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doomsday55
02-01-07, 03:52 PM
Name: Seele Esser
Age: 120
Race: Mystic
Hair Color: none
Eye Color: Ice Blue
Height: 6.2
Weight: 173
Skin color: purple

*Occupation: freelance (whatever he's paid to do)

*Personality: Quiet, no nonsense, traveler. He wonders from town to town taking almost any job while at the same time always seems to have his mind else where. if you were to see him you would think he was a loner from first appearance but has been known to surprise people.

Appearance: tall and almost menacing appearence. His clothing resembles what you would typically see on desert folk. He has loose fitting purple pants with a white cloth draped in a semi circle around his waist with the front open. His top is purple around his chest and back with long white sleeves. Its partially open in the front revealing a fit looking body, defined muscles but far from huge. His sleeves go all the way down to his wrist and are tight to his skin up to the shoulders. The shoulder part of his top bulges out and forms almost a spherical shape.
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History: Back in his home world he lead an adverage life. He grew up in the desert capital of Eisen-Faust. The city was renowned for its miltary strength and strong Krieger. Not much else is known of Eisen-Faust except faint rumors of the people who live there possessing unique talents. Nothing could ever be proven and anyone that investigated the matter never spoke of Eisen-Faust ever again.
At the age of 40 (equal to 15 human years) he enlisted in the Royal Academy of Eisen-Faust. After many years of Krieger training he graduated number 4 in his class. He immediately joined up with the 1st regime. The 1st was legendary for their exploits in battle. He was with them less than a week when they got called to investigate a disturbence just out side the walls of Eisen-Faust. Seele arrived at the scene shortly after the first Zug was sent in. Seele and several other graduates from his class including the top 3 had no idea what they were getting into. There was no trace of the first Zug. The only thing that any of them could see was faint ripples in the sand. Before anyone could react Seele and several other members of his Zug were sucked in to the void. Seele woke up in the forest just outside a small town. No sign of his desert home or any of his fellow Krieger. Now he wonders trying to find out exactly what happend, who did it, and why. He changed his name to Seele Esser shortly after he arrived and has gone by it ever sense

Skills: adverage swordsmanship
magic:
* Energieschild - can enhance his aura to cause physical damage (by directly linking his energy to his aura when anything comes into contact with him a small explosion of energy is released equal to however much energy he puts into it, he can use all the engergy he put into it in the first contact or spread it out over a period of time. every explosion takes away some of his energy)
*Seele stehlen - He feeds on the souls of the dead to increase his power (every soul increases his total power but it will only restore his energy by what he gains.) he will have to rest to full restore his energy.
#more to come as time goes on

Equipment: His cloths, medium waist pouch, 3 1/2 foot steel katana from tip to end of the handle (blade has special runes in it that allow him to charge his katana to take on the effect of his shield as well a strange pentacle shape for a guard and black and red lacing on the handle) bronze boots, and bronze arm bands. he currently has a average amount of money, not alot but enough to survive for a little while)

*Familiars: His shadow seems to move just out of the corner of your eye but neither seele or anyone else seems to notice. (will factor in later nothing to effect combat)

Cyrus the virus
02-01-07, 04:07 PM
Energyshield is tough to understand. Could you elaborate on it and try to be more clear on how it works? Also, you really shouldn't bother with the numbers in the description, as it just makes things more confusing.

You should also get rid of the numbers in the description of the other ability. We really don't deal with arbitrary numbers when it comes to abilities. The ability's fine, you just don't need to be so specific.

What does 'charging' his sword do? Include that the katana is made of steel.

He can only be an average swordsman.

doomsday55
02-01-07, 07:19 PM
hope that helps. the numbers were basicly just an example to help understand the ablility. best way i can describe his Energieschild ablility is think of it as if his whole body is covered by electricity and anything he touchs or touchs him is effected by it. but instead of being electrocuted its energy blast equal to how ever much he wants. if he puts all his energy into it for a single powerful attack or spread it out for several smaller attacks. The numbers in his background will come into play later like the 3 other classmates that out ranked him.

Cyrus the virus
02-01-07, 07:58 PM
Cool, thanks for those edits.

So the shield and sword charging can be very strong. How about you make it so each of them can only be done once? It's kind of unfair to be able to cause explosions whenever he is hit, or whenever his sword is hit.

doomsday55
02-02-07, 09:21 AM
there not huge explosions of energy its either one full power at once or several smaller ones. think of it like small fire crackers. set 10 off at once or 10 off separately. its only as powerful as the energy he puts into it divided by how many times he wants it to last. they both have the same total strength just one lasts longer than others. does that help? i use the world explosion cause it looks kinda like an explosion of energy but it wouldn't cause damage to the surrounding area. it would be small in size typically. if that still doesnt work then i can switch it to use only once. thanx

Cyrus the virus
02-02-07, 01:28 PM
Alright, just be careful not to do it every time he gets hit!

Approved.