Play by Play Report (recruitment)

[The Architect]

The Day Radasanth Sank (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?p=68075#post68075)
Synopsis
Seti Dylan has arrived on Corone soil for his biggest project yet, designing an entire neighborhood on the outskirts of Radasanth. While he's brainstorming the luxurious borough and daydreaming about his new home something strange happens. Without warning the Library of Radasanth collapses, and a rescue mission is under way.

I'm going to try and take baby steps right now and only ask for one partner, but I might ask for others to make an appearance soon. I'd definitely like constructive criticism and lots of it hence the title of this thread.

[Cyrus the virus]

I'm not active enough to join right now, but know I'm very interested and enjoyed your first post :D

[The Architect]

Maybe you and I can have a battle or quest later when you have the time.
Until then is there anything in my thread that you would change? Strengths & Weaknesses?

[Anila]

I think everything of this character's has died. Horribly.

So, I'd be willing to toss her into your little bout of chaos.

[Cyrus the virus]

If you like, we can have a very quick, light battle in the Citadel. Not story-heavy, just action driven. I could use Madyrn since he's level 0.

[The Architect]

I'm sorry, Anila. Sighter Tnailog agreed to participate just before you responded. I should have deleted this thread. However, I do have a quest in Raiaera I'm conjuring up. It's about ghosties and angry spirits and what have you. I'll link you to it once I get it up, and you'll have first dibs.

Cyrus, I'd be happy to do battle with you in the Citadel. I'm just having a hard time writing the introduction. Would you mind starting the battle if you're still up for it?

[Cyrus the virus]

Sure thing, I'll write one up later tonight or tomorrow.