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Omegastar
01-10-07, 01:34 PM
Name: Omega (Shunpo)
Age: 600 (looks 17)
Race: experiment
Hair Color: orange
Eye Color: blue
Height: 6’2
Weight: 180lbs

Personality: Omega makes no friends cause his first attempt ended up his them killing his creator. Omega is mellow headed. and is almost never angered the only thing that angers him is the strong praying on the weak.

Appearance: Omega looks like a wealthy man in his Black robe he has pieces of cloth permanently wrapped around him to cover the marks from the experiments on him. He wears black trousers with a black muscle shirt. His arms are completely bandaged up leaving his hands (which look perfect) in plain site.

Skills:

Near death save: (unwilling) When Omega is near death he will lose control of his body and a ‘Spiritual presence’ Omega has figured it is Ferin’Sha takes over and fights for him increasing his speed by 1.5x and strength by 1.5x

Flash step: If Omega can get a flat foot on any surface he can travel 10 feet in a blink of an eye. He can not get closer then three feet to any opponent and he cannot strike any Person Controlled Character while engaged in a flash step.

Equipment: wears a black robe that feels like it floats on top of his skin rather then touch it. And he also has Ferin’Sha.

Sword: Ferin’Sha is Omega’s sword. Ferin’Sha is a soul inside the sword and acts as a magical sword, which grants speed and strength when Omega is near death.

History: ((finally)) Omega was created by a scientist looking for the perfect soldiers. Omega is made up of blood from a legendary swordsman and blood from a legendary mage. he was then put into a tube filled with some growth liquid and left in there tell he was 17. he was originally planned to stay in there tell he was 20 but something very wrong happened in the lab.

The Scientists other experiments turned on him after they had gained a consciousness. Omega on the other hand was designed flawlessly, he was awakened to protect the scientist. When the 6 other experiments entered the room the scientist through Omega’s Ferin’Sha at him. Omega then grabbed his sword and asked all his brothers what they were doing.

“Alpha, Beta, Epsilon, Delta, Centurion? What are you guys doing? This man made us and were his servants.” Omega said as he noticed Centurion disappear then reappear twenty feet away from where he originally was. Omega now didn’t care he used his own flash step technique and appeared right behind Centurion as he stabbed him through the back. Dropping him to the floor and then going after Delta and Epsilon.

Omega dispatched of those two easily seeing as he himself was made to out do these guy’s. Omega cleaned his blade off of Delta’s robes as he heard the scientist scream in pain. Omega shot around to see a blade through his chest. As Alpha and Beta popped up and made a evil grin in Omega’s direction. This angered Omega. Omega then appeared behind them and grabbed both their heads and smashed them together sending blood brains and guts everywhere.

Omega then tended to the Scientist’s injuries and left. And when he approached the front door 2 more guys’s arrived and beat the shit out of Omega and knocked him out. He was then put into his Tube again, where he currently is right now sitting…waiting…for someone to stumble across this abandoned lab and set him free.

((First thread I am in someone will have to open my Tube and set me free. (Npc most likely will)))

INDK
01-10-07, 01:42 PM
Welcome to Althanas. I'm sorry, but we're going to have to work on this profile a bit before I can approve it. First of all, you can not have a magical sword that makes you as strong as a level 2. Also, Flash Step is going to have to go. Lastly, I would like to see some history, at the very least a paragraph.

Omegastar
01-12-07, 11:39 AM
umm before i edit i have a question can i tone down the stuff instead of completely removing them because i would really like to keep this stuff and make for interesting fights.

INDK
01-12-07, 09:23 PM
You would have to do a LOT of toning down, but you are welcome to try. We want to keep our level 0 characters fairly weak on Althanas. Keep in mind that once you gain 2000 EXP points, you'll be able to add another skill.

Omegastar
01-13-07, 10:35 AM
Editted i think that should be enough toning down to get me accepted.

INDK
01-13-07, 09:58 PM
You did a pretty good job here, and if you make one more change, I'll approve this. Add in a caveat that you can not use flash step to bring you closer than three feet from an opponent, and that you can not strike someone while you are engaged in a flash step.

If you don't like those conditions, you are welcome to make up some alternate ones that weaken the spell to about the same level.

Omegastar
01-14-07, 10:02 PM
There Fine Sir, I believe that should be good enough.

INDK
01-14-07, 10:11 PM
Looks good. It's still a bit on the stronger side, but seeing as you've been so patient and worked with me, I'm going to let it go through as is.

Approved!