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Arai
06-30-07, 11:00 PM
Returning Member...seems I didn't make the character purge, so I'm re-registering.

Name: Arai Kaosu

Race: Half Demon/Half Human

Age: 18

Height: 5’ 10

Weight: 180

Appearance: Slender, brown-skinned male. Has silver hair at shoulder length, and his eyes are black when not in battle, red when he is. He wears black sweatpants, and a fitted black t-shirt. Over the shirt is a red trench coat that goes a little below his waist, the Japanese kanji “Chaos” is sketched on the back. Around his waist is a red cloth, which hangs down on his side. He is fairly attractive, but not enough to be considered a "pretty-boy".


Items: Chaos Blades, which are two steel short swords that are sheathed into
holders on his back, which is concealed under his coat. Around his wrists
he wears two red bands that conceal two throwing knives each.


Skills: Being half demon, Arai has superb agility and acrobatic skill, but his human body limits how much he can do.

He is trained in various martial arts, but is more skilled with blades; preferably his two short swords. He isn't as adept in his demonic magic as he is with his swordsmanship as he is failry new to chanelling energy.

Flame Sphere. An orb-like shape of dark demonic flame about the size of an adult human head. The sphere can follow its target for a little while, then dissapates. He can only create three at full power before his reaches his limit.

Energy Channel: Focusing his power into her his blades, he can infuse them with the flame element for a short period of time.


Personality: Shy (mostly around girls), kind, patient, easy to get along
with, and quiet. He is quite aware of his skills but doesn't think too overly high of himself.

History: Abandoned as a child, Arai is the son of a human and a demon.
Not knowing who he is, or who his birth parents actually are, he was raised
by a caring old couple that found him crying in a ditch. He first started
realizing he wasn’t human when he saw that whenever he got hurt, his wounds could be seen healing. After his caretakers also revealed to him that when he got mad, his eyes turned red, he left, to find out who, or what he was. After being in the outside world on his own for three years, a chance
encounter with another demon told him all he needed to know. His mother,
who was a demon, fell in love with a man from a village she had set out
to destroy. After becoming impregnated with Arai, she felt guilty, and
believed that the other demons would reject her if they found that she was
to give birth to a baby seeded by a human.

Therefore she left him on earth, and this demon was told to find Arai and
ask him to return to his mother. Arai refused saying, “If she didn’t want
me before, there’s no reason for me to go back to her, after leaving me
alone.” The demon, knowing he’d be killed if he didn’t return with Arai,
dead or alive, that he’d be killed. So he attacked Arai, but Arai, who’d
been training the last 3 years, killed him as if he were nothing. He only
received a small scratch on his cheek, which healed into a permanent scar.
He sees it as a reminder as his first kill towards ridding the world of all he considers evil.

Karuka
06-30-07, 11:09 PM
Can you please separate out your skills for me, instead of having them in one clump like that?

Also, you're kinda powerful for a level zero. You can put his agility and acrobatic skills together and he can have above average agility, and he can be an average fighter. Likewise, his blades can be steel or as strong as steel, we don't allow stronger at Level Zero.

I'd also like for you to put a limit on how many times he can use the Flame Sphere before he gets exhausted, and if you're going to have him be superfast, you need it as a skill. 1.5 times as fast as an average human is good for now. If that doesn't work for your technique, you can earn it in a quest a little later.

I know it seems like I'm throwing a lot at you for now, but I'm just trying to get you approved quicker.

Arai
06-30-07, 11:29 PM
I made the changes I believe you needed me to make. Also moved the history to the bottom to make finding the relevant information easier to find.

Karuka
06-30-07, 11:35 PM
Keep in mind that he's an above average fighter, and only about 1.5x as fast/acrobatic as the normal person, and you'll be okay. Don't power game the other abilities, though, or the judge will call you on it.

All that aside, you are Approved!

Welcome to Althanas! You have a three hundred GP line of credit at the Bazaar, and you have the option of starting in our two intro forums for lower leveled characters, Scara Brae and the Peaceful Promenade.

Have fun!