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Dvlrockin
01-28-07, 06:58 PM
Name: Amon D'Rizt
Age: 87
Race: Dark Elf (drow)
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Teal
Height: 5"8'
Weight: 140lbs
Occupation: Wandering Intellectual

Personality: Amon is a very outgoing individual. Though he is a Dark Elf, and looked down upon by many, he does not accept many of the views of his society. He does not wish to live in seculison, and walk the
path of darkness. As soon as Amon was considered a man he left the city from which he had grown up and began to explore the world, looking for new people and interesting cultures. Amon is an intellectual who
never is satisfied with what he knows, always wanting to know more about everythign that he possibly can.

Appearance: As one first looks upon Amon they realize that he is a Dark Elf, and this gives many people a bad impression of him, thinking that he is like all Dark Elves. But when you get closer to him, you begin
to realize that his features are more gently, and he has a smile on his face that isn't sinister, something most Dark Elves do not posses. With his shoulder length white hair and muscular body he can be an intimidating
figure yet a gentle one at the same time. His face is well defined leading from his pointed chin up to his rounded cheeks, and teal eyes which gleam with intellect.

History: At a young age Amon was introduced to literature. As Amon began to read more and more he began to question how the Dark Elves lived. There was so much out in the world that they had yet to see and
explore, but they continued to live a life of seclusion, shunning all those who dared to think otherwise. The more Amon read the more intent he became on leaving this place and going out in the world to see these
wonders for himself. He knew that before he was considered a man by his people it would not be possible for him to do this, so he mocked that he was a part of the society until the day they held the ceremony to
show his crossing into manhood. After the ceremony Amon packed a few supplies such as flint and tinder, food, and water and that night he attempted to sneak out of the city undetected. However, things did not go
as he had planned. Amon's brother, who was trying to suprise his younger brother on the night of his crossing found Amon's bed empty and began to search for him. As they met up at the outskirts of the city Amon and
his brother got into a heated arguement. Amon tried to explain to his brother that he could not stay here, there was too much in the world to see, but his brother would have none of it. They ended up fighting, and Amon was forced to injure his brother. Using a spell he learned from his books, Amon applied a good deal of force to his older brothers leg, breaking the bone and allowing him to escape. Amon's brother cursed him in the language of their clan that one day he would find Amon and pay him back for what he had just done. Amon has been wandering the world since then, learning what he can and seeing everything.

Skills: Scholar (Amon is not an expert in any one field but prefers to have a decent knowledge of many things), Pressure (allows the user to apply pressure in the form of a spell, up to 100lbs of pressure currently), Fire (allows the user to create a ball of flame which can then be either projected or used however they see fit), Water (allows the user to summon water and move it however they please, currently Amon can manipulate up to 1 liter of water), Hunting (Amon is silent on his feet, allowing him to remain hidden from his prey), Swimming (through his travels Amon has become a proficient swimmer), Climbing (throughout his travels Amon has become proficent at climbing walls and rock ledges), Riding (several times Amon has had to ride many leagues sometimes while being persued, this has made him a proficent horseback rider)

Equipment: Walking Staff, Journal, Ink, Quill, Bow, Arrows, Robe, 20 Arrows

Sighter Tnailog
01-28-07, 11:10 PM
Please elaborate on your skills. What does Scholar mean...is there a field that Amon is best in? What about pressure -- how strong is it? Fire? How much can he manipulate water? What exactly does "Hunting" constitute -- can he hide himself well or move quietly?

Thanks. Other than that elaboration, I can see this character being interesting.

Dvlrockin
01-29-07, 01:58 PM
Updated with the elaborations, also added some elaboration to other skills mentioned.

Dvlrockin
01-30-07, 06:25 PM
just wondering if the character is ok to play now or if it's still being reviewed

Cyrus the virus
01-30-07, 08:44 PM
Sighter will have to come back to take a look at it, but if he takes another full day I'll handle it for you. You'll know you're okay to go when one of us posts here and says you're approved.

Dvlrockin
01-30-07, 09:18 PM
My appologies. I am used to running my own forum and not really having to worry about things like this, of course, mine is nowhere near the size of this one, so I have to get used to that as well.

Did not mean to seem impatient, once again, I appologize.

Cyrus the virus
02-01-07, 02:18 AM
Pressure is far too strong right now. I'd prefer something like 100 pounds.

How many arrows does he have? You need to keep track of them and buy/attain more when you're running low. 20's a good amount to start with.

Dvlrockin
02-02-07, 11:08 PM
20 works, sorry about that, wasnt thinking about it

Cyrus the virus
02-03-07, 12:34 AM
No problem, but you didn't edit the pressure thing.

Dvlrockin
02-03-07, 01:02 PM
Sorry about that, didnt see it the first time i read the post *head scratch*

done =D

Cyrus the virus
02-03-07, 03:40 PM
Approvededed!