Pre Scoring Scoring

[Rajani Aishwara]

My threads have been moving along quite slowly. I've been here for almost a year and I have yet to reach level 1 (Through much fault of my own I admit). With that said I'd like to know how I'm doing. Don't come and flatter me. Be straight up with me. What are my strengths, weaknesses, so on and so forth.

The Archaeologists 2.0 (http://http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?t=5879) - The players of the original went bye bye so I decided to start it over with Ataraxis and The Architect. This is the first time I'm going to write an action sequence in Althanas, so I'd really appreciate it if I got some tips and examples as to how to manage an action sequence.

Priya (http://http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?t=4110) - This is probably the most important thread to the development of my character and the NPCs that surround him. The big gimmick is the title. What is Priya, or who is Priya? Yet this Priya hasn't even been mentioned in the thread yet. All I'm telling people is Priya will change the life of Rajani and the crew of the Peregrine forever. It's not likely that there will be any violence here, so I need to know how to keep the story fresh as I go along.

Since both quests are not going to finish any time soon I'd love to get sort of a Pre Score on how they're going so far. Thanks, all.

[Ataraxis]

I have to say, considering I'm in both quests, I'm just as anxious to know how I'm doing. I can't really give you any advice for the same reasons, Raj, since that would be the most biased opinion you could get, or close enough. ^^

But there used to be a thread like this, where people used to give each other comments about their own quests. To whoever makes a comment in this thread, thank you in advance! I don't mean to hijack this thread, but if you want opinions on your own writing, don't be afraid to ask and post up a link!

I echo The Raj: thanks to all you!