New Blood Bracket: oblueknighto vs. Falling With Style!
oblueknighto
Continuity 4
Setting 4
Pacing 5
Dialogue 6
Action 4
Remember, though you have listed in your profile that Blue can fire three arrows at rapid speed, that does not mean he can fire three arrows at once, which initially is what it seemed like he did.
Persona 4.5
Technique 4.5
When you write, try not to have “then” as the opening to a sentence, especially back to back sentences, it’s off grammatically, but I’m not sure as to what exactly the rule is regarding it.
You also switch between present and past tense multiple times.
Mechanics 6
Clarity 6
Wild Card 5
Falling with Style
Continuity 5
Who are you? Where did you come from? These types of questions help give light to continuity.
Setting 6.5
Pacing 6.5
Dialogue 7
Action 6.5
Persona 6
Technique 7
Mechanics 8
Clarity 7
Wild Card 6
Scores:
Oblueknighto: 49
Falling With Style: 65.5
Rewards:
Falling With Style: 575 exp | 150 gold
Oblue: 125 exp | 50 gold