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Wulfgang
10-17-07, 09:26 PM
Name : Wulfgang Hundurgar

Race : Barbarian

Occupation : Hunter and warrior of the former Northern Barbarian tribe Hundar-Grotta.

Height/weight: He is 7'2" with a barrel chest and 320 pounds of muscle mounted upon his frame; His muscles finely toned from climbing the mountain his entire life.

eye color/hair color: Wulfgar has deep blue eyes and short dirty blonde hair with an angular face and a stern jaw harboring some blonde stubble.

Appearance : very square muscular frame with sharp features and as of now no visible scaring.

equipment:: He wears what seems to be a brown wolf hide outfit but under it lies fine chain armor, upon his back he wears a large bear skin cloak and upon his waste, a red fox hide belt. In one of his otter skin boots is his long hunting knife known as Krieklo, and upon his back rests his finely crafted claymore, or zweihander as his people call them, which has been named Canis Zhan. Canis Zhan is a finely crafted two handed sword passed down generations in his family, it is made with the best of ores the utmost care, the blade was then imbued with the power of the cold of the northern mountain winters and now harbors a blue hew from augmentation. Wulfgang carries with him a water skin, a small bag of gold,and a wetstone to sharpen his blades. He makes spears as he needs them for hunting and carries a animal hide lean-to tent.

History : Wulfgang was born in the spring of prosperity for his clan Hundar-Grotta, a nomadic barbarian tribe of the northern mountains. He went through childhood learning the skills to be a tribe hunter and warrior as well as how to survive the harsh wilderness. Wulfgang was an exceptionally successful hunter and a very formidable warrior for even veterans. Wulfgang soon began to hunt by himself and spent his spare time sparring, even when others were participating in festivities he practiced with Canis Zhan, completely infatuated with becoming a worthy warrior to carry the blade. Wulfgang soon did come to a day which his training could have paid off; On the summer before his eighteenth winter a rival tribe Bregar-Grot attacked Hundar-Grotta at night. Wulfgang's tribe had no chance, for the surprise had been complete, and Wulfgang himself was off on an overnight hunt. Wulfgang had watched the sun rise red that morning, a bad omen, and had returned quickly to his tribe, which he found slaughtered completely. Wulfgang slowly walked to the camp border, and felt rage fill his body, he walked silently amongst the camp and collected his belongings and found his father, leader of the clan, slain. Wulfgang carefully took off the necklace, a extraordinarily large wolf fang which has been imbued to call forth a wolf familiar to be a traveling companion who was basically immortal in this world, though it could be dismissed back into its own plane if damaged mortally, it would only be dismissed for a period of time until its wounds were healed. Wulfgang then departed the camp calling forth his wolf companion who was named peregrinus, a large white wolf who possessed more intelligence than a normal wolf and could communicate telepathically (through images not words) with the wearer of the necklace. Ever since Wulfgang has wandered the forest of the mountains, but as of late he has felt the urge to become more than merely a wanderer of the forest, He wanted to become known to the world and perhaps bring back some men to avenge his tribe.

Familiar : Black wolf named peregrinus summoned forth by the magical necklace which he took from his father, the wolf is unable to be perminantly dismissed from Althanas however if Peregrinus is injured mortally it will be sent back to its own plane for three days in order to heal its wounds and regain its strength.

Personality : Normally quiet, Wulfgang is not the most talkative person, finding it hard to sometimes connect with other people he normally just decides to stay out of conversation; however wulfgang is a not a cold hearted warrior and attempts to give everyone a fair chance before judging whether he likes them or not. He loves the forest and tends to dislike cities and places crowded with people, thus staying away from them. Wulfgang is a overall friendly being on normal circumstances. He views himself as a working progress and is constantly trying to better himself both physically and mentally.


Skills :
Crippling Cold:Sword attack:Wulfgang slashs down hard with Canis Zhan, using its cold enchantment as well as his massive strength to numb their arms with a heavy blow slowing their next attack.

Frozen Blood: upon hitting the enemy the wound that was inflicted by Canis Zhan is frozen causing extra cold damage to the target and slowing their next five attacks.

Adrenaline Surge: Wulfgang can call forth a powerful surge of adrenaline in a dire situation (half dead or below) and become twice as strong and even shake off a small amount of the damage he has taken.

Aid of Peregrinus: Wulfgang and Peregrinus can fight together as a team who can work together in unison due to the spiritual connection they share

Farouk
10-17-07, 09:56 PM
I can tell you right now this isn't going to be approved. You need to use the outline they give you... write now it's just a block of text.

Witchblade
10-18-07, 04:18 AM
Farouk, please do not post in other people's registration threads.

Wulfgang, the submit thread for judging option is not for character profiles. You profile at the moment is one giant block of text, without pause or break and not even separated into paragraphs. Please read the guide to getting started on Althanas (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?t=1888) in this link. It will provide for you a character sheet we use for character registrations. Once you have edited your profile and put it in the correct format, please post here again so I may then look over it.

Wulfgang
10-18-07, 04:21 PM
Name : Wulfgang Hundurgar

Race : Barbarian

Occupation : Hunter and warrior of the former Northern Barbarian tribe Hundar-Grotta.

Height/weight: He is 7'2" with a barrel chest and 320 pounds of muscle mounted upon his frame; His muscles finely toned from climbing the mountain his entire life.

eye color/hair color: Wulfgar has deep blue eyes and short dirty blonde hair with an angular face and a stern jaw harboring some blonde stubble.

Appearance : very square muscular frame with sharp features and as of now no visible scaring.

equipment:: He wears what seems to be a brown wolf hide outfit but under it lies good quality chain armor, upon his back he wears a large bear skin cloak and upon his waste, a red fox hide belt. In one of his otter skin boots is his long steel hunting knife known as Krieklo, and upon his back rests his finely crafted claymore, or zweihander as his people call them, which has been named Canis Zhan. Canis Zhan is a steel two handed sword passed down generations in his family, the blade was then imbued with the power of the cold of the northern mountain winters and now harbors a blue hew from augmentation. Wulfgang carries with him a water skin, a small bag of gold,and a wetstone to sharpen his blades. He makes spears as he needs them for hunting and carries a animal hide lean-to tent.

History : Wulfgang was born in the spring of prosperity for his clan Hundar-Grotta, a nomadic barbarian tribe of the northern mountains. He went through childhood learning the skills to be a tribe hunter and warrior as well as how to survive the harsh wilderness. Wulfgang was an exceptionally successful hunter and a very formidable warrior for even veterans. Wulfgang soon began to hunt by himself and spent his spare time sparring, even when others were participating in festivities he practiced with Canis Zhan, completely infatuated with becoming a worthy warrior to carry the blade. Wulfgang soon did come to a day which his training could have paid off; On the summer before his eighteenth winter a rival tribe Bregar-Grot attacked Hundar-Grotta at night. Wulfgang's tribe had no chance, for the surprise had been complete, and Wulfgang himself was off on an overnight hunt. Wulfgang had watched the sun rise red that morning, a bad omen, and had returned quickly to his tribe, which he found slaughtered completely. Wulfgang slowly walked to the camp border, and felt rage fill his body, he walked silently amongst the camp and collected his belongings and found his father, leader of the clan, slain. Wulfgang carefully took off the necklace, a extraordinarily large wolf fang which has been imbued to call forth a wolf familiar to be a traveling companion who was basically immortal in this world, though it could be dismissed back into its own plane if damaged mortally, it would only be dismissed for a period of time until its wounds were healed. Wulfgang then departed the camp calling forth his wolf companion who was named peregrinus, a large Grey wolf who possessed more intelligence than a normal wolf and could communicate telepathically (through images not words) with the wearer of the necklace. Ever since Wulfgang has wandered the forest of the mountains, but as of late he has felt the urge to become more than merely a wanderer of the forest, He wanted to become known to the world and perhaps bring back some men to avenge his tribe.

Familiar : Grey wolf named peregrinus summoned forth by the magical necklace which he took from his father, the wolf is unable to be perminantly dismissed from Althanas however if Peregrinus is injured mortally it will be sent back to its own plane for three days in order to heal its wounds and regain its strength.

Personality : Normally quiet, Wulfgang is not the most talkative person, finding it hard to sometimes connect with other people he normally just decides to stay out of conversation; however wulfgang is a not a cold hearted warrior and attempts to give everyone a fair chance before judging whether he likes them or not. He loves the forest and tends to dislike cities and places crowded with people, thus staying away from them. Wulfgang is a overall friendly being on normal circumstances. He views himself as a working progress and is constantly trying to better himself both physically and mentally.


Skills :
Frozen Cold:Wulfgang slashs down hard with Canis Zhan, using its cold enchantment as well as his massive strength to numb the area in which the enemy is hit with a heavy blow, rendering that area useless for the next minute.


Frozen Blood: upon hitting the enemy with Canis Zhan the recipient of the blow is chilled and their attacks slowed for the next thirty seconds to a minute.

Adrenaline Surge: Wulfgang can call forth a powerful surge of adrenaline in a dire situation and become twice as strong and even shake off a small amount of the damage he has taken. After using this Wulfgang is completely fatigued and often passes out from severe exhaustion.

Aid of Peregrinus: Wulfgang and Peregrinus can fight together as a team who can work together in unison due to the spiritual connection they share
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Witchblade
10-18-07, 06:11 PM
I meant post to tell me it's been edited, but literally just saying 'edited' not repost the whole thing. >.>

Okay, for starters, we only allow level zero characters to have weapon of 'good' quality and to be made of steel or a similar metal that has the strength of steel. Not the finest ores. The 'fine chain armour' may also only be made of steel, as can his hunting knife.

Crippling Cold - the way it's describes sounds like the opponent needs to take a hit from the weapon in order to feel the effects and for some reason the effects only take place in their arms instead of the target area. The attack itself, as a powerful downward slash, would be extremely crippling alone were it to connect. I think you need to re-think this attack as 'Frozen Cold' is the exact same thing expect it affects where the opponent is hit rather than just their arms.

Frozen Blood - Slows them down for the next five turns? How about just chills them from the inside out and slows them down for approximately thirty seconds to a minute. Remember, this will affect some characters different.

Adrenaline Surge - Drains a lot of Wulfgang's energy and after this happens to him, he usually passes out from exhaustion.

Make those edits and I'll look at it again.

Wulfgang
10-18-07, 07:09 PM
edited, hehe soo excited and soo ready for approval!!! cant wait to get started role playing, hehe ive already wrote mroe in microsoft word about my character and even started on some possible storyline! thankyou so much, i really appreciate what you do. Imagination makes the world a better place and this website allows me to unleash all of mine!! WOOT

Witchblade
10-19-07, 04:09 AM
lol, I remember those old days when I got that excited. :p

All right, the Frozen Blood and Crippling Cold are still relatively the same attack, which is pointless, but seeing as how you're so new to this and really want to get start...

Approverized!

Notice below my name there is a 'level 5 [experience 26,018]' that experience is from battling and questing. When you reach a certain amount you will level up and be allowed to post a character update in which you can make your character stronger.