Rimril
03-06-07, 02:44 PM
This is my first character. Constructive comment would be more than welcome.
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Name: Yutaji (The Flesh mage)
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic neutral
Armour: None
Age: Couple of hundred years
Eyes: Black
Hair: None
Height: 190,6 centimetres
Weight: 70kg
Home: Earth
Extra: Slightly based upon a character from: "Drakan"
Image: Yutaji (http://img407.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fleshmageyk6.png) (original source:Surreal (http://www.surreal.com))
History
In the earliest know days, the world was a place of choas and strife, it was called the Dark age.
The dark age was a time that knew no peace, war engulfed the world and civilization crumbled. Humankind was on the very brink of extinction, only some small well guarded towns still stood. Demons from another world, a world that we would call hell, tried to enslave mankind. The demons were very advanced in the art of magic, and their battle skills were outstanding.
Though many humans died, few were able to withstand the forces of the demons, but with food supplies shrinking, and resisitance weakening, hopes began to fade, and town after town felt.
Appart from the miseries, it was also a time that has given us great advances in physics, chemistry, medicine and the very physical definition of the world in which we live. Within the walls of the towns, enlightened souls tried to save mankind. And of course there were heroes, brave young soldiers, mages and rangers, fought bravely against the dark forces.
A very important person was Yutaji; he was engineer and was familiar with the art of magic as well. He stood on the very beginning of the industrial revolution, and it was he who created the Pain Golem. This gigantic creature was made only to destroy. It was as tall as a building, with skin of stone and immune for almost any magical attack. He had one eye, from which it could fire a laser. It was a masterpiece, designed by using both magic and his engineering skills, but it was very difficult to control. Only with great effort Yutaji could control the colossal creature. He had to transfer a part of his spirit to the creature to control it, but if someone distracted him the Golem would be out of control and destroy everything in its way. Yutaji was old, and had great difficulties controlling the creature; therefore he created a staff, simply called the Golem’ Staff. With this staff, anyone, who was willing to transfer his spirit to the creature could control it and continue the war against the demons. However he had underestimated the demons, the demon lord created a very powerful spell; a spell of insanity, anyone who would be struck by the spell became completely insane.
On the day of the final battle, also known as Judgement day, when the last remaining human forces united to destroy to demon lord and ban their race once and for all, the demon lord was planning on turning the Golem against the humans by casting the spell on Yutaji. And so did it happen. However his plan backfired, Yutaji lost control as planned, however the Golem, completely out of control, fired his laser directly at the demon lord’s heart, destroying him instantly.
The war was now finally over, the remaining demons withdrew from this world, and the humans used the golem’s staff to regain control of the terrifying creature. They destroyed its blueprints and the creature along with it.
The creator of the Pain Golem, Yutaji, was no more; he had lost his common sense completely. He did survive however, but his skin was completely burned. In his final act, the demon lord tried to take Yutaji with him in his grave by using a fire spell. He failed, but he did tremendous damage.
Being completely insane, and having no skin, Yutaji began to kill people for their skin. But since he was the “hero” of the dark wars, the survivors decided not to kill him, but to lock him away in a palace. To appease him, the people kept sending him girls, or the so-called “brides”. He strips them of their flesh and wears it as a cloak. Therefore people started to call him: “The Flesh mage”
Now these days, if you are lucky, you can hear the last remnants of Yutaji’s spirit scream. His body still wanders around at forgotten graveyards waiting, for another bride……
Appearance:
The flesh mage, as he is now called, used to be a human, however through the years and several curses he isn’t quite who he used to be. Almost his entire body exists from parts of other humans. He stole limps such as arms and legs, but also organs such as stomachs and lungs. He wears them as if they were his own. He made a cloak from “spare” parts and wears it proudly. You can barely see his face; his eyes are as dark as the night and his nose is gone (maybe so he doesn’t smell himself). When in a relaxed condition he floats about five centimetres above the ground, however when he has to, he can fly high up in the sky. He doesn’t have to breathe often so he has no problem with low oxygen levels, however strong winds easily blow him away. If you’re not scared by his appearance you might want to stay away from him anyway because of the dreadful smell.
Personal information
Yutaji is a knowledgeable and intelligent person who speaks very politely and distinctly upper class. He tends to fancy himself and he believes he is the most handsome person in the world and that he is a gift to all women. He has little time for the common persons and considers them worthless. His old eyes have seen more than the man and woman of several generations combined. All this experience has greatly improved his analytical skills, and therefore he is very capable of finding the weak points of his opponents.
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Weapon:
Golem Staff: The frame of the Staff is made of wood from the roots of an ancient tree, it is very strong but it lacks the ability to bend. On the top of the staff rests a black stone. The stone is made from very rare enchanted minerals from the core of a numinous stone, said to be a part the meteorite that wiped out the dinosaurs. A strange dark glow is emitting from the stone, and if you look straight into it, you will see the most horrible thing you can imagine.
The primary function of the staff is to cast spells.
Spells:
Centenarian Spirits:
By focusing on the essence of his spirit, the flesh mage can summon an image of spirit. If a person looks in a mirror, he sees his own body, but when a spirit is reflected, an amount of energy gathers to form an image of it. This image can be controlled by it’s original. When summoned, the spirit will instantly attack the foe, and will disappear right after it, even when he misses his opponent. This attack can be performed rapidly since it only takes about a second to summon it. The power of the attack is fairly weak; if it hits a “normal” person it will cause, in very rare occasions a bloody nose.
Inviolable:
It is said that energy can neither be created or destroyed. However, it can be transformed from one form to another. Yutaji can summon this spiritual energy and transform it into a shield, to either protect himself or someone else. It takes a tremendous amount of concentration to do this and therefore, it consumes a lot of energy.
Duration: 5 seconds
Draconian Darkness:
A powerful spell, which is also called: “Dark fire”. By drawing dark energy from his soul, a sphere of dark garble is formed near his chest. He can complete it, by using the anger from heart to ignite it.
With the Golem Staff, he is able to control the sphere.
Mantra of amass:
Sometimes it can prove very difficult to prevent mind-wandering. This can have several reasons, for example: flashbacks, wounds or emotions. With the Mantra of Amass, Yutaji can, by preaching this mantra, regain his concentration and focus his mind.
Revenant Spirits:
It is said, that if one dies, his spirit will leave its former body. Yutaji can, by calling upon these spirits, drain fragments of their life energy, to restore his health. He reforms this energy into molecules to heal his wounds.
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Name: Yutaji (The Flesh mage)
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic neutral
Armour: None
Age: Couple of hundred years
Eyes: Black
Hair: None
Height: 190,6 centimetres
Weight: 70kg
Home: Earth
Extra: Slightly based upon a character from: "Drakan"
Image: Yutaji (http://img407.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fleshmageyk6.png) (original source:Surreal (http://www.surreal.com))
History
In the earliest know days, the world was a place of choas and strife, it was called the Dark age.
The dark age was a time that knew no peace, war engulfed the world and civilization crumbled. Humankind was on the very brink of extinction, only some small well guarded towns still stood. Demons from another world, a world that we would call hell, tried to enslave mankind. The demons were very advanced in the art of magic, and their battle skills were outstanding.
Though many humans died, few were able to withstand the forces of the demons, but with food supplies shrinking, and resisitance weakening, hopes began to fade, and town after town felt.
Appart from the miseries, it was also a time that has given us great advances in physics, chemistry, medicine and the very physical definition of the world in which we live. Within the walls of the towns, enlightened souls tried to save mankind. And of course there were heroes, brave young soldiers, mages and rangers, fought bravely against the dark forces.
A very important person was Yutaji; he was engineer and was familiar with the art of magic as well. He stood on the very beginning of the industrial revolution, and it was he who created the Pain Golem. This gigantic creature was made only to destroy. It was as tall as a building, with skin of stone and immune for almost any magical attack. He had one eye, from which it could fire a laser. It was a masterpiece, designed by using both magic and his engineering skills, but it was very difficult to control. Only with great effort Yutaji could control the colossal creature. He had to transfer a part of his spirit to the creature to control it, but if someone distracted him the Golem would be out of control and destroy everything in its way. Yutaji was old, and had great difficulties controlling the creature; therefore he created a staff, simply called the Golem’ Staff. With this staff, anyone, who was willing to transfer his spirit to the creature could control it and continue the war against the demons. However he had underestimated the demons, the demon lord created a very powerful spell; a spell of insanity, anyone who would be struck by the spell became completely insane.
On the day of the final battle, also known as Judgement day, when the last remaining human forces united to destroy to demon lord and ban their race once and for all, the demon lord was planning on turning the Golem against the humans by casting the spell on Yutaji. And so did it happen. However his plan backfired, Yutaji lost control as planned, however the Golem, completely out of control, fired his laser directly at the demon lord’s heart, destroying him instantly.
The war was now finally over, the remaining demons withdrew from this world, and the humans used the golem’s staff to regain control of the terrifying creature. They destroyed its blueprints and the creature along with it.
The creator of the Pain Golem, Yutaji, was no more; he had lost his common sense completely. He did survive however, but his skin was completely burned. In his final act, the demon lord tried to take Yutaji with him in his grave by using a fire spell. He failed, but he did tremendous damage.
Being completely insane, and having no skin, Yutaji began to kill people for their skin. But since he was the “hero” of the dark wars, the survivors decided not to kill him, but to lock him away in a palace. To appease him, the people kept sending him girls, or the so-called “brides”. He strips them of their flesh and wears it as a cloak. Therefore people started to call him: “The Flesh mage”
Now these days, if you are lucky, you can hear the last remnants of Yutaji’s spirit scream. His body still wanders around at forgotten graveyards waiting, for another bride……
Appearance:
The flesh mage, as he is now called, used to be a human, however through the years and several curses he isn’t quite who he used to be. Almost his entire body exists from parts of other humans. He stole limps such as arms and legs, but also organs such as stomachs and lungs. He wears them as if they were his own. He made a cloak from “spare” parts and wears it proudly. You can barely see his face; his eyes are as dark as the night and his nose is gone (maybe so he doesn’t smell himself). When in a relaxed condition he floats about five centimetres above the ground, however when he has to, he can fly high up in the sky. He doesn’t have to breathe often so he has no problem with low oxygen levels, however strong winds easily blow him away. If you’re not scared by his appearance you might want to stay away from him anyway because of the dreadful smell.
Personal information
Yutaji is a knowledgeable and intelligent person who speaks very politely and distinctly upper class. He tends to fancy himself and he believes he is the most handsome person in the world and that he is a gift to all women. He has little time for the common persons and considers them worthless. His old eyes have seen more than the man and woman of several generations combined. All this experience has greatly improved his analytical skills, and therefore he is very capable of finding the weak points of his opponents.
__________________________________________________ _________________________________
Weapon:
Golem Staff: The frame of the Staff is made of wood from the roots of an ancient tree, it is very strong but it lacks the ability to bend. On the top of the staff rests a black stone. The stone is made from very rare enchanted minerals from the core of a numinous stone, said to be a part the meteorite that wiped out the dinosaurs. A strange dark glow is emitting from the stone, and if you look straight into it, you will see the most horrible thing you can imagine.
The primary function of the staff is to cast spells.
Spells:
Centenarian Spirits:
By focusing on the essence of his spirit, the flesh mage can summon an image of spirit. If a person looks in a mirror, he sees his own body, but when a spirit is reflected, an amount of energy gathers to form an image of it. This image can be controlled by it’s original. When summoned, the spirit will instantly attack the foe, and will disappear right after it, even when he misses his opponent. This attack can be performed rapidly since it only takes about a second to summon it. The power of the attack is fairly weak; if it hits a “normal” person it will cause, in very rare occasions a bloody nose.
Inviolable:
It is said that energy can neither be created or destroyed. However, it can be transformed from one form to another. Yutaji can summon this spiritual energy and transform it into a shield, to either protect himself or someone else. It takes a tremendous amount of concentration to do this and therefore, it consumes a lot of energy.
Duration: 5 seconds
Draconian Darkness:
A powerful spell, which is also called: “Dark fire”. By drawing dark energy from his soul, a sphere of dark garble is formed near his chest. He can complete it, by using the anger from heart to ignite it.
With the Golem Staff, he is able to control the sphere.
Mantra of amass:
Sometimes it can prove very difficult to prevent mind-wandering. This can have several reasons, for example: flashbacks, wounds or emotions. With the Mantra of Amass, Yutaji can, by preaching this mantra, regain his concentration and focus his mind.
Revenant Spirits:
It is said, that if one dies, his spirit will leave its former body. Yutaji can, by calling upon these spirits, drain fragments of their life energy, to restore his health. He reforms this energy into molecules to heal his wounds.