Just finished a commission for a friend. I hate it, but let me know what you think/tell me what I need to work on.
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Just finished a commission for a friend. I hate it, but let me know what you think/tell me what I need to work on.
Missing some shadow on the other side of her legs I'd say, to make it look like she's really sitting on the mushroom, she's kinda floating it seems.
Her finger gets cut off on the left side too. Overall I think it's well done, is it for anything in particular? Art always seems better when it's applied elsewhere. :o
EDIT: Is this digital art? Like photoshop? I think it is, it has that 'look.'
Wow, I didn't even notice that. Massacre, your attention to detail is spooky. Almost.. Adrian Monk like. :eek:
Anyway, other then what was previously pointed out, the drawing seems to be in tip top tip shape. Fix it and ship it out, eh? =P
I like it, a fairy that doesn't look like she hasn't eaten anything in weeks. Sorry I'm not much when it comes to art. I'm a caveman with art and I just go: "Whoo pretty, Me like!"
though I do like your work and especially your furries. a bit of practice makes perfect.
I have to say that you've improved a lot from when I last saw you. Good works! resists
That mushroom looks high too, kinda like a slide for the pixie. Just sort of an idle thing I saw. Maybe a little lower and more 'mushroomy' (?) would work a little better. And that was basically just me trying to add something to help you. Still good work nonetheless.
I'm a fan of your art. Love it. Though I think instead of a fairy you should draw a catepillar on the mushroom, smokin' a hookah, blowing letters and such. It'd rock.
Yeah, it could use a bit of shadow underneath her bum and legs to make it seem like she's not floating...
But other than that, I like it!
Thanks for the comments and critiques. I'm really bad with coloring and shadows and such. I did do this via Photoshop since my ability to color is actually much better with all the cheap tricks it can do. Next piece I color I'll try to keep in mind what you all suggessted. And for the record: I HATE PIXIES! D:<
Hey, all you have to do is take a mid-tone grey, set the opacity of the brush to around 15-20% and mess around with the shadows a bit. ;)
I look forward to more work, if that's your plan. :)
EDIT: I hope you don't mind, but I did a little minor work on the shadows, to give you an idea of what I had in mind. I'm not very good with photoshop myself but here it is:
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f2...ue_Falco-1.jpg
Click to enlarge it, folks! And make sure you click it again to have full resolution. ;)
Also, I didn't even try to fix that finger on the left.
The edit does look a little better, I normally never do BG's so having characters affect the BG and vice versa is still new to me.
Yeah it just takes some practice, if you ever want some help let me know. I'd be happy to give you some ideas and suggestions. :)
Idea and suggest away, I could use any help i can get!
I meant with specific stuff. :p
I'll take a look at your dA account and edit this post later. ;)
I know I know, double post. It's an art thread, grant me the freedom! D:<
Anyway, this is the second panel in a 20ish panel OC battle. It's her character CJ vs Isabelle. Her character is a firearms wielder. Mines and alchemical mage. I'd put her in the same category as Althanas's own geomancer -- Cyrus the Virus. The biggest difference is she can't cast anything or talk to the elements without her alchemy flask. (Or so the story permits thus far! =D)
Anyway once I complete the whole thing I'll upload it here. I'll have bits and pieces of teasers here and there.
Fantastic. Very well done.
I want your Intuos! :(
Sweetness, still. :)
Nice work. o_o I wish I could draw.
Necro Post!
Here's some of the work I did in my absence. I have since sold my tablet, but I still doodle from time to time. This one was by far my favorite.
Thoughts?
Spoiler:
O.O
Wow...
That's really good.
Also, THIS!
And... Steamy Sketch Dumps #1 & #2.
See more ---> This Place.
*jizz
Excuse me while I get way too stoked over having another person who draws around. So awesome!
I think I still have his Seth art in my collection o art about the lavinian
Alright Althanas, I am re-opening myself for commissions. I have not drawn in a while and I had a spark of inspiration this morning on the drive to work. That being said, I'm offering up pencil or inked drawings (no color since I sold my tablet). I will not ask for any sort of money or GP, but those willing to donate a sum of cash will get my attention first. That or you have an idea that piques my interest.
Have at it.
Draw Dirks! 500 GP for you if you do. Maybe more if it's complex or downright awesome!
!!! I adore your art.
I will give you all of my little 200 gp for your own version of Noir.
When I receive some more, I can offer you that as well since you have been so helpful.
Only if you want to though.
I've been staring at your Dirks fan art and have been wanting to compete. Seems pretty simple, but would you be willing to send me a really detailed description? Maybe an idea on a pose?
I'm already planning some Noir/Lye art so you're off the hook. :P
I'll give you 500 gp to draw Sorish, Korra, Sanderia & Ethen in a family portrait.
yes!
-edited out cuss word..got excited.-
name your price for some Adonis/Leoric (bromance/rivalry) and once Noir. finishes her alt... some Leoric and her alt art
I'll go in on this, too. 500 gold for some cool art of Cohen with his wand in hand, blasting fire.
ooo! oooo!! Do one of Poison pretty please? When you get ready to draw her, let me know and I shall give you as many details as I you want that I can think of
http://farm3.staticflickr.com/2875/1...0e97a16c_o.png
And so it begins. Here is a doodle I did while winding down. Solar gave me company.
It's Leoric at the bar! See? Beer! Totally sets the scene right?
knowing what happens next is critical... but i will leave it to the imagination... just remember he would not be allowed back here again
500 each for Steppenwolf, Sei, and Ciato.
1500 for a Family photo of all three, preferrably with a super happy Wolfy, confident looking Sei, and a Ciato that looks like he doesn't want to be there.
MOAR DOODLES!
http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3755/1...f668a48c_c.jpg
This time Fox and Solar joined me. This is not all that great but for 5 year hiatus from drawing I still have some skill hanging on.
I feel the snow falling in front of that picture adds a nice touch :p
Here is a new project I am working on. I'm attempting to color it with the new tabby.
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5488/1...841b4d0e_z.jpg