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Eliad Drilken
03-04-07, 10:15 PM
Name:Eliad Elveliad Drilken IV
Age: 20
Race: Elf
Hair Color: Golden Blonde
Eye Color: Blue
Height: 6'
Weight: 160
Occupation: Adventurer

Personality: Eliad is an arrogant man. He was raised as a noble, and believes himself to be better than others. He is sheltered and somewhat racist against non-elves.

Appearance: Eliad is a striking young Elf, his haughtiness deters from his good looks however... most people find that his good looks and strong build does little to offset his somewhat acidic personality.

History: Eliad is the Son of an Elven aristocrat... and the Grandson of a great Elven hero. He was trained as both a diplomat and a royal guardsman. He found that he liked fighting physically with people a lot more than fighting verbally with other diplomats. He decided to strike out on his own as an adventurer to live up to his Grandfather's legacy as a hero. Ironically enough, his Grandfather has been missing for years after leading a hunting party that was searching for a notoriously ruthless Black Dragon.

Skills: Eliad is trained in the use of most Melee weapons, Bow and Arrows and mounted combat. He has Above average skills with the Longsword however. He is also trained in sword and shield combat. Although trained in the use of a Bow, Eliad prefers the close quarters of melee cobat, and feel that the use of a Bow is cowardly.

Eliad is also a trained diplomat. He doesn't often use these skill, as he sees them as a weakness, and prefers combat over diplomacy.

Equipment: Eliad carries a Steel Longsword, Iron Dagger, and small wooden Shield as armaments. He also wears Steel Chain Mail. He prefers the lighter chain mail as apposed to heavier plate armors. Eliad's style of graceful movement over sheer power is reflected in this.

Familiars: Eliad has a horse named "Clout" that is well trained in being ridden while engaged in battle.

Witchblade
03-05-07, 07:15 AM
Just a few things...

Your chain mail may be made out of steel, pick one of your weapons to be made of steel and the other iron. Also, what is your shield made out of?

Saying he's trained in most melee weapons is too broad. You may give him above average skills in the use of one weapon and average for the others.

Once you've made those changes please post again so I may look over the profile once more.

Eliad Drilken
03-05-07, 09:05 PM
I've made the changes you suggested...

Thanks for the input

Witchblade
03-06-07, 07:15 AM
Approverized!