A pickpocket mute... 4/10
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A pickpocket mute... 4/10
Yes you did
A fox, but a spirit. And it has a canoe.
2/10.
A Shinigami captain gone rogue? I say 7. You coulda been in the anime.
5/10 Seems like a typical white male hero with pure morals who is a natural leader at first glance. And the story of betrayal with his father doesn't seem unusual to me. However, I love that he is shown to use more speed and is a duel-blade user, as opposed to the usual sturdy longsword user reliant on strength. And the blacksmith asset is awesome too, adding a layer of "average." to him. I like this character, regardless of how original he may or may not be.
EDIT: You did awesome, Fenn!
6/10
You stray dangerously into the territory of the Mary Sue but are still toeing the line. One absurd relationship would push ya firmly in!
Well Shin went and screwed up the game. :P
LD - At first I thought I was reading a Danaerys Targarean retread, but then quickly realized that aside from the hair and the crazy she's really not anything like her. Character is still pre-power for the most part, so may some day develop into a cliche, but for now you get a 0.5/10.
Magneto. 9/10.
<3
Spoiler:
5/10
You have cliche tendencies, being the strong, stoic man who wants to prove himself right to himself and his father and to take back his honour etc. etc.
But Shinsou has his moments of pure Shinsou-ness, such as his tender moments and his moments of stealing whiskey from a certain stash
0/10 would smash.
Can't think of anything like her.