: 5'9/160 lbs
Language(s): Drow, French
Occupation: Empress of Isia
Weapon: She does not need a weapon to fight, and if she did, she would perfer not to use one.
Armor: None
Skills / Items: Skills Writing Reading Manipulating metal Pyschic spells Pyro Kenetic energy Basic Informati
Power Group(s): Malice

[EmpressAstrid]

Sorry..Here is more descriptive profile...

Basic Information
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Name: Empress Astrid Swordstorm
Age: 3 million years old, looks 32 years old.
Gender: Female
Marital Status: Single
Birthdate: July 20
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Personality
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Very intelligent
Wise
Mature
Serious
Sometimes cruel
Arrogant
Insenstive
Quiet
Stubborn
Somewhat selfish
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Slaves
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None at the moment
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Talents/Hobbies
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Reading
Writing books
Has writen and published a number of books
Speaks Drow fluently
Speaks French and English
Dancing
Singing
Playing the piano
Ruling
Reading Minds
Posession
Truth powers (ability to make people tell the truth)
Pyschic
Invisibility
Pyro kenetic powers
Ability to control the dead
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Things she likes
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Roses
Chocolate
Candy
Pain
Torture
Sadism
Slaves
Men
Women
Books
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Background History
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She was abandoned by her mother and father when she was only 3 years old. She was very mature for her age and brought herself to the orphanage to explain her situation. Throughout her time in the orphanage she got picked on because she was different. She spent most of her time reading and becoming more and more intelligent by the passing year. When she was 16 years old she had discovered that her parents abandoned her because there was a war going on between werewolves and vampires, and her mother (the first female vampire ever to exsist and the Highest Elder of all Vampires) didn't want her involved. Her mother in the time Astrid was at the orphanage founded herself an empire. Called Isia Empire, here is where Astrid will live with her mother. Astrid did live with her mother and father and was very happy. As the years went by and she was now a grown woman, she began to have feelings and thoughts of tormenting and destroying the lives of others, insanity. She went through many insane asylums across the empire, but it was no help, she'd always escape and be found with a mangled corpse in her arms. Her mother one day died of a terrible disease and her father went into madness and had to be put to death as he was in no position to rule, so of course Astrid was to be made empress of Isia. She made a wonderful empress, always treating others with respect, but one day she was blackened by an unknown reason which caused her to become cruel and violent. Please be careful when communicating with her, she can be very manipulative .

[EmpressAstrid]

Thank you for helping me.

[EmpressAstrid]

Basic Information
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Name: Empress Astrid Swordstorm
Age: 3 million years old, looks 32 years old.
Gender: Female
Marital Status: Single
Birthdate: July 20
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Personality
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Very intelligent
Wise
Mature
Serious
Sometimes cruel
Arrogant
Insenstive
Quiet
Stubborn
Somewhat selfish
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Slaves
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None at the moment
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Talents/Hobbies
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Speaks Drow fluently
Reading Minds
Posession
Truth powers (ability to make people tell the truth)
Pyschic
Invisibility
Pyro kenetic powers
Ability to control the dead
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Things she likes
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Roses
Chocolate
Candy
Pain
Torture
Sadism
Slaves
Men
Women
Books
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Background History
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She was abandoned by her mother and father when she was only 3 years old. She was very mature for her age and brought herself to the orphanage to explain her situation. Throughout her time in the orphanage she got picked on because she was different. She spent most of her time reading and becoming more and more intelligent by the passing year. When she was 16 years old she had discovered that her parents abandoned her because there was a war going on between werewolves and vampires, and her mother (the first female vampire ever to exsist and the Highest Elder of all Vampires) didn't want her involved. Her mother in the time Astrid was at the orphanage founded herself an empire. Called Isia Empire, here is where Astrid will live with her mother. Astrid did live with her mother and father and was very happy. As the years went by and she was now a grown woman, she began to have feelings and thoughts of tormenting and destroying the lives of others, insanity. She went through many insane asylums across the empire, but it was no help, she'd always escape and be found with a mangled corpse in her arms. Her mother one day died of a terrible disease and her father went into madness and had to be put to death as he was in no position to rule, so of course Astrid was to be made empress of Isia. She made a wonderful empress, always treating others with respect, but one day she was blackened by an unknown reason which caused her to become cruel and violent. Please be careful when communicating with her, she can be very manipulative .

[Witchblade]

It's a lot easier if you don't keep posting the same thing, or different stuff, and just edit your first post. It makes the thread much more neat and easier for other people to read your character profile if they ever want to look it up.

All of your characters abilities/skills/talents need to be described, there has to be limits to what she can and cannot do with them and you need to put in that description. Keep in mind your character is only level zero, so making her three million years old is not that great of an idea, since she'll be rather weak.

As an example:

Reading Minds (Otherwise known as Telepathy) - This ability allows her to at will break into the minds of other people and search out any kind of information within. She can also listen to their thoughts and and see exactly what they are feeling.

Keep in mind because you are level zero your ability may not be as strong as this.

The more abilities you have the weaker they all must be to keep your character balanced with other people who are also level zero. You can drop invisibility, the only person to ever achieve that here is level 11, you're not going to get it at level zero.

Possession is too strong an ability for you to have at this level as well and the ability to contrl the dead can be kept but will be limited, you'll only be able to control one dead body at this point.

Alright, so flush out your abilities, edit your first post this time please, then post and tell me when you're done. I'll take a look at it again and see if anything needs to be changed.