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Kinslayer
12-17-06, 11:47 PM
Okkee.. So.. shoot me its my first attempted at trying to make a character.

Oh yeah I am changing the format of your thingy so it makes sense why he acts like that or looks like that..

Name: Frost (???)
Age: appears 20ish
Race: A fucked up elven
Hair Color: white with hues of light blue.
Eye Color: peircing blue
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 170lbs
*Occupation: Water Monk

History: Frost didnt always go by the name of Frost. Frost was once an elven, however, as an infant he caught a rare disease which deteriorated his health almost to a point where he would die. His parents, at the time, were healers proficient with the use of water in order to heal people. They lived in a frigid area of Salvar, and when Frost was at the brink of death, they used their magic to trap him in a regenerative ball of ice and water. Frost stayed in this ball for quite a while, so long that his parents died, of natural causes. The ball did not keep him from aging, however it did slow down his rate of aging even more. The effects of the disease and the amount of time hes been in the water-ice-ball made it so that the water changed him, and gave him abilities beyond that of a normal elven. Thus, he is a fucked up elven.

*Personality: Frost doesn't know a language because he was frozen in a ball before he could learn a language. With other people, he will act as a sad child as he essentially is a child. He can feel other peoples emotions, and will respond to them with what he thinks is right. Frost doesn't know what he is, but would like to find out and possibly find others like him. Which he may, or may not ever find. Because he is a freak.

Appearance: Due to the changes the water has presented him with, not only does he maintain basic elven form and racial abilities. But, the pigmentation of his skin is a light light blue. He has an athletic build to him. He wears a black shirt thats very fitted to his body, and black pants that allow for free movement of the legs. As well as a belt, which his chakrams hang off of.

Skills: Aside from racial abilities.. That elvens usually have light hieghtened senses and increased agility.

Light Control of Water Element - Shortly after he regained consciousness Frost, with the aide of his familiar, learned that he inherited some abilities with water. At the moment its very light, and he does practice to have greater skill with it. But he can manipulate water and move it around as he wishes.

Lesser Healing - He can heal small wounds, burns, and other ailments with his control of water.

Frost - His hands can emit a cold energy that will freeze the moisture in the air. That will then go in the direction the cold energy is pushing towards.

Note - His water abilities are weaker during the day and stronger at night. This is due to the lunar pull. He also cannot emit frost from his hands when he is dehydrated.

Equipment: Chakrams - his weapon, has some practice with it.. Made of steel. he has two of these.

4 canteens filled with water..

5 knives. Made of steal. He holds them on his belt, or on a belt on his arm, or in his boot. Mainly used for those emergencies..

*Familiars: Simone - A black flying cat with minor telepathic abilities. Simone comes from a long line of cats with wings and their duty was to serve Frost's family. Simone is usually the one reading Frost's mind, and communicating for him. Telepathic abilities also include force fields. Weak force fields as she is still young for her kind, but they do protect from harm. Force fields can only protect from one hit at a time, then the dissipate.

Letho
12-18-06, 06:06 AM
Alright. First off, you have a pair of empty Appearance/Personality fields up beneath the basic info. It might be best if you removed those.

Next, you need to elaborate on racial abilities. There is no definite set of racial abilities here, so you need to specify what's that all about. I figure it's just heightened senses, slightly better agility, the usual elf stuff, but it needs to be mentioned.

Also, you need to state the material (steel or iron is fine) of your charkrams and knives, and how many Frost has.

Lastly, for now the force field that Simone can conjure should take no more then a single moderate hit before going down. Like all abilities, you can strengthen it as you level up.

Kinslayer
12-18-06, 06:46 AM
Hmmm okee. Thanks for looking it over..

Letho
12-18-06, 07:42 AM
I assume "chakrams" is plural for chakram, so that would mean he has more then one. If it's two, you have to specifically say it's so. Same for the knives. How many is "some"? I think five is a nice fair number.

Kinslayer
12-18-06, 01:09 PM
Oh right sorry. ^_^_^

Lemme edit.

Letho
12-18-06, 01:15 PM
Looks good now. You are approved! Welcome to Althanas.